Hi, here is part 10! I know this one is short but i'll try to update this week (before sunday) so.. Thanx for reading (again :-) ) and i love you! Xx
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"Get up!" Someone yells. It's midnight and there are many people with flashlights in our room. I see Eric and Four are with them. I creep out my bed and stand maximal 1 meter away from Eric. I notice tris don't move. Eric does too. "He. Are you deaf stiff!" He yells. I see four's glance tighten. He really cares about her. Tris comes also out her bed. I look angry at Eric. He shouldn't yell at tris. "You've got 5 minutes to get dressed and go to the train yard. We're going on an other excursion."
Yesterday we went on an excursion to the fence. It was a bit boring but if i become dauntless i probably will work there.
Today we fought again. This was my first fight i won! But i'm tired because of the hard fight and i haven't slept more than an hour so i'm not happy we go on an excursion now.
I quickly get dressed and tris and i run to the railroad. When we arrive i see we're almost the latest. Only some of the Dauntless-Born aren't there yet.
Than i see the huge hill with guns! "Are we going to shoot something" i whisper to Tris. Smiling. If we shoot something this will be fun. Much nicer than the trip to the fence.
"Everybody, take a gun" Eric yells. We run to the hill and take guns. When i take a box with paintballs i smile even more. We're going to shoot each other in the dark. Yes this will be very nice. Than the train arrives and we all jump in.
Four starts telling what we're going to do "We're going to separate us in two teams and play capture the flag: the team that finds the flag from the others wins."
Nice! i'm excited now. "Every team has the same number of dauntless-born and transfers."Equally teams "first one team leaves to hide their flag, than the second goes."
Okay i'm ready. "What will we get if we win?" molly asks. Stupid girl only doing things if you get something in return.
Maybe if Eric was talking he'd understand but does she really think four (from abnegation! Okay maybe he indeed was) only does things four prices? "It's an honour to win" he says with a tone like molly indeed can't think.
"Four and I will be your captains" Eric says. Okay if i and tris can come in four's team it will go good but if we come in Eric's team...
"Let's start with the transfers." Eric says. "Okay, you first." Four says.
Why?
"I want Edward" Eric starts. "I want the stiff." Some people laugh.
If i knew who those are... I'll search real bullets and i have a gun so that won't be good for them. Why would four protect tris so obviously? Than i get it.
This is a game with running people and not fighting people and tris is really quick. I always was the fastest girl in my class and tris is much faster than i. Eric apparently doesn't understand. "Do you want to prove something, or do you choose the weakest so you can blame someone else." Eric says laughing. "Something like that indeed" Four says calmly. Tris looks angry now. "Your turn" four says trying to change the subject. "Peter" "Christina"okay it's now Tris and I against Peter and Edward. Maybe four could better choose tris later cause Eric won't choose her in the start. Eric chooses Molly now so they are a bit better
"Will" okay Tris Will and i are safe for Eric now but unfortunately Eric chooses al.
"Drew" "Myra" Myra is the latest (unexpected :p )
Than they divide the dauntless-born. I don't know them but indeed four chooses the slimmer persons. Four still pretends like we aren't good and Eric still believes it. Four offers even to go first, while you better can go second cause we shouldn't have to win. So we go first and than the game begins.
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Thanx xxx LY