Thanks Duskpool and everyone for the encouraging reveiws and how you think they are good! I may not respond to them much but I read them and whenever I'm upset, I read throuh them. You all make me smile. I had a terrible dream last night about someone dying and it sounds dumb by I was really upset. You all help so much! Maybe I should stop saying my poems are terrible if you like them! :') Now here is something I forgot to do.
I'm doing Ashfur's heartbreak, this was Jayfeather Jaybai's idea. I was meant to do this but I forgot.
I watched the fire,
I let it burn,
I glared down at Squirrelflight,
It's now her turn,
She hurt me,
Broken my heart,
I can't take it anymore,
I just can't (CRINGEEE)
Her poor little kits,
About to watch their mother die,
"Stop it Ashfur!"
Their eyes cry
"Ashfur," Squirrelflight started,
I glared at her in fury,
She opened her jaws to continue,
"If you want to hurt me,"
"Find another way,:
"They aren't my kits."
I said I wouldn't but THIS SUCKSSS! If you say this isn't cringy then I'm amazed!