Erasels -
ERRMERRGERD This was awesome xD
I really liked chapter, didnt happen much but was still nice :D
I'm honored that you look out for my name first, thanks 3
Will we learn the names of the Kumo Shinobi, or are they just OC's?
(btw in the 6th row of the bottom you wrote Jumo not Kumo :p)
Thanks!
We'll learn the name names of one of the Kumo shinobi. The other one... not so much.
And thanks for the spelling correction!
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wow, I gotta say that this is a unique fic, and I love it for it, it's very good that NarutoxOC love (hope that theres Lemons) and how Naruto's mom hates him (my guess is that Minato kills her while being control by Edo-Tensei (or naruto awakening Susanoo), please continue, but I do have a question, why is this in the Naruto/Ayame section if this fic hasn't even mention her?
Thanks! And yes, there will be lemons.
By the way... If you're going to be clairvoyant, don't post the rest of the story in the reviews :P. You were a little off though. I'll let you find out how.
And about the Ayame thing... I was checking to see if you could actually put in four characters, so I tried it out to see. I thought I took them off, but FF decide to add them all back on... I don't know why only Ayame showed up. Sorry about that.
Thanks for the reviews guys!
Also. I'm going to switch this to a double pairing. The other girl won't come in this story, rather the sequel. Just as a warning though, she's not going to be from Naruto(The sequels are all going to be crossovers, and will eventually intersect with my other story, which will do the same crossover sequels).
-Chapter Juu(Thats ten for all you non-japanese speakin people out there)-
Shouki watched in boredom as the team of Kumo shinobi smashed into the pillar of rock a ways from where he was standing. He sighed before he stood up and walked to where the still settling cloud of dust floated, using chakra to stick to the steep incline.
He stopped at the edge of the shallow crater that the team had made with their impact, and watched as two of the teammates got up. The lasts body laid mangled and broken, having landed under the other two and as such received the brunt of the impact.
"Hi." He said. "I see you met the Kyuubi."
The blond looked up at him. "And who the hell are you?"
"Shouki Uzumaki. The demon you just fought used to be my brother."
"Yugito Nii." She responded. "And he might be good, but I wouldn't go so far as to call him a demon."
He laughed. "He's not as strong as he could be right now. Being trapped in a human body made him weaker."
"And you're telling me this... why?" She asked.
"Because, I think that we can come to an agreement. You want the spot, and I want the Kyuubi dead." He replied.
"And what are you going to do for a spot? I don't exactly trust someone that I just met thirty seconds ago to not stab me in the back." She said warily.
"I'll find my own. I don't really care about the exam as long as the demon's dead. Believe me, this works out better for both of us." He responded.
Eyeing him warily for a second, Yugito turned to her remaining teammate, giving him a questioning look. After a short pause and a curt nod, Yugito turned back around and nodded to the ninja standing in front of her. "Fine."
-With Konoha Team-
Sasuke sighed and stood up. Naruto spoke without looking at his teammate. "You sense something?"
The Uchiha nodded. "Three people, just behind the lip, seven o'clock." Without pause, Tsukiko disappeared. She had long since perfected the stealth jutsu to the point where she didn't need to use hand signs any more.
Naruto sighed, emulating Sasuke and standing up and turning to face the three people hiding behind the lip of the stone. As soon as he did so, the shinobi jumped into view.
Naruto sighed once again as he recognized the other shinobi. "Don't you guys ever learn?"
"I won't give up until my brothers body is laid to rest!" Shouki declared.
"Kami, don't you ever shut up?" Sasuke interjected. "You sound like a jealous ex-girlfriend."
"One who really likes killing shit I might add." Naruto said. "So, tell me, Shouki. For all you know about me, I know nothing about you.
"For instance," Naruto went on. "Let's start small. Who's your dad? Squirrel? Hamster? I can't tell, all I know is that it was some kind of small mammal. I mean, I didn't know Mom was into that kind of shit, but then... But then I met you."
There was a light glow from his arms and legs, before he blurred forward. He swung a kunai down at his half brothers head. "You son of a bitch!"
Naruto grinned as he blocked with his own kunai, seemingly bored. "That's something we can agree on."
With a wordless yell, the redhead pushed down even harder. "I'm going to tear your goddamn guts out!" He screamed.
Naruto laughed in response. "You're an inspiration for birth control." Before the other Uzumaki could respond, the blond moved to his right, throwing his half brother off balance. As the younger boy fell forward, his brother delivered a knee to his opponents face.
There was a loud crunch as Shouki flew backwards. At the same time, the shadows behind the two Kumo ninja gave way to Tsukiko. As she closed in on Yugito, Sasuke ran towards the other shinobi.
"Shomei, don't hold back. I'll deal with this one, then help you!" She called. Her teammate, now identified as Shomei, nodded. Yugito once again called on her bijuu's chakra, aiming to end the fight quickly. She ran forward and swung a hand cloaked in youkai at the Uchiha's chest.
Tsukiko made a film of her own demonic chakra over her own hand, thin enough as to be almost invisible. She grabbed the blonde's arm, then rammed a kunai into her chest with her free hand.
Yugito jumped back, then ripped out the kunai and coughed out blood. "H-How the fuck can you touch me without getting burned?"
Tsukiko ignored her, instead letting a small pout show on her face. "Aww, I missed anything important."
Trying to catch her off guard, Yugito ran forward and threw a punch at the black haired girl. Said kunoichi promptly caught the punch, then swiped with a kunai and left a long shallow line of blood. Yugito then repeated the action, and received the same result.
As this continued, the third Raikage lookalike, Shomei, met Sasuke half way. A partially complete cloak of lightning covered him as Sasuke tried to sweep his legs out. He jumped over the leg and threw a punch at the Uchiha's face. The raven haired boy saw the fist coming with his sharingan, and moved his head out of the way.
Sasuke punched the Kumo shinobi in the chest, then followed up with a kick to the stomach. The browned skinned boy flew backwards, then flipped and landed on his feet. Before he could completely recover, Sasuke jumped forward and brought his foot down in an axe kick.
Shomei barely dodged, and stumbled to the side. He was unable to get out of the way of the punch that followed, and once again stumbled back.
Naruto stood impassively as Shouki got up off the ground. He noted that he had in fact broken his half-brothers nose, evidenced by the fact that said redhead had a hand trying to staunch the bleeding coming from his olfactory organ.
Shouki glared at the blond. "If you keep pissing me off, I'm not going to hold back."
Naruto cocked an eyebrow. "So you were holding back when you were yelling about killing me? Kind of counterproductive you know." The same fury from before came to Shouki's face, and he once again shot forward at the Konoha shinobi. He launched a flurry of punches and kick with no real form or coordination. Naruto just watched him as his tails intercepted every fist and foot sent his way.
Suddenly, Naruto reached out and grabbed the other boy by the throat. He saw Sasuke deliver a knockout punch to the Kumo shinobi, and Yugito stop moving as she was caught in a tsukuyomi.
"Alright, it was funny the first few times, but now it's just getting annoying. Time for you to shut up."
His grip tightened as he prepared to break Shouki's neck. Before he could, an explosion of chakra threw the boy out of his hand. He would have been blasted away as well, but his tails slammed into the ground and dug in.
He looked over to see the Nibi's chakra exploding out from Yugito. Her bones snapped and reformed as her body adjusted to four legs. Chakra leaked out of her until it surrounded her and formed an opaque second skin.
"Well... I guess I get to meet the Nibi." Naruto sighed.
A/N: Well, happy mothers day guys! That's assuming any of you guys are mothers XD. Well, I hope you enjoyed the chapter and sorry for the late update.