To Sashie11: I've never really watched Kobato, sorry! But I do know it has a similar premise, but I believe hers is little candies for her guard demon cursed as a dog toy? But no, my story is based off the tale of Hoshi and her town with the falling stars. I wanted to incorporate some familial heritage into a story, so why not a Chinese Lucky Star story? I mean, Marinette's half Chinese, it fits well.
To Storylady35: I understand what you mean, I wasn't a fan of how I wrote out chapter 1 either. To be honest, that was a rough draft, I meant to edit it but had forgotten when I posted the first chapter of Monster's Gift, I had wanted the updates of these two stories to be intertwined, so I did a rush-update and forgot to edit beforehand. I update one then a minute later I update the other. I'm glad chapter two made up for it!
Dragon Lord Draco: I just have to say, getting comments from you is the highlight of my day, I love when I get a review notification in general, but yours always make me smile!
I hope you all enjoy this chapter!
Marinette sat at her desk, a pad of paper and pen in hand. Tapping the back of said pen to her chin in thought.
She was debating if she should tell her friends what's going on or not. On one hand, she'd have somebody to tell her what was different about the two worlds. On the other, they would know that she wasn't their Marinette. They would know she's an outsider.
Should she tell this mom and dad? Maybe they'd understand… Or they could kick her out and leave her on the street! They could tell everyone what's going on and nobody would verbally make wishes thus making her trapped in this world forever!
Her imagination overreacted as usual and showed the devastating idea in a comedic way on an imaginary blackboard.
She had names written on the pad of paper as well as a correlating wish.
She looked at the pad thoughtfully.
-Alya- meet Piáo Chóng
-Theo Barbot- Get out of the rain
-Alix Kubdel- Get people stop talking about chloe
She had a dark blue and two green stars to sort through. She decided to start with the dark blue, already having an idea on who it beloved to. She unraveled the star and felt the magic wrap around her body.
She was looking at Piáo Chóng. 'I wish I can say goodbye to her' she heard Tikki's voice.
Oh, this was when Piáo Chóng came to help with Alya's wish. Marinette still felt incredibly selfish for how jealous she was that day.
As the magic left and she was back in her room she added to the list.
- Tikki- Say goodbye
Now the two green stars. Marinette had two ideas on who they could belong to, but the only way she could know was if she opened it herself.
She flipped the container gently, the two paper stars fluttered down softly, settling gently in her palm.
She grabbed the corner of one of the stars and pulled the first tab out. As she unraveled it completely she was met with walking in the school hallway.
"You know, I just kind of wish that Marinette could talk to me… You know?" She watched through the eyes of the wisher, they looked at Nino as they walked. "She just always seems to be afraid of me… I want us to be friends...at least." Wait! She knew this voice! It was Adrien! Oh gosh! She granted Adrien's wish!
Wait… Adrien's wish was for her to talk to him? He actually kinda...liked her?
The vision ended with her hearing Chloe yell "ADRIKIIIIINS!"
Marinette was awestruck, she had a shocked expression as she wrote.
- Adrien- to talk
Since the first green Lucky star was his than this last one must be as well.
Marinette had a nervous sweat form on the back of her neck.
What was this next wish?