I love you guys!!!!! You reviewed !!! I was hoping for more but… as long as you keep reviewing I guess.
Do you know what happened it go me so pissed that I had to reply to her! This woman……. It has to be a girl or one seriously gay guy ( no offence to any people who are). She flamed me on the first chapter!!...... ok I know the first chapter was bad with the writing and stuff, but that wasn't my fault! My friend had typed it up for me and she did it like that. Any who it wasn't what she said it was how she said it! And she didn't even read the rest of the story, said she just breeze through chap one! And then accuses me of having no plot! It's the first chapter! I don't think the entire plot of the story is gonna jump out at you! And why she flamed the story? For the sake of flaming!!!!!!!!! Can you believe that? Anyways I was highly tempted not to write anything but decided to and let you take a vote on if the story should continue or not, and if you have something bad to say please do it in a nice considerate way (just in case I'm in one of those bad moods where everyone must and decided to answer.) anyways looking forward to your votes. Here is the next chap.
* My Hero?*
Kagome opened her eyes she couldn't believe who she saw,
"se……se….. Sesshomaru?"
A pain shot up her side and she blanked out.
"maybe you didn't say it right…….. anyways we can take her with us and then you can say it when she wakes up!" the little girl said happy with the idea.
(a/n: remember sesshy asked kagome if she was ok? That's what rin was speaking about that he didn't say the line properly.)
"Rin……. I –."
"please can we take her? Please ………." Rin begged.
"Jaken."
"yes lord sesshomaru?"
"take her." He said gesturing to the unconscious girl.
"but mi lord she- wait on me mi lord!!!"
Jaken picked up kagome and struggled under her weight to try and keep up.
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"ok so when she wakes up you say, are you ok"
"Rin it's not what I said that made her faint."
"how do you know ?"
"cause I do."
"then what's wrong with her?- Look!! She's waking up!"
Kagome slowly opened her eyes to see Rin and sesshomaru looking down at her.
"are you ok? Why did you faint?" Rin asked.
"you……you saved me?" Kagome asked in disbelieve.
Sesshomaru looked away not bothering to answer .
"yup!! He did!! He saved you!!" Rin piped up, full of pride over her father figure.
Kagome's eyes filled with water as she looked at Sesshomaru.
"what's wrong?" Rin asked.
"it's………..(sob)…… he wasn't ( sob)………… Inuyasha ………(sob) Inuyasha should have saved me!....... then we ( sob) would have……….(sob) kissed……..(sob) made up and get married!! But he didn't come!!"
Kagome broke down in tears……… it was supposed to go like it did in the fairy tales, prince charming was supposed to save the damsel in distress! But hers must have gotten caught in traffic or something!
Kagome sniffed one last time and wiped away her tears.
"well thank you anyway." She said dejectedly.
Kagome tried to get up, but once again a sharp pain shot up her back forcing her to sit still. She gave a blood curdling scream as she felt it.
"what's wrong?!" Rin asked a little frightened.
"the pain………….. my babies…..... I hurt my back………."
She screamed again.
"Sesshomaru-sama do something! Help her!!" Rin said looking at the pale face Kagome.
(a/n: do ya think it would be evil to end it here?)
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"there he is!!" Shippo yelled
They landed. Inuyasha was sitting on a rock, looking into a stream, his legs pulled up to his chest and his head hanging. His bangs covered the expression on his face, but his body language screamed dejected.
" inuyasha……?"
"What?!" he snapped.
"Kagome was looking for you -."
"so what? let her look! I don't care what happens to her………. She could go – where is she?" He asked looking over the group.
"we left her under a tree. She said he was-."
"whose with her?"
"no one……………." Miroku answered in a 'isn't it obvious?' kind of way.
"you left her alone?!!!! What are you brain dead?!!! She's fucking pregnant, she's not used to fighting!!! She could be dead now!! Why I ought to-."
"Inuyasha, killing miroku wont help, not that it was his fault, lets get back to kagome before she gets hurt ok?"
"she better not be hurt…" Inuyasha said through gritted teeth and turned away from miroku.
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Kagome was healed, thanks to sesshy and Rin's persistence that he help, however she was still worried about her babies who hadn't moved since she fell.
"you cant be dead…………. Please move……..you just cant die." Kagome mumbled to her unborn children, her eyes were once again full of tears over the fact that she didn't feel them move.
(a/n: for anyone who doesn't know it is quiet possible for her not to feel them and think they are dead then doctors say you need to take an ultrasound to make sure they're fine………… just in case some smart person decides to send this little point as a flame.)
"they are not dead."
"are you sure?" Kagome asked looking at sesshomaru hopefully.
"yes,"
"Thank you so much!! You know I always thought you didn't care about other people-."
"I don't. your crying was disturbing."
"anyways……. Thanks for saving me, I really appreciate it but I have to be going now, I need to find Inuyasha-."
"your Inuyasha's mate?" sesshomaru asked wondering how he didn't pick it up before.
"yeah and now I have to find him."
Sesshomaru smirked evilly.
"wait, we'll help."
"but lord Sesshomaru-." Jaken started to protest.
"you want to help me?" Kagome asked
"I cant just leave you unprotected besides all I'll have to put up with is your stench."
"wha-."
"come rin, Jaken and………… you."
Kagome and the others walked after Sesshomaru who still had that evil smirk on.
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"she is not here!!!!" Inuyasha yelled, tossing various body parts aside.
"well, she's not dead…….. her body isnt here. Can you pick up her scent?" Sango asked.
Inuyasha sniffed.
"yeah and ………. Sesshomaru? That bastard better not have hurt her! This way."
They went off in the direction of kagome's scent.
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"Rin go play." Sesshomaru said.
"ok! Come on Jaken………….." she pulled Jaken off with her.
"why did you ask her to go?" Kagome asked.
"so we can prepare for that halfbreed ."
"what do you mean prepare?" Kagome asked
She finally noticed sesshomaru's evil smirk and stepped back.
"you'll soon see…………"
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