I am so glad you all like this story. Seeing as it is my first attempt to write a story on FanFiction, it makes me so happy :)
Disclaimer: Twilight characters belong to Stephanie Meyer; I just changed some things and added some of my own characters.
BPOV
I couldn't believe what I was seeing. There was a girl standing on the other side holding a garment bag, grinning up at that peephole.
I opened the door and before I could get any words out of my mouth, she just walked into the apartment and right past me.
"Bella, right?" she asked. She had to hold the garment bag over her head because she was so short, if she didn't it would drag on the floor. She had a suitcase that she was rolling behind her.
"Uh, yeah. Who are you?" I was almost speechless at this point.
"I'm Alice, Edward's sister. Remember, we kind-of met on the airplane. I was the one who took your seat" she reminded me.
"Oh yeah, I remember. I don't mean to be rude but why exactly are you here?" It might have come out rude but I really wasn't meaning for it to come out that way. I was just completely surprised by her being here.
"Here, I am supposed to have you read this before I say anything else. Strict orders!" and with that she handed me a folded note.
Dear Bella,
I am very sorry that I never answered your calls and texts, please forgive me.
I have my reasons. I knew if I would have answered, there is no way
I could have kept this surprise a secret.
I would also like to take the opportunity to apologize in advance for Alice.
You see, I am going to have refuse to except your decline because you
don't have the right ensemble.
Please don't be angry at me and I will see you at six.
Edward
I just kept rereading the note over and over until I felt it ripped from my hand. I looked up at Alice who was still grinning.
"Any questions? No, Good! Let's get started." She took my hand and yanked me up the stairs.
"Which one is yours?" she asked pointing at the doors.
I was still in a state of shock so I just pointed at my door. She started pulling me again and let herself into my room. She turned my vanity seat around and gently pushed my shoulders until I sat. My back was to the mirror and she informed me that I was not to look until the finished product. That's when the torture began.
EdPOV
I got to the apartment around 5:50 and I knocked on the door. Alice finally came and answered it, yelling at me to wait right where I was at, while she ran back up stairs.
She walked calmly back down about two minutes later with a huge grin on her face.
"I am so good, I surprise myself sometimes!" she said.
"Is Bella ready?" I couldn't keep my hands still, I kept fidgeting with them. In my pockets, on my hips, crossed.
"Are you nervous big brother? Wow, that's new. I don't think I have seen you so nervous since, well, I don't know when. You're not even this nervous on an airplane and that's saying a lot" she laughed.
"Come on Bella, if you don't get down here, I think my brother's head is going to explode" she yelled up the stairs. I reached out and pinched her.
"I can't! I think I am having an anxiety attack!" Bella yelled back.
"No you're not! And we did not just spend almost five hours getting you ready for you to back out. Now, get down her" Alice yelled, looking over and giving me a grin.
I heard footsteps slowly coming down the stairs. I looked up and saw her. She was wearing the dress Alice picked out earlier in the day but it looked like a completely different dress on her then it had on the hanger. It was a white satin dress that was fitted to her body and flared at the bottom. It only had one shoulder strap and in the back, it had a little sheer train that trailed behind her. Alice had left her hair down. It was gently wavy and she had it twisted back on the sides and clipped with a brooch clip. Her makeup was very minimal but it made her brown eyes even more beautiful if that was possible. She looked like she had just stepped out of an old twenties movie, she was classic.
She was looking down the entire time she was walking down the stairs and when she reached the bottom she slowly turned her eyes up to mine. I must have had a funny look on my face because she immediately blushed and started babbling.
"Is it too much? I told Alice it was too much but she wouldn't listen…" I put my hand to her mouth.
"You look breathtaking." I said with a smile. "Come on, let's go before you pass out!"
I looked back at Alice who wore the biggest grin. She raised her eyebrows at me and I mouthed Thank you to her. I grabbed Bella's arm, threaded it though mine, and we walked out the door.
Ok, so am I spending too much time describing stuff and it's getting boring? I am so worried about you guys being bored and 'get to point' running through your minds. I am a very descriptive person but sometimes the words don't come out right. I hope you are not getting bored and if you are, please let me know. Sorry if this is a short chapter. My computer is broken right now and I am borrowing my best friends. She will be here soon to get it, but I wanted to get this done and posted.