I know this is soooo super short but I'm using my friend Jackie's computer, so I'm not going to spend four hours (it took me about that long to write chapter 1) on HER computer. I'll add on to this later. My heart raced. Beside me, Leopardpaw's eyes went wide. Instantaneous gasps exploded. My mind went black. My paws numb. My heart a stone. Millions of thoughts ran into my head: Ivypaw! Cloudtail! Lionblaze! Whitewing! Tigerheart! Birchfall! Stealthpaw! Firestar! Blackstar! I sent prayers to StarClan as I was shoved ahead, running with my group. Thick, black clouds edged the horizon My senses stretched past Willowshine grabbing a hysterical new apprentice, past the horses with the Twolegs on their back, jumping a colorful box, to past the WindClan boarder…the badgers were…about…four hours away. My swift paws thundered rhythmically with those of my companions, past blurs of shadowy, black water. Thunder clapped overhead with a snap of lightning, falling down from black clouds like millions of mouse tails. Rain flooded my pelt, glossy from my swimming lessons. Mud oozed between claws and I could barley see from the deep rain. StarClan is crying for their clanmates I thought darkly. This is why the story is rated t. The final chapters include things that you do not learn in school. Suddenly a dark cat with the scent of decay and darkness materialized before the steely grey cat. "Hawkfrost!" Harespring gasped. Her yowled filled the stormy air: "We need-" Her plea was cut short as Hawkfrost bit her throat. Another yowl from StarClan (thunder) filled the air. A pool of blood laid where a gash was in Harespring's throat. Her white neck was turned scarlet, darkened with blood. Not even the rain could wash away the scent of death that clung to the air. But there wasn't time to mourn. Hawkfrost raced into battle and was too quick. We were all near warriors and almost stood a chance. Almost. I dashed right, Pinepaw dashed left, and 4 other apprentices circled around. Hawkfrost looked amused. "You think you have a chance. But don't worry; I only want her" He looked at Dovepaw. She dashed ahead, locating Lionblaze. I'll be safe with him She thought. As she ran, she saw more dark cats, and none she recognized. The smell of death was heavy in the air, and her fur stood on end. When she entered the clearing, she was terrified at what she saw. I think this is my best chapter yet! One reason I haven't updated lately was because of my English teacher's homework (I try SOOOOO hard in English; part of my life plan :P) and an online seminar I attended about writing. Also, I love writing storms :D Also again, after re-reading the whole story, I noticed I kind of lost my touch of writing, trying to please online readings and I'm sure it wasn't as good as it could be. I tried to stay in the lines of fan fiction and update offend but it ended up sounding rushed and not like me. This is the writing I submit toy Ms. P., (English teacher) this is the writing on my website. I do not write like any of the former chapters. I like to go into detail, to express my life experiences, to make a story dynamic. I like to look at different perspectives, and to make everything log and slow, I'm not very proud of the story up until this chapter, thus, I'll be re-doing LakeClan first on a website Malin (My best friend) made, then on here because A) Fan fiction is being a b%*%# lately and B) I want to use a format I chose, and I can do that on Malin's website. And also, none of my friends can see my story on here, and on Malin's website there really isn't any people so it's kind of nice. My writing is out there but not a lot of people read it I had complete writers block during the next chaoter and it's shorter than chapter 2 - now that's short! - so here it is!
The clearing that had sheltered the apprentice for almost four seasons was blood spattered with bodies of her clanmates far and wide. There were cats with the scent of night everywhere. Cats battling with evil cats; wait...
Ivypaw was fighting Firestar! ( That wasn't an AN that was just doubly emphasized)"Ivypaw! Stop! Ivypaw!" Dovepaw yowled with all her breath, dashed to her sister, hysterical.
Her silver sister was crimson with the blood of their Clanmates, holding the smell of gloom and death. She spun around and was face to face with
"Now you care huh? Now that I have something you don't! I was training with StarClan the whole time. I was more special that you!" Ivypaw pushed her sister down on her back, slashing with furious and precise claws. Deathly precise.
"It…wasn't…StarClan.." Dovepaw tried to call out her argument, but was left with no air in her lungs.
Gasping for breath and voice, her eyes were dotted with scarlet as Ivypaw slashed above her eyes.
"I…wo…n…t….figh….t…you…Ivy…paw…you…r…my…sister…" Dovepaw was trying hard to defend herself without hurting her sister, who was slashing at her belly, bearing a deep slice. Her eyes fanned shut.
"Ivypaw!" A familiar voice was coming closer, closer and closer. Lionblaze!
The weight of Ivypaw was gently knocked off.
And Dovepaw's eyes went black.
Told you it was short.