REDO OF THE END OF THE LAST CHAPTER. I READ NUMAIR'S ENDING AND IT WAS HORRIBLE! SO I REWROTE THE ENDING!
"We'll talk later, when your well. Even though you are under the influence of potions you should know better" Daine winced knowing how much the beatings and whips would burn.
"Please, Orzone, let me explain...." Daine started to get out of bed but Orzone sent a flash of green fire that pinned her down. Tears streaked her cheeks. She struggle against the magic, using all her will in a attempt to break free. "Guards!" Orzone yelled down the hall. He settled himself at the foot of the bed and watch Daine's struggling. Angarus stood frozen and undecided. "My Lord" He began, but Orzone cut in. "Stop sniveling and let me watch what is mine. Seven guards entered the room. "Take this Mage to the Execution room, and ask everyone to meet in the square." One of the guards reached tentatively toward Angarus, whose eyes where blazing.
"I shall not go" The mage waved the soldiers back and they obeyed, watching Orzone for instructions. The magic pinning Danie tightened. She gasped for air, choking madly. Angarus met Orzone's eyes the walked to the guards. They surrounded him and walked out. "No! Let me go!" Daine screamed struggling against the restraints. Orzone stood up smiling. He turned to the slave. "Dress and bring her to the square."
***
Tears streaked Daine's cheeks. She was chained to a chair, the bindings tight. A crowd of people gathered before the dais, all staring as Orzone explained what happened. She could feel the gasps as Orzone mentioned the kiss. Then the guards brought Angarus. But Daine saw Numair. She saw her teacher struggling, yet Angarus walked with a calm stride. She saw him begging, although Angarus only smiled at her. She watched as the ax was brought down on top of Numair's head, although it was Angarus's head that hit the wooden floor.
It was her who was screaming. It was her who was thrown down on the floor next to the still bleeding body. Her who was beaten by her fiancee by Orzone to prove he was in command. Her who begged for mercy.
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Numair jerked up when his shutters slammed open. He sat up slowly to close them. He didn't really mind the cold, but Alanna had been on his back for the last year to start caring again. Numair had been hurt before, but this time it hurt. He hadn't realized it till she almost killed him, but he had never let anyone in after Orzone. Get close. Sure he joked around, and let it seem like it, but in truth he cared about them like friends. But Daine, when she'd betrayed him he'd realized just how much in love with her he'd been. Alanna didn't realize that not caring prevented pain. "Numair" The voice rang in his memory. Numair spun around and met eyes with a pale being.
Immediately he knew she'd killed him. Angarus. "Mithos, I'm sorry" Arram whispered. But the figure was shaking it's head furiously. A ghostly hand reached out and touched Arram shoulder. "You should have kept writing. Rather than keep this burden to yourself. She good, Arram. I saw it in her eyes" A blast of wind raced through the room, tearing the apparition to mist.
Arram was Numair again. Old and Tired. He collapsed on the bed. "If she's so good, then why did she let you die?" It was the first time Numair found the cold.
YEPPERS! I KNOW IT'S SHORT BUT I'M GIVING U TWO CHAPTERS! BTW IF ANYONE DIDN'T GET IT...... Orzone beheaded Angarus but in Daine's mind it was Numair. Angarus visited Numair before going to the black-gods realm. Any questions? Review in that little box down there..... or email me at stargirl_rebels@hotmail.com
Lya
"We'll talk later, when your well. Even though you are under the influence of potions you should know better" Daine winced knowing how much the beatings and whips would burn.
"Please, Orzone, let me explain...." Daine started to get out of bed but Orzone sent a flash of green fire that pinned her down. Tears streaked her cheeks. She struggle against the magic, using all her will in a attempt to break free. "Guards!" Orzone yelled down the hall. He settled himself at the foot of the bed and watch Daine's struggling. Angarus stood frozen and undecided. "My Lord" He began, but Orzone cut in. "Stop sniveling and let me watch what is mine. Seven guards entered the room. "Take this Mage to the Execution room, and ask everyone to meet in the square." One of the guards reached tentatively toward Angarus, whose eyes where blazing.
"I shall not go" The mage waved the soldiers back and they obeyed, watching Orzone for instructions. The magic pinning Danie tightened. She gasped for air, choking madly. Angarus met Orzone's eyes the walked to the guards. They surrounded him and walked out. "No! Let me go!" Daine screamed struggling against the restraints. Orzone stood up smiling. He turned to the slave. "Dress and bring her to the square."
***
Tears streaked Daine's cheeks. She was chained to a chair, the bindings tight. A crowd of people gathered before the dais, all staring as Orzone explained what happened. She could feel the gasps as Orzone mentioned the kiss. Then the guards brought Angarus. But Daine saw Numair. She saw her teacher struggling, yet Angarus walked with a calm stride. She saw him begging, although Angarus only smiled at her. She watched as the ax was brought down on top of Numair's head, although it was Angarus's head that hit the wooden floor.
It was her who was screaming. It was her who was thrown down on the floor next to the still bleeding body. Her who was beaten by her fiancee by Orzone to prove he was in command. Her who begged for mercy.
*(
Numair jerked up when his shutters slammed open. He sat up slowly to close them. He didn't really mind the cold, but Alanna had been on his back for the last year to start caring again. Numair had been hurt before, but this time it hurt. He hadn't realized it till she almost killed him, but he had never let anyone in after Orzone. Get close. Sure he joked around, and let it seem like it, but in truth he cared about them like friends. But Daine, when she'd betrayed him he'd realized just how much in love with her he'd been. Alanna didn't realize that not caring prevented pain. "Numair" The voice rang in his memory. Numair spun around and met eyes with a pale being.
Immediately he knew she'd killed him. Angarus. "Mithos, I'm sorry" Arram whispered. But the figure was shaking it's head furiously. A ghostly hand reached out and touched Arram shoulder. "You should have kept writing. Rather than keep this burden to yourself. She good, Arram. I saw it in her eyes" A blast of wind raced through the room, tearing the apparition to mist.
Arram was Numair again. Old and Tired. He collapsed on the bed. "If she's so good, then why did she let you die?" It was the first time Numair found the cold.
YEPPERS! I KNOW IT'S SHORT BUT I'M GIVING U TWO CHAPTERS! BTW IF ANYONE DIDN'T GET IT...... Orzone beheaded Angarus but in Daine's mind it was Numair. Angarus visited Numair before going to the black-gods realm. Any questions? Review in that little box down there..... or email me at stargirl_rebels@hotmail.com
Lya