Okay this time I'm going to try and put every cat's P.O.V. but it might not work. I hope you like the story! Oh I've also been busy and this one is the cats outside the clans today.
Loudpaw-
Loudpaw knew he wasn't safe as cocky and arrogant he was. He knew his mentor would do anything to silence him. They might have gotten along before but that was then and this is now. He knew he was taking a chance by going though BreezeClan territory but it was closest to the twolegplace without Bloodstripe noticing! Then he hit another cat!
Moon-
'I can't believe those mouse-brains haven't found me!' Moon thought when a big brown cat practically ran her over falling on his head in the process. Moon jumped up ready for anything even though she was hurt.
Then she noticed it wasn't Sorrow or any of her goons. It was a small cat probably an apprentice but it was a lot bigger then a normal apprentice.
Loudpaw quivered and stuttered, "I-I'm s-s-so-sorry."
"I'll make you a deal help me
get to the nearest clan and I'll let you keep your ears," she
meowed even though she was in no position for clawing even an
apprentice's ears off. "What's your name?"
"Loudpaw and
I can take you to BreezeClan," Loudpaw murmured even though he was
scared on what Scarletstar would do to him.
Moon nodded.
Snowstorm-
"Help feed the tribe, she said. They'll help us, she said. Well I don't see the point of bringing a stupid tribe all the way here if we're just going to take down the clans from the inside," Snowstorm murmured to himself. 'The only good thing I get is Strawberry.'
Strawberry-
Strawberry gently padded though her home in the twolegplace. Those strays were now living temporarily with the tribe in the back of the forest where no cat would notice them. Not even the clan cats dare go near the gorge.
Pancake-
'I hope Doveflight doesn't over do it. I mean she is pregnant, with our kits but I guess I'm thinking on if I want to join her clan. What about Strawberry?' Pancake thought about his dear sister. 'On the other hand she wasn't very mothering and she has been acting strange by going outside more and talking to strays. She always said kittypets were too good to talk to strays. Hmmmm.'
Sorrow-
'All is going to go according to plan and by the next gathering those spoiled little kits wouldn't know what hit them,' Sorrow thought with glee. They would all suffer the same plan she had to and it doesn't feel pretty.
That night-
Darkheart watched Ravenwing leave the nursery to the fresh kill pile and his kits were playing near the entrance. His guess was that Ravenwing didn't tell them he turned traitor against the clan. They would be too curious to let meeting their own father go to waste.
'What are their names?' he wondered walking quietly over to them. "Hey, little ones."
They immediately stopped and perked their ears.
"Come here I ain't going to hurt you," Darkheart whispered.
The little white kit followed him into moor, next came the little black kit and after the little black kit came the one that was identical to him who was trailed by the fawn colored one that had white flecks on her back. They walked until they came to a rabbit's burrow where prey was least in supply.
"Who are you?" asked the white kit.
"I'm your father," Darkheart replied. "What are your names?"
"I'm Blizzardkit, the black one is Adderkit, the gray one is Duskkit and that's Fawnkit," Blizzardkit replied.
"Wait, a minute. So your not dead?" Adderkit asked looking at Darkheart doubtfully. "You can't be momma said you were a great warrior and that you died in battle and momma would never lie to us."
"I've made mistakes in my life mistakes that I regret and the one I regret most is the one on how I lost you and your mother's trust and I'm sorry but I want to be apart of your life if you do what I say then we can be one big happy family again!" Darkheart said convincingly.
