The Tortured Slave
Chapter nine - Shadowclan
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Foxdung POV
"Wake up, you slow slave, Fang has a declaration!" Irons claw poked me. I yawned and followed him. Fang had already said familiar words "I have a result. The winner of Torture Tournament is Iron!" Iron gave Fang big smile, but Blood wasn't happy. Not at all. Instead, he looked like he could kill me any second if Fang said so. Was he blaming his own defeat in me? Well that's just great. If anything, I didn't want Bloods anger to focus on me. "As you know, Foxdung will be only in mine and Irons use for couple of days, while Blood will looses his right to torture, mate or amuse himself with Foxdung for few days. Blood, go and set our border, and Foxdung follow me." He said and padded to me. "I feel kinda lustful right now, I'm sure you will help me." He purred maliciously. "Follow me." He ordered. "Wait for me!" Iron yelled behind us. "Two is always better than one,ha?" He asked Fang and Fang smirked. Iron followed me, stabbing me forwards with his claw everytime I tripped over with my hurt paw. I had used the Choker for five days and they had finally took it off. But those scars in my throat reminded me from it. They led me to a small, sandy clearing. There was a rocky cave. It's walls were very dirty, but they were smooth. It's floor was full of sharp rocks, but there was two low, smooth and plain stones , and there was a smooth circle where they started. The rocks were opposite each other. "This is called Mating Cave, and that circle is Mating ring." Fang said and pushed me to Mating Ring. First I had tought that these walls were dirty, but now when I smelled the air, I recognized the metallic scent of blood. These walls were covered with blood! All around walls is small, scarlett drops. I shivered at the tought that how many poor she-cats these brutal cats have raped here? Fang looked me amused, he maybe guessed my toughts.
"Get into hunter's crouch" I obeyed reluctantly. I watched in horror as Iron pulled the same object what Blood has used, behind the stone. "Don't move if you want to keep your life" Fang hissed at me and I didn't. He picked the object from Iron and padded to me. "Ready to have some fun?" He asked and laughed. Then he rammed the large object into my core. I screeched in pain when torns, rose spikes and something Twolegs stuff's shards raked my too small core. Fang slowly pushed it deeper and even more slowly pulled it out couple times. When he was ready, my core was bright red and blood oozed from it. My screeching has turned both toms on very quickly. "Ready or not, here I come!" Fang said and with that he plunged his cock to my tail-hole. The pain was even more incredible than I remembered and I yowled in pain. My instincts said me to pull myself out and attack Fang, but my brain said me to not do it. Instead, I just begged "Ow, take it away, take it away, it HURTS!" But he ignored me and soon another pain slashed,now by my pussy. Iron has sharpened his claws with dog teeth and now he was raking my pussy from inside. I yelled when he stuffed his both paws deeper into my vagina. I was begging them to stop, but Fang raked my belly open "Oh, stop it, my little pussycat. My ears hurt, scream more quietly" He growled into my ear. He had pulled himself out of me, so pain eased a little bit. Iron still slashed my pussy and Fang added dog teeth into his claws, and joined Iron. Now four, sharp, dog-teethed paws were tearing my pussy. I struggled to get away and they clawed it even more, if possible "Stop it, my Masters, stop it!" I said when pain dug itself deeper into my mind. "Beg us to rape you!" Fang meowed, and both toms chuckled. I hesitated. "Beg!" They yowled and raked it more, this time outside. "Ow!" I didn't have a choice "Oh, please, rape me! Both of you! I like it!" I meowed anxious. Both toms laughed and padded away from me, surely to disguss about me.
Very short Iron POV
"Have you ever seen so pathetic she-cat! This Foxdung is better than other she-cats, good thing we killed them." Fang laughed. "Yes! This one is best; she's easily submissive, weak because she has no claws,she his small, she has tight core, she hadn't mated but one time with me, she is hard working and she is really beautiful! I like to rape beauriful cats and watch them work hard." I purred. "I got an idea. She's everything I said, and what kind of kits will those she-cats make? Kits always become tight-cored if their mother is, small, if their mother is, weak, if their mother is, beautiful, if their mother is, hard working, if their mother is, and submissive, if their mother is! What do you think, should I make her pregnant?" I asked. Fang looked me and nodded his approval. "Good idea. For a reward of winning Torture Tournament, you have the honor to make her pregnant. But I need to pleasure myself too!" Fang said and sounded pleased.
Foxdung POV
I watched them go. They speaked so loud that I could hear them, but I didn't listen. This was my change to escape. I quickly made sure they weren't looking, and began running. I had runned for a moment, when I heard Fang's yowl "She's getting away! Quick, after her!" Oh no, not yet! I didn't even have time to get real head start, and they were already after me! I panicked. I calmed myself : I had many wounds, but I was fast, and f I would run to Shadowclan territory and find Vinepaw, I would be okay for a while, and Vinepaw may change their mind to take me in! Even I hated them, anything was better than this! I tought when I ran away. I ran as fast as I can, carrying my hurt paw in air and not putting weight on it. I ran and ran, but suddenly smelled something very tingling. That must be Shadowclan border! I ran towards it, but out of nowhere weight struck my flank and I fell to ground. But, this cat wasn't Iron or Fang. But still, he smelled familiar. My fur bristled when I recognized his scent.
Sharptalon POV
It has been six sunrises when me, Conefur and Bogsky have become warriors. Bearslash and Falconscreech have gotten their names before us because they are moon older than us. But, of course, I'm still our leader. Bearslash, Falconscreech and I had received our cruel-like names because we have excellent fighting skills. Swanpaw was now Swanwing. Conefur was named because his cone-like patterns in his fur, and -sky just matched with Bog. But if we could choose, their names would be Coneclaw, it just sounded so powerful, and Bogstrike. They had really liked those names. My plan was getting started today. It's go time. "Hi, Swanwing! Do you want to come and hunt with me?" I asked, sounding shy. "Ok, sure." She answered. We padded towards in silence. She had been acting despressed since her crush with Vinetail. Hah, Vinetail! He actually misses my sister! Who could absolutely be so stupid and fall in love woth her and try to get her back? Hah! My toughts quickly turned back to Swanwing. I liked Swanwing, I really did. But question is : Does she love me back? Then I stopped and so did Swanwing. "Why did you stopped?" She asked. "I cant hold this anymore. Swanwing , I-I love you!" "You love me?" She asked, really suprised. "I mean, your lovelyness and your shining bright green eyes and beautiful fur just drives me crazy!" I added. There was a long pause. "Y-you don't love me back?" I asked and voice turned into whisper. "This came so quickly. Can I have a moment alone?" She asked. "Oh. Ok." I said. My plan was not starting well, she was supposed to say "Yes, of course." And then we could have kits and live a long life together. Then, next part of my plan would be that I would kill Cobblepelt and become a debuty. Then, kill Shadestar and become a leader! And my debuty would be chosen by fighting skills, so probably Falconscreech. And then when he dies, Bearslash, and when he dies, one of my kits. My mate would become Swanwing, and our kits would be trained by Bogfall, Bearslash, Falconscreech or Conefur. Or by myself. And if my kit happens- "I'm sorry, Sharptalon, I love Vinetail and not you." She whispered. "B-but, he doesn't even love you back!" I snapped,hurt. "I'm sorry. My heart belonged to him, and he breaked it. Now it belongs to no-one." Swanwing said silently and padded away.
I couldn't but watch in disbelief. Few moments ago, my life was becoming perfect. But with those little words, now it is ruined. I padded away, needing to clear my head. Forest was beautiful as alway, but now it seemed like nothing. The love of my life doesn't love me. I dug my long claws to muddy ground. Why, Starclan, why? I asked furious. I continued walking. Undergrowth began showing signs about Leaf-fall. Plants were withering and trees were changing their leaves to orange, yellow and brown. Suddenly, I heard something pretty small and noisy coming this way. I hided behind a fern bush, and my muscles tightened when I prepared fo a jump. Then I jumped and pushed it over so it fell to the ground. It was very small she-cat, and then I recognized her. It was Clawkit! How come she's still alive. "Your exiled from Shadowclan. What are you doing here?" I hissed and clawed her belly. She didn't even defend herself, how pathetic! "Quick! They are coming!" "Who are coming?" I asked, suddenly confused. "No time to explain! Just get other cats from your patrol!" She meowed so anxiously that I ran and get Swiftleg and Cobblepelt, but I couldn't find Lightstorm anywhere, untill I heard annoyed murmurs next to us. "Where is she? Just when I was about to-" "Shh!" Black tom with white paws stopped him. "I scent something. She's behind that bush, but she's not alone." The black tom, who grey tom has called Fang, said. Then they whispered to eachother so quietly, that we couldn't hear them. So, I took the change and we jumped. I jumped on top of Fang with Cobblepelt, and Swiftleg attacked the grey tom. Fang slithered away from my grip and flipped me onto my back with pure power. He raked his long and- dog-teethed?- claws along my belly angrily. While I tried to get away, Cobblepelt jumped at his back and bit his neck, trying to kill him. Fang has expected it, so Cobblepelt's teeth drew blood but didn't sink deep enough to kill him. Fang shook him off and he was just about to kill Cobblepelt and I ran just in front of him to take the strike but I was too late. "Cobblepelt!" I yelled, trying to sound depressed. "Retreat!" Swiftleg said and I followed him as we ran to Shadowclan camp. While running, we found Lightstorm and by that all three of us padded to camp, to make sure they don't come back with more cats.
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