alright guys! I have an idea... but I want to know if youre cool with it, so id give this a few more chapters, the after the last chapter, post more chapters after, and act as if the attack happened,and it was right before tris dies in allegiant? idk, tell me your thoughts!

(Ill tell you the first letter of my name) -D (Im a girl)

"Tobias get up." I groan. He just adjusts his pillow so he cant hear me. "I said get up." I say louder. He still doesnt budge, so I decide to wake him up wether he likes it or not. "TOBIAS GET OUT OF BED THIS INSTANT OR TRIS WILL BE SHOT" I scream while jumping on the bed. He jumps out of bed ready to attack, but theres no one to attack. I start laughing at him, but he just scowls at me.

"Come on Tris lets go" HE says when hes dressed and ready.

When we get to the initiates dorm, their all still sleeping.

"Go for it" Tobias tells me. The beds are lain perfectly for me to just run across...

"Tris what the heck are you doing?" Tobias laughs at me when I start to run across their beds, landing on another initiates feet as I go. I get to Shays bed and see her there. Darn it, she didnt stay dead. I make a large jump and crash land on Shay's body, making her scream in pain. I get up, and walk to Tobias to see my handiwork.

"You probably just broke Shay six." Aaron groggily gets up and slurs.

"BE in the pit in two minutes or your out." I say. Tobias nods beside me. We walk out and go to the pit, waiting for them to meet us.

When they do come, Shay is being held up by Aaron, and he's trying to get help.

"Can she skip today please?" Aaron whines.

"Its fear landscape, all she will be doing is sitting in a chair." Tobias responds.

"Its not her fault shes like this, take pity." Aaron mutters.

"What was that?" I say.

"Nothing." Aaron quickly responds.

"Actually, that topic needs to be discussed. It was most certainly her fault. She kissed me, and I have a girlfrind. So I disposed of her. Her actions. Her consequences." Tobias states. I want to hug him, but quickly decide it wouldnt be best.

"Lets go." i say as we walk towards the simulation room. Today we are going through everyones fear landscapes, instead of one of ours, because we dont have anybody to do that, and if they went through Tobias', they'd find out about him. If they went through mine, well lets just not even go there. First is Shay, so she can just sit out of the reach of my fury.

"Give me it Four." I say, motioning to the syringe. He hands it to me, and i shove it in Shays neck, not caring how much pain she's in, but when Tobias puts his hands on mine, and guides me away, I let him take me.

"Lets watch." He says

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By the end of Shays landscape, were cracking up. She is afraid of Amity,the dark, messy hair, spiders, lava, drowning, bad clothes, broken glass, the number 6, which I hope means shes scared of me, and the most funny fear, is, apples. Shay is afraid of apples.

When she comes to, she looks at us. "Why are you laughing." she asks.

"Four had a joke." I say

"Tell me." she demands. I drag her out of the room and lay her on the ground in front of Aaron.

"Have fun" I mutter to him. He shoots me a glare, then turns to Shay.

I try to rememberr the other peoples fears, but theres jus so many boring ones, that tobias let me sleep most of the time.

"GO back to your dorm until we get you." I tell the initiates. Tonight is capture the flag.