celestialstarynight: So true.

hipturtle15: thanks :)

Fluffyangelcake: Thanks, and we worked things out so we're good now :) But too bad her relative died :(

Hirumacrazyfangirl: Never tasted sugar? Wow, even I can't live a week without it! Lol.

The Derpy Doctor: We all hope he'll get it coming!

Crazy PinkimenaDiane Pie: I think her meds are at the Canadian border by now.. lol.

PuccalovesGaru: Thanks, my writing has improved since July thanks to fanfiction. ;)

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Thank you guys a bunch for reviewing! So here you go:


He saw crabs surrounding him and his friends. Without thinking he jumped up to a pipe line and hung on for life. He wanted to hang there forever but he knew Skipper wouldn't like that. He let go and began attacking the crabs even though they had laser guns.

"Rico! Bombs! Now!" Kowalski commanded.

Rico smiled as he regurgitated two bombs, lit up and hit a bunch of the crabs.

"Kowalski! Options!" Marlene said suddenly.

"Run while I take care of them!"

"How? There is no exit!"

Kowalski grabbed one of the crab's laser gun and aimed it at the exit. He pulled the trigger and the bars didn't break. "Biscuits," he muttered to himself. As he punched a crab he looked up. There was a open vent.

"Climb up to the vent! I'll be fine!" He said punching another one with the gun. They hesitated for a second but climbed up the vent.

"THIS IS FOR MY KIDNAPPING MY BROTHER!" He screamed as he knocked a crab out with another crab. He felt anger creep inside of him and couldn't control it. He punched, lasered, and kicked all of the crabs until the rest of the crabs ran in retreat to the small door that could fit for crabs. He climbed up the vent to join the others. When he reached to them he saw them looking worried.

"What's the matter?" He asked, puzzled.

"They took Marlene," Maurice answered in a whisper.

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Skipper dodged every one of Blowhole's lasers and whenever he could, he kicked him and punched him.

"Alright!" Blowhole said not standing Skipper's moves.

"But it's been two minutes," Skipper pointed out.

"Whatever!" He snapped. He pressed a button and he saw a large tile slide out of the way. A cage with a figure took it's place.

"I'll let you two talk for a few minutes before the deal," He opened the cage and left locking the doors and windows.

"Skipper?" Asked the figure walking away from the shadows.

"Marlene?" He asked.

They both hugged each other tightly.

"I thought I would lose you," she whispered letting tears stream down her face.

"Me too," he answered back.

"What deal was he talkng about?" Marlene asked when they let go.

"He hasn't told me but I know he wants to take me as his minon instead in order to let you and the others go,"

"Are you gonna do it?"

He looked away before he said, "Yes,"

"No, don't do it!" She screamed.

"I have to! It's for the best of our friends and you,"

"Don't do it, Skipper!" She repeated seeing Skipper walk away.

"Why shouldn't I?"

"Because," she took a deep breath "I...love..you,"

He stopped walking," Wait, what?"

"I love you, Skipper,"

He turned around and did something even he didn't expect himself to do; He grabbed her hand and kissed her. Marlene was shocked at first but realized how much she wanted him to do it," They kissed until they heard the door open.

"So are you gonna agree to the deal, Skipper?" Blowhole asked using his real name for the first time.


ok so I'm typing this by phone with no spell check. Tomorrow's my birthday and I wanted to give the readers this chapter :) Also I'm thinking of a sequel! I got inspired while watch Tobuscus' let's plays of Uncharted 3. So if you want a sequel then review below and I'll work on it as soon as I can. And fanfiction still doesn't work on my computer! :( Anyway, review and peace off!