1chapter 10

TO my precious reviewers, I'm gonna be updating probably a little better than before, I had to spend 7 days in a mental hospital, fun huh? Nearly attempted suicide. (Key word, nearly) Lolz, with writing like mine I'll be the next amazingly good misunderstood writer, like cutting off an ear or something (remind you of anyone), though I'm a bit squeamish. Lolz. Well, umm... I think I'll be able to write better too cuz the meds they have me on is working pretty well.

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Chapter 10- Mara

"Sesshomaru, I love you too."

While heading back to the castle with Kagome's unconscious tattered body cradled in his arms Sesshomaru could think of nothing bust how much he wanted her to be his. Nearing the gates of his western castle, he picked up the light scent of blood. Not Kagome's, but of another. He could not distinctly match the blood with its precise owner but, never the less he headed off in search of the fallen being. As he drew closer, he could tell that it was a female, young, about Kagome's age, she seemed to be incredibly distressed and immobile. Once he had found the young woman he recognized her immediately, it was Mara, the Taiyoukai of the East's daughter. She looked as if she'd been tortured, and from by the way she was trembling he could tell she was terrified too.

Crouching down he asked, "Mara, are you all right?"

Silently she shook her head no.

"What ails you? Do you want me to take you back to my home for treatment or do you want me to take you back to your father?"

Suddenly a look of horror twisted upon her face as tears fell from her eyes. She looked very beaten up but had not been raped or sodomized as far as he could see and smell, but the blood, oh the blood, it was so overpowering it even made him nauseated, and sick from the coppery scent.

Slowly she opened her mouth to show him what was wrong, every other tooth was missing, it looked as if they had been ripped straight out of the sockets without any warning, leaving her gums bloody and raw.

Sesshomaru didn't need any more convincing. Mara's father had done this to her. He'd most likely liven up to his famous temper. He didn't even care when he killed his own wife. He could still remember the face, a malicious angry grin on his face and bloody eyes. He had, had his own wife, mate, the person in his life who should have been treated with the highest respect unless she created a problem and needed to be punished. How any person could do that was an animal beyond belief, it even sickened him, Sesshomaru Taiyoukai of the western lands.

How he could do this to Mara, just about the only person who'd ever been spared by her fathers sick cruel mind had been nearly slaughtered by her own father, no it wasn't he, Sesshomaru couldn't smell him. 'I bet that haughty bastard had people ordered to kill his only daughter. nasty fucker, his anger finally got the best of him, the inevitable as it may seem. I will avenge his daughter and protect her, with kagome at my side, I cant just leave her to die here, even, I think that is wrong, she is of royal blood, deserves better than being left out here to be used however any passer Byers want.'

leaning down sesshomaru easily picked up the slim body of the Eastern Princess, propping her up beside kagome in his arms as he took off full speed for his castle making it there in mere seconds.

Hearing her lord arriving to the castle Surauna rushed to the entrance, "Milord, oh my gosh, what has happened?"

with a stern look on his face he said, "take Mara and have the castle physicians tend to her wounds," handing her limp weak body over to Surauna, "if anything shall disturb us, it will be your head."

those word emitted a fearful gasp from Surauna, 'did he really mean it? Of course he did, I should never underestimate my lord.' she thought frantically.

Sesshomaru sped to the bathing quarters of his castle, laying kagome's blood soaked body on a nearby bedding. Leaning over her, Sesshomaru gingerly began to remove her clothing. Starting with her shirt, using his claws, lightly brushing against the seams of her shirt, it fell to pieces in his hands. Peeling the shreds off of her body, making sure not to hurt her.

Next, Sesshomaru carefully removed her pants, the same way as he'd removed her shirt, except it caused her a slight discomfort, moaning in pain filled protest tears stinging the corners of her eyes, her face twisting into an agonizing form. Resembling paintings and grotesque pictures of people dying in mass genocide from demons ripping them apart.

The second Surauna layed Mara down emitting a scream of terror from her. The shriek startled a great deal of workers. This was bad, she looked as if she'd been badly traumatized...

hahaaaa I decided to cut it off for u so u can all suffer! hmm, im curious as to what could have happened to that poor girl, too bad you guyz wont know for a while mwahahaha! I already have a few ideas in my head hmph! And yeah, I decided to work my ass off and make my chapter longer, and more descriptive, and am trying really hard to have good grammar and stuff but my word, though good new and updated, is miraculously crap because no one knows how to use it 'cuz we're all computer defective, unintelligent monkeys who sadly have done nothing from the start to protect this beautiful and expensive peice of equiptment from harm.

Btw I wont put up a new chappie until I have 130 reviews, or maybe I'll even settle for 125. :) .