So, how do y'all like the cliff hangers? I am thinking of being a writer. What do y'all think about that idea?
Chapter 10
"Kids?" Helen Belden yells into the house. She listens carefully and hears a soft weeping coming from Trixie's room upstairs. Ms. Belden drops her groceries and races up to Trixie's room and sees Bobby and the floor weeping.
"Bobby what happen?" Ms. Belden asks.
"Trixie?" Bobby exclaims looking up. Bobby sees it is his mom and runs up to her giving her a big hug.
"Moms!" he weeps. "He-He-He took Trixie, and Brian, and Mart! He took them! I couldn't save them!" Bobby yelled angerly.
"Who Bobby? Who?" Mrs. Belden said trying to stay calm.
"J-J-Ji-Jim! Jim and Dan!" Bobby yelled. "Jim took them! We were at home after you left and Jim came over. We let Jim in to talk then... Then he Told Trixie to go with him to talk. We thought nothing of it until Jim came back without Trixie. He said that-He said that she fell in a hole and he needed help to get her out. Mart and Brian told me to stay here but I didn't listen. I followed them in to the woods and I saw Jim run ahead. he disappeared in to the trees. Mart and Brian ran on and so did I. When they got into a clearing I stayed in the brush and say Trixie chained to the front of the semi parked there. Trixie yelled for them to run but they didn't and Jim and Dan covered there mouths and dragged them in to the back of the semi. I got the license plate number 'cause is was... It was... Trixie B." Bobby finished.
"Where are you taking us?" Sea questioned.
"To this room." Jack says opening a door on there right. "Now for the pain." Jack says giving an evil laugh.
We enter the room and Jack says. "Men you know what to do!" He leaves the room. The men 'hang' us on the wall then leave.
"Trixie I'm scared. What do we do?" I say. Lights flare up in the room.
"You are mow being watched by your friends." the ceiling says.
"Jim! Mart! Brian! Dan! Di! Honey! Help!" Trixie tells.
"Dora! Rikki! Amy! Daisy! Jeanette! Winnie! Help!" I scream.
"Gangs! Look!" Amy yells looking at the wall.
"It's Sea and Trixie!" Amy and Dan Yell at once.
"Jim! Mart! Brian! Dan! Di! Honey! Help!" Trixie yells.
"Dora! Rikki! Amy! Daisy! Jeanette! Winnie! Help!" Sea screams.
"Trixie! Sea!" Honey, Winnie, Jim, and Dora yell at once.
"AHHHHHH!" Trixie and Sea scream. They got zapped.
"T-Trixie are-are you al-all right?" Sea asked huffing and puffing.
"Y-Yes." Trixie managed.
"AHHHHHH!" They screamed again. Again they got zapped.
"T-Tr-Trix-ie-ar-e-ar-e-y-you al-all r-r-right?" Sea asked huffing and puffing more.
"Y-y-ye-ye-yes." Trixie managed again, but just barely.
"Stop! Stop! Please! Please Stop!" Jim yelled falling to the ground. "Please stop." he whispered.
"Fine! we'll move on to something else." A voice boomed. "It will be more painful then the last."