Hello Sweeties! \o/
As I promised here one more chapter!
I want to thank everyone who sent me comments in PM, honestly it was wonderful, and and especially thank Whenarewe who offered to be my Beta, dammit, I do not know thank you enough! Thank you! ... \o/ ... thank you!
Come on then ...
-/-/- Future
They were in Space Florida where there were magnificent beaches.
The TARDIS had hardly landed when Dana and William jumped out. Three months stuck in their timeline, made it more than obvious that they would run out without supervision. Subsequently leaving the Doctor and River to trail behind them, giving them warnings and explanations that were lost to them a bit, enjoying the place. But, the heat was suffocating.
The teenagers having not liked the intensity of the heat. They played in the water, clothes and all, kidding around and throwing water on each other, causing laughter in the Doctor and River, and they remained and continued their fun, even when the Doctor and River decided to retire to the TARDIS.
The Doctor was playing with the console while River was fanning herself, providing little relief from the heat. They had dressed as comfortably as possible, without being stark naked, (even though that was what River had in mind all along) seize the heat. However, for the sake of the children that was deemed "inappropriate".
Instead River wore a white cotton dress with small Navy blue accents. Whilst her husband was wearing a white shirt with the top five buttons undone and sleeves rolled up, untucked from his jeans and of coarse a pair rainbow suspenders to make up for the lack of a bowtie.
"Sweetie, why did you bring us to a planet so hot?" - River asked as she fanned herself again and came to rest in one of the chairs next to the console.
"It was not me, she did it!" - He said pointing to the TARDIS console and was sitting next to River in another chair.
"Oh, sure blame the old girl, so you get away with this!" - She said in jest and with a faint smile.
"But, she did! I Think she favored her children, after all they do love it." - He pouted.
"Oh, so now they're my children!" - She said tapping the bridge of his nose:
"No, I meant hers! And yours too! So, euphoric, they are completely your! "
"Hun, I know!" - She said with a half smile and looking at him asked: "Why don't you change into something lighter, sweetie? Seeing you dressed like that gives me more heat!"
"Why change when there is something better we can do?"
"I'm really not in the mood now, and the children could return at any time. Maybe later?" - She said with seductive smile.
"No, not that." - He said, shaking hands, as if the idea had not even crossed his mind. "I mean something much better!"
"Better than sex?" - She asked, raising an eyebrow - "I doubt such a thing exists."
"Oh, here in this heat, it exists. I have some! Wait here a minute!" - He said and took off running down the hallway fading from view. River screamed from where she stood: "And what might that be?"
He shouted back echoing down the hall: "Oh, wait and see! I'm sure you'll like it!" .
"Ok". - She relaxed as much as she could, the temperature came to be unbearable, she did not understand how the kids had so much energy with all this heat!
"AHH! Here." He said returning with two pints of ice cream and chocolate syrup.
"Oh, ice cream!" - River exclaimed surprised and happy.
"Yes, isn't it wonderful!" - River simply sighed and said "Yes, of course, but dear, you forgot the bowls and spoons!"
He looked confused she laughed:
"What? I will not be eating with my hand, darling."
"Oh, yeah, well, I'll be right back." - He said returning to the kitchen.
God, she loved this man, but sometimes she swore that she had not three, but four children. He shouted from the kitchen:
"Uh, River I have a problem."
"What's the problem?" She shouted back.
"I can't find the bowls!" - She sighed:
" Third cabinet door to the left of the microwave!"
"Oh, yes, I found them!" -he said when returned -"Ok, Here we are." - and handed it to her. She said:
"Let's see what we have here..." - She said examining the pints of ice cream."Chocolate and Cherry Garcia."
"Can you pass me the Chocolate? "- He asked
"Of course, sweetie!" - She said removing a portion and depositing it into his bowl. She can not put too, was frozen, but how she was able to take it poured into the pot and handed it to him who put chocolate syrup.
They savored their ice cream and talked. Everything was going well until the Doctor resolve to get more ice cream himself pulled everything and a few drops splashing on face hers, he said:
"Sorry about that." - He apologized wiping his face and hers. River smiled:
"It's okay, honey." She asked: "Pass the chocolate syrup, please." - He innocently got the syrup for her. She opened the bottle, poured some on his finger and licked, he stood looking, she put a little more and rubbed chin and cheek his , laughing. He protested:
"River ... no "- and pouted, she said innocently:
"Oh dear just sit back and I'll get you clean!" - And licked his chin first, then on the cheek. He let out a small moan and pulled her into a kiss. The pair lost balance and tipped over in the seat. Bowls, ice cream, and all (including them) on the ground. The Doctor was beginning to explore the body of his wife when they both heard noises and the door of the TARDIS being closed, they stopped when they heard:
"Hey, ARFF, you two, get a room!"
They both looked at the door where Jenny, Dana and William were leaning with face frightened, dirty, covered in sand and Will was bleeding from the nose, River scrambling to get up said:
"What'd you guys do now?"- Jenny smiled innocently:
"Hi mom! Hi Dad! "- The others put the same smile on their faces. River smiled at Jenny:
"Hi, honey!" And crossing her arms said "Now answer, what the hell did you get into now!"
"NOTHING!" - But the beats and screams in the gate belied. Doctor said:
"Well it sure was something!" - Jenny said firmly:
"Dad, Mom, I promise I'll explain everything, but I think we should leave now!" - they listening to the voice of Jenny who was full of fear, the Doctor and River began pulling levers and pushing buttons and put the TARDIS in flight. River crossed his arms and said:
"Now, can you explain!"
"It was all their fault!" - Each pointed to the other.
This is my first fanfiction and I would love any reviews good and bad. I want to know what you think! I'm writing this for fun but mostly to hear what people think.
