Greetings my fellow readers.
(Ok.. that was stupid... 'cause like my english teacher kept on saying: when you greet someone, greet them as if they were presidents or ministers or kings or queens... and my friends and I have been making that joke to everyone for the last 24 hours....... Ok... you probably think that I'm crazy.. well, I'm not... just freakin' mad at my art teacher who decided to give us a freakin' hard test!!!... if you wanna know why... just send me an e-mail..... I won't bother you any longer...!!!)
Well, I must thank, now and once again, AMERBELLA and FORTUNEPRINCESS, who on the first day I published my chapter, had already left a review!!! ( You guys are the greatest readers anyone could have!!!! Love you guys soooooo much!!!!!!!). Big thanks to STELLA ROCKS ,STELLA777 and LOVELYTWEETY95 as well (your reviews warmed my heart!!!)
Their reviews:
Yey new chapter, really good, it just keeps getting better! please please PLEASE update soon!
luv Amerbella x x x x (Thank you, you are toooooooo kind!!!! Love ya!!!)
this waz a very awesome story you r a genius. keep writing it is great so far . it is so great i have over 100 friends and i am going to tell them to read and review right now . u rock keep writing and updating. (stella777) (thank you very much!!! I'll be waiting for more of your reviews!!!! ^.^)
again cliffhanger. but lovely... please update soon... i can't wait to see them kissed. (Fortuneprincess) (thankies!!!! I understand you want to see them kiss... but I'm taking it slowly... but don't worry, they will... eventually (sp???? you might think I'm stupid.. but I'm not such a dummy... just lazy!!! ~.^))
ur story is so nice!u r talented!keep on writing!i will be reading and reviewing for you!hope to see many more chapter as soon as possible!:) (lovelytweety95) (Awww... why thank you!!! Keep reviewing!!!! ^.^)
I know some of you says "Baltor", you know that dark evil wizard? Well.... I always said Valtor... so I'm just gonna keep going with Valtor.. alright?? ('cause in RAI they call him Valtor and in 4kids, they call him Baltor... complicated but.. yeah...)
I also want to apologize for the way my dialogs are written. Indeed, in English, I just noticed that you mostly write dialogs with quotes... I write them with a - I'm sorry for that... I'll continue that way though.. please forgive me!!!!!!!!! I love you all, please keep reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now, let's continue with the story...!!!!
Night has fallen on Solaria. The stars were bright like always and so was the gorgeous moon. Stella was at one of her favourite places ever in the castle... or out the castle. Indeed, she was on the roof. Her hair was blowing in the wind and her eyes were filled with sadness. She was in a cute mini-skirt, the color of a sunset on a beach and was wearing a tanktop with stars randomly decorating it. Around her neck was a crystal necklace that her mother gave to her. She also had the Solaria's ring. She wasn't wearing any shoes. She wanted to feel the breeze on her feet. Although the wind was present, it was pretty warm. Of course what she was thinking about was Brandon... always Brandon... and her friends, her great friendly friends. Sometimes, she even heard their voices calling her. Everytime she looked back, they weren't there, just a memory... a reflection... a mirage... And Brandon... She, at times, feel his touch... an imagination. Like, just then, on the roof, she felt like Brandon had put his hand on her shoulder.
-Brandon, she whispered softly.
-No, Valtor.
Stella turned around and saw this tall man who skin looked like the skin of a vampire. He looked really thin as well. He was elegantly dressed... but Stella could sensed a dark magic coming from him. As once, she stood up and backed away from him. She asked firmly:
-Who are you? And what do you want?
-I said it. I'm Valtor. And it is not about what I want, but what you want.
-What I want? repeated quietly Stella.
-Yes. What your heart truly desires... You love that boy named Brandon... right?
Stella looked at him blankly. How did he know that I love Brandon?
-If I do... what are you going to do about it?
Valtor laughed and replied:
-I thought I could help you. I could give you powers to get him back to you.... but in exchange... I wanna taste a small part of Solaria's power.
-I rather be killed than to betray my planet... STELLA MAGIX!
(Song starts playing.... XD... kidding!!)
Stella was now floating in the air with her scepter in hand. Valtor was standing on the roof, ready to fight.
-My dear princess... are you sure you want to settle things this way? We could simply talk and get what we want, said Valtor with a smile that Stella did not like.
-You want me to betray my planet? In your dreams, Valtor!! Solar Dust!!!!
Without a single bit of effort, he dodged her attack.
-Powerful... but not enough to beat me. Join me, your highness, your life will flow without pain, but if not...
A dark purple energy circled his hands.
-You'll have to be crushed slowly... in my hands.
Stella looked at his hands, then into his eyes. All the sudden, she felt dizzy... really dizzy... She began by falling on the roof... weak. Her scepter fell down the roof. She reached out a hand to catch it, but instead, her body followed the scepter. Valtor appeared right next to her as she fell down.
-You'll help me now?
-Never, whispered Stella.
Valtor smiled and replied:
-I won't let you die... I want you to suffer... princess of Solaria...
Stella closed her eyes and let herself get taken by Valtor. She was not able to fight Valtor. He was powerful... too powerful... and she was weak... too weak to fight back. She wished she'd just die... but he, that wizard, wouldn't let her. As she finally started to feel all senses, she heard one last voice... the voice that sang to melody of her heart...
-What I truly desire... , she whispered just before falling deeply unconcious.
That voice she heard was no other than Brandon's. Yes, he was in Solaria and at that moment, he was rushing toward Valtor, who he did not know yet, with his broadsword tightly held. Behind him, were 4 flying fairies: Musa, Bloom, Flora and Tecna and four running specialists: Sky, Riven, Timmy and Helia. All had the same idea in head: Blast that evil wizard who was holding Stella. But before any of them could do a thing, Valtor laughed and disappeared in the mid-air. Brandon who was only a feet or two away from the evil sorcerer fell on the ground and, with his fists, he hit the ground. He was blaming himself for letting Stella get abducted like that. If only...
-Brandon, I know how you feel, said Sky who finally arrived next to Brandon. I...
-You don't know how I feel like, alright? interrupted abruptly Brandon. You know nothing about how I am feeling right now! I feel pain... sadness... fury... negative emotions! I'm blaming myself? Have YOU ever blame yourself? Have you ever lose someone closed to your heart? You're a prince. You have your family! My mother died when I was 10, remember? My father went to war and I never saw him again, remember? That's why I'm a squire... I have no family! Nothing! Now I just found someone closer to my heart than anyone I've met so far... and guess what? She just got kidnapped! Thanks to who? To me!
Brandon, then, broke in tears. He couldn't stop himself from crying. Sky just stood there... maybe Brandon was right... maybe he knew nothing about his pain... He turned around and saw Flora who was whining in Helia's arms, Musa who used Riven's shoulder, Bloom and Tecna who hugged each other as they cried and Timmy who was trying to make Tecna feel a little better. Nobody moved for hours and soon, the sky got brighter and the beautiful sun of Solaria lighted the main entrance of the palace. All the sudden, King Radius, Stella's father, rushed outside of his castle and asked:
-Where is Stella? I've been searching for her for hours!
The young students all looked at him and Sky walked up to the King and bowed:
-Your majesty. I'm prince Sky of Eraklyon.
-Oh, yes! I remember you! What are you doing here?
-I came, along with my friends, to take Stella back to Alfea, but...
-What? But what? What happened to Stella!?
-She got... She has been taken away by a strange man... Tall, pale...
King Radius suddenly fainted. Of course, it was his very precious little baby that was taken away...
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As the king woke up, he saw Bloom, Sky and Flora around his bed along with a dozen of servants. He brought his hand to his head and whispered:
-What a bad dream...
Flora closed her eyes and said softly:
-It wasn't a dream, your majesty.
King Radius closed his eyes and cried quietly. As everybody was whining, crying, sobbing or something alike, the door of King Radius' room swang open and a man, a woman and a young girl rushed in.
-Radius! My friend! said the man as he came to hug Radius tightly.
The woman and the girl stood there doing nothing... just looking at the scene. Tecna walked over to them and with a small voice she asked the girl:
-Uhh... Who are you? Why are you dressed like this?
The girl looked at her outfit which was a large gown difficult to walk with. Her eyes were turquoise and her hair was brown. She had dark skin and she looked quite pretty. She finally decided to answer:
-I'm princess Layla of Andros. I'm dressed like THIS because I'm a PRINCESS!
-Your manners, Layla.
-Yes, mother.
Tecna backed away and stood next to Musa who was still crying. She saw Layla whispering a few words to her mother, then, Layla walked toward them.
-Sorry for before...
Tecna smiled as a forgiveness sign and Layla continued:
-What's going on around here? Why is everybody so down!?
Musa. as she cried even louder, said:
-Stella, you know... Solaria's princess, got kidnapped by a man who looked very evil and...
-What Musa is trying to say is that Solaria's princess was taken away by a man and well, that's why everybody is very very deeply pained..., reformulated Tecna as she tried to recomfort Musa.
Layla looked down, then she whispered:
-Friends are great.... I only had one...
Tecna and Musa looked at her. Layla looked back and turned away right away. She didn't like people looking at her that way...
-Uhh... Sorry if we are annoying you, "your highness", said Tecna as she turned away.
Musa simply kept on crying and Flora finally walked toward them and said:
-Hello princess.... uhh...
-Layla, said Tecna as she decided to walk away. Princess... If you are not here to help us... then go away...
Layly glanced at Tecna and yelled:
-LAYLA MAGIX!
Her gown transformed into a beautiful green fairy outfit.
-I want to help, alright? But I believe you are not good enough for me, Tecna! Jealous?
Tecna tighten her teeth and yelled:
-TECNA MAGIX!
Her fairy outfit was mostly modern... afterall she's the fairy of technology...
-I'm ready whenever you are!
Layla smiled and said:
-Let's go rescue Stella then!
Tecna looked at her and said stupidly:
-I thought you were going to test me.... you know... like a fight...
Layla laughed and said:
-Silly... If I hurt you... how could you go save your friend??
Tecna smiled shyly.
-PRINCESS LAYLA GET BACK HERE AT ONCE!
Layla sighed and said:
-No mother... I'm going... I want to live MY life...
-Yes mam'... let her go! said Tecna defensively.
-We'll all be going... you have nothing to fear! said Flora calmly. See... FLORA MAGIX!
She was now in a beautiful shiny pink dress and had a adorable flower necklace around her neck.
-MUSA MAGIX!
Musa was all dressed-up in red and looked sparkling.
-See mam' nothing to worry about! said, for once, cheerfully Musa.
The queen sighed and gave a sign that she let them go.
-Come on Bloom! Transform! said Flora.
-I... I can't... I never did before... but I'll tag along!
-We will too, said the boys all together.
-Alright then! Stella here we come! said Layla as she flew out the window along with all the others... well... the boys and Bloom jumped out the window.....
END OF THE CHAPTER!!
This is not the best chapter... and sure there was not alot of StellaxBrandon moment, but I promise a better chapter next time!!!!! Please review!!! and Thanks for reading!!!!!!
Sakuralinh
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