Well, we had the most reviews ever for one chapter! Thanks so much everyone and here's the shout outs:
Angelica: Thanks! I got that from my reviewer AngelicWinds!
13TheAce: Lol, a lot of people were like that!
LongStoryBro: Lol, umm, does that mean you don't want all that? Lol, I like to keep everyone guessing a little too much, don't I?
Celeron96: Lol, I am. Do you really think I would kill Jack…..again?
AngelicWinds: I'm so sad that you're leaving! I'll miss you so much!
TWI1IGHTMAST3R: Yep, she's a servant of Darkness now. You'll find out what he did to her this chapter. You have until the next update to promise me you will or I am unleashing Mist on you. After you read the chapter, you will understand why you should be scared of her!
Shadowdragon317: You'll find out, and thanks! I reviewed, or at least I think I did.
TheEighthLight: Lol, and yes, I can't believe it.
Gohan Roxas: Yes, it's major. It isn't her darkness though, I'm not using that card again.
Dag-gum, that was the longest shout outs EVER! Not that I'm complaining, lol. I hope we reach 300 by the end of the story! I own the Rikkisons and Mist.
Chapter 10: Light Finds Darkness
"Mist?!" Jack exclaimed. He looked in absolute horror as the love of his life stared at him with darkness-filled eyes. "What did Marek do to you?" he whispered, horrified. Mist smiled.
"He opened my eyes and showed me who the superior was between you two. I have to admit, he is quite….passionate." she whispered the last word naughtily.
"Mist, he's controlling you!" Jack yelled angrily. (Jack's Theme 2{The Truth Revealed, FFX})
She shook her head and lowered her sword as a dark portal opened up next to her. Jack growled in anger as Marek walked out smirking. "Brother." he greeted. Jack raised his blade, but found Mist's sword at his throat. "She is quite feisty, isn't she?" Marek continued, smiling evilly.
"You are lower than the lowest Darkness, Marek. You steal Father, you kidnap my master, and you brainwash my girl. What kind of sick bastard are you?!" Jack burst out angrily. Marek frowned at the name Jack called him.
"I assure you, I did not force her to my side. The first few hours we spent together were, albeit, one-sided. It wasn't until I realized that she wasn't alone that I decided I could actually use her." he explained civilly. Jack narrowed his eyes in suspicion.
"What do you mean she wasn't alone?" he demanded. Marek smiled as Mist patted her stomach. Jack's mouth dropped in shock for just a second. He quickly looked at his brother angrily.
"Do you mean to tell me that you want my child?!" he exclaimed furiously. Despite Mist holding her sword at his neck, he lunged at his enemy. Marek spun around quickly, hitting Jack in the face with a roundhouse kick. Jack took it to the face and flew backward. His nose was broken and bleeding uncontrollably, and his right eye instantly swelled shut. Marek stood over him and frowned.
"I never would have thought that my goody-goody brother would have done that with a girl. How old were you when it happened?" he taunted. Jack decided not to indulge him.
"There's a lot you don't know about me!" he screamed over the sound of the storm. Marek kicked him in the face again, sending him back to the floor. Jack got on his knees and spit blood onto the floor, before staring at his brother defiantly. Marek just laughed evilly.
"You pride yourself on being the perfect soldier. You can scale walls, buildings, and cliffs. You took on Xehanort. Let me ask another question: how did that work out for you?" he said casually. Jack didn't reply, but his eyes were beginning to turn yellow. (end Jack's Theme 2)
WITHIN JACK'S MIND…..
(Counterattack, Dissidia 012)
Jack grunted as he was pushed back by the older man. "Give in and let me take over, boy! I can get her back, and I can end him if you would just use the Darkness!" Xehanort exclaimed. Jack determinedly jumped back to his feet and charged again.
"I won't let you take control again, old man!" he roared as their blades clashed. He rolled under a volley of Blizzard spells and jumped into the air as Xehanort summoned a pillar of earth to come up from the black ground. Jack yelled as he came crashing down to the ground and sliced Xehanort across the chest. The old man staggered back, but managed to hit Jack in the face with his fist. Jack lurched back and clutched his right eye. He took his hand away, and his right eye, the one amidst his scar, shut and didn't open. He gave a yell of anger as he threw his blade straight at the old master. Xehanort threw his hands up to shield his face, but the blade went through him and did the damage. Xehanort clutched his chest as he began to fade again.
"One day soon, boy, I will take control." he said defiantly as he disappeared.
THE CROSSROADS, ABANDONED BUILDING….
Jack stood to his feet. His right eye that Marek had kicked was shut for good. Jack knew it wouldn't ever open again. Mist watched silently as Marek summoned Darkness' Embrace and Jack raised Wanderer's Call.
"You wanna know something funny, brother?" Jack asked, breathing rapidly. "Your whole style is taken from when I was trapped in Darkness. Not even your Keyblade is your own!" he declared. Marek grit his teeth in anger as he held up his hand. The storm immediately ceased, and he lowered his hand as several dark portals opened at once. (end Counterattack)
All of Marek's allies, except for the knight attacking Twilight Town, stood behind their leader. Marek turned to the Tidus look-alike and the shirtless white haired man. "Shuyin, Weiss, take her home and be gentle. She is carrying my child, after all." he said, staring at Jack tauntingly. Shuyin and Weiss stepped toward Mist as Jack rose to his feet. Barthandelus and Golbez prepared to fight him, but Marek held up his hand.
"What would you have us do, Illusion?" asked the king. Illusion turned to him.
"Miraz, return to your world. As soon as Garland takes Twilight Town, We will begin to take the other worlds. Shuyin, Weiss, get her home now." he ordered. Everyone followed his orders and disappeared. Shuyin and Weiss led Mist toward a dark portal as Jason stared pityingly at Jack. Jack suddenly shoved Jason out of the way and lunged for the two villains. He knocked them away with one swing apiece and tried to grab Mist, who struggled with him.
"Let me go!" she screamed. Jack stared at her in disbelief. Marek took a step toward Jack angrily.
"You won't have my child!" Jack declared. Marek smiled and held out his hand.
"That child is the key….to everything, Brother. Don't you see yet? Now that Mist has a portion of my darkness, and the baby has your share of Light, you must know what that child is destined to become!" he exclaimed. Jack slowly lowered his blade in shock. He quickly found his senses again though. He was finding it hard to hold Mist with one arm. She had dropped her blade, but was trying to break his hold on her.
"Marek, mark my words: I will NOT let you use my child to forge the true X-blade!" he roared. Marek smiled.
"You still don't get it! That child is a mix of Light and Darkness! IT ALREADY IS THE X-BLADE!" he screamed passionately. Jack shook his head.
"Whatever is going on in that sick mind of yours, I don't care. Keep Jason. I'm taking Mist, and my child home!" he declared. Marek angrily moved to stop him, but Jack shot a missile of Light from his Keyblade. There was a massive explosion, and when the Jason and Marek looked around for Jack and Mist, they were gone.
A lot more info to digest and I'm sorry. I hope you liked it regardless, and I hope you plan on reviewing. I also have question for you, even though I probably should have thought of this already. After you review, please go straight to my profile page and vote on my poll. THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT OUT OF ALL MY POLLS BEFORE. It will determine the gender of Jack and Mist's child, which will eventually become a major part of the story. So, anyway thanks for reading, please review and bye.
