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Chapter 10
A welcome to Petalburg
Will was brought round to his consciousness at what he thought was 3 in the afternoon but he wasn't sure. He could feel his nose was broken and when he touched his left eye it really hurt.
He sat up and realized he was in a room. He got up and went to the hallway.
"HELLO!" he shouted.
He instantly heard footsteps running up a flight of stairs. It was May with pure hatred in her eyes. She was soon followed by Ash and Brock trying to hold her back.
"Whoa! May stop." Ash said straining against her.
"He said he hated my noodles! I will kill him!" She shouted.
"What! You made them?" Will asked stepping back.
He put his hand in his pocket and brought out a small bag.
"Ash, Brock let go." Will said narrowing his eyebrows.
They did and May ran at him. He chucked the bag at her and she instantly fell over… knocking him over.
"Ow." Will said getting up.
"What was in that bag?" Ash asked checking may was breathing. She was.
"Stun powder, from the stun spore of a Shiftree." Will said rubbing the back of his head. "Now start talking. Why do I have a broken nose and why do I have a bad eye?"
They both snickered. "May punched you twice." Ash said hiding a smile.
"And that bad eye is a black eye." Brock said smiling.
"How is she that strong?" Will asked confused.
"Uh, sorry to interrupt but what should we do with her now?" Ash asked.
"Dispose of her." Will said.
"We can't do that, we take her to her mum." Brock said picking her up and swinging her over his shoulder.
"So we are in Petalburg." Will said.
"Yeah." Ash said. "Hey, should Brock actually carry her that way?"
"That or bridal style." Will said. "Frankly which way would May prefer, hmm?"
"Good point." Ash said as they both followed Brock.
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