This is to Allison again, because she suggested it to me. I don't own PJO. I don't own the song.
Still open to suggestions from anyone.
I Won't Give Up
When I look into your eyes it's like watching the night sky. I'm guessing that's supposed to be a compliment. Or a beautiful sunrise. Apollo is not beautiful. He's arrogant and annoying. And he's actually younger than me. Well there's so much they hold. Like knowledge or pain or something like that? You can't really tell all that from eyes. You can tell whether the person's arrogant, confident, or nervous though. And just like them old stars. Them old stars? Where did you learn your grammar? You're lucky I'm not Athena. She would have vaporized you. I see that you've come so far. Maybe I was wrong about the eyes. To be right where you are. How old is your soul? That doesn't really make sense unless she was reborn from Elysium.
Well, I won't give up on us. That's very brave of you but it won't work. You will end up crushing her and then she will be broken. And then she will either start dating someone else or join the Hunters. Even if the skies get rough. What does Zeus's temper have to do with this? I'm giving you all my love. Aphrodite would really like this song. I'm still looking up. Are you looking up for a particular reason? To see if Zeus is in a bad mood, because evidently you find his temper to be important?
And when you're needing your space, to do some navigating. What does she need to do navigating for? That really doesn't make much sense. I'll be here patiently waiting, to see what you find. What if she dies? I bet you'd just move on to another girl.
'Cause even the stars, they burn. They're clumps of gas. Of course they burn. Some even fall to Earth. You're putting stars in here a lot. You must be an astronomer. Or you just can't think of anything else to compare people to. We've got a lot to learn. God knows we're worth it. You mean gods know.
I don't wanna be someone who walks away so easily. Would you rather die? I'm here to stay and make the difference that I can make. Sound like Percy Jackson. The staying and making a difference. He chose to turn down immortality. Our differences, they do a lot to teach us how to use the tools and gifts we got. That's actually true. Yeah. No, it's back again. We got a lot at stake. And in the end you're still my friend. I can't believe that you added yeah into the song. Why do singers do that? They just add the word yeah into a song. It's not like it increases the quality of the song. At least we did intend for us to work. Most people do think that relationships will work. But then they don't. We didn't break. We didn't burn. Not yet at least. We had to learn to bend without the world caving in. Some gods still need to learn how to do that. *cough* Zeus *cough*. I had to learn what I've got, what I'm not, and who I am. *cough* Zeus *cough*.
I won't give up on us. That could kill you if you were fighting in a war. Not giving up. At the same time, I suppose giving up in a war would kill you as well. Even if the skies get rough. I'm going to act like this is something important, even though Zeus's temper isn't important unless he's about to destroy half the mortals in the world. I'm giving you all my love. Aphrodite would be making an "aw" sound here if she heard the song. I'm still looking up, still looking up. Zeus's temper still isn't that important.
Well, I won't give up on us. (No I'm not giving up). Very nice. God knows I'm tough enough. (I am tough. I am loved.) Ares thought he was tough and then he was beaten by Percy Jackson. We've got a lot to learn. (We're alive. We are loved.) So does Zeus. God knows we're worth it. (And we're worth it.) Gods. There are more of us.
Etc. Etc.