Hey guys...i'm very disappointed on how this story is turning out. When i had first written a draft it was praised by my family and a few of my friends who read warriors. But now that my way of writing has evolved and gotten better….i don't like the way it is anymore. So i have decided i am going to rewrite this entirely. I'm open to criticism and how i can make this story move faster and sound better. There may be changers to the storyline and the allegiances and i might completely alter the story except for a few key points. I know for sure i can definitely keep the prophecy and a few characters. But with the way i have the story now i have a writer's block. So if anyone had any suggestions on how to make this story better, i'm open to ideas.