Q & A Reviews Chapter 9
Okay, after posting a new chapter. Let's see what reviews we have today!
Perseus12 says...
Q: "Wowsers! Please continue the story, the excitement thrills me!"
A: Why Thank You, Perseus. I will!
TheCrazedBerserker says...
Q: "I know you haven't updated it in a while but plz continue it. It is a very good idea and I would love to hear more."
A: Don't worry... I will but it will take time and patience.
deathcornfive says...
Q: "I think would prefer velvet and ben being paired together"
A: Well to be honest, in my opinion Velvet relationship with Ben is like brother and sister. The main pairing is Yang.
Rio Skyron says...
Q: "You're alive"
A: Yeah, I know! I'm not dead cause I have school.
Greer123 says...
Q: "Ben is going to fuck up Raven in the coming chapters. Also is Kevin and Gwen going to be joining Ben in the coming chapters as well? Hope you are doing well."
A: Well, Greer... language! And yes Ben will not kill Raven, because he is pretty chill most of the time. Yes, Kevin and Gwen will be joining with Rex and Ben.
Ninjamon1228 says...
Q: "You know...it's gonna be pretty funny to see how Ben changes the canon events seeing how freaking OP he is in this world. I just can't wait to see how him and Cardin are gonna react when Cardin starts bullying Velvet.
I can also imagine a scenario of what happened with Albedo at the end of Alien Force. Raven or Cinder somehow got the Ulimatrix and Ben says that whoever took it is going to go after him is going to give it back. After they mockingly say no Ben says "So you don't blow up." Ben then activates the self-destruct function and, after a moment, they give it back with Ben disabling it.
Also here are some ideas I have for the story.
Neo having a crush on Ben.
So what if when Neo sees Ben she starts getting infatuated with him. She then sees how Yang interacts with him (Considering how they're going to be in a relationship) and starts getting extremely jealous (pretty much Yandre.) This could lead her to be extra determined to get rid of Yang like on the train in volume 2.
Pyrrah lives
Ok I don't know how far you're gonna stray from canon since Ben (and soon Rex) is in Remnant, but if your gonna go far from canon in certain cases this is something that could very much happen. You could have Ben save Pyrrah at the very last second before Cinder lands the final blow with Ben getting Pyrrah to safety before facing Cinder himself. I think you should have it be Cinder vs Atomic with Cinder being unable to harm Atomix at all with her weapon or maiden powers since Atomix would probably not feel a thing from either attack and with Atomix "Finishing" off Cinder with nuclear winner.
Upgrade fixes Penny.
So the Galvanic Mechamorphs don't just upgrade machinery, they can also repair it and put it back together. After Penny is...um, "Dismantled" Ben can go Upgrade and, in a sense, "Bring her back to life."
Curring Amber.
So the after effects of Cinder draining half of the maiden power from Amber left the latter with the grim infection, causing her to be in an incredibly weak state and almost to the point of death. The Ultimatrix has a function which can repair the DNA of another being like with Ken when he was affected by the Xenocyte. Ben could use that function to cure Amber of the Grimm infection leaving her completely healthy just with only half of her power.
Anyway, that's all I have to say. I hope you consider my idea. Kepp up the good work, this story rocks."
A: Well, okay in order. One, I'm not going to make him that OP as he still retains the Master Control, Ascalon, Mana, Aura, and Semblance and his weaknesses from the show along with Rex and his Nanites, Omega-1 Nanite, and his Aura and Semblance. Two, Yes he is going to stop Cardin from bullying. Three, yep that scenario if Cinder or Raven got the Ultimatrix and threatens them to hand it back over or the device will destroy itself and not the RWBY Universe so they don't blow up due to the self-destruct charge for it has to build for a few days. And I kinda agree with your ideas. Like Neo having a crush on Ben, and Yang going to get extremely angry at Neo for being a boyfriend stealer. Pyrrha, however, yes during the fight at Beacon Tower, I might do that along with Rex fighting Cinder, and Penny getting repaired I will do that with Upgrade, and have Ben improve her systems with alien technology with the help of Azmuth. Finally, Amber. Well even though she will be repaired, but she will still die due to that machine in the vault below Beacon, and Cinder killing her to complete the half of the Fall Maiden power. Thank You!
doomqwer says...
Q: "God Ozpin is such a manipulative prick"
A: Well to be honest... If you watched Volume 5 then well he is not a bad guy, it's just that he makes more mistakes than anyone else, which is the reason the Brother Gods of Remnant cursed with him that reincarnation cycle of his before the events of RWBY.
J0K3R Of Monday says...
Q: "Y'know if you didn't place a paring tag on Ben and Yang, I would have believed that this was a Velvet pairing."
A: Well, I know that. Because Ben and Yang share some similarities in common.
That one guy says...
Q: "Cool chapter I was expecting you would give his faunus form different clothing like a trenchcoat or something instead of his human clothing and just adding the ultimatrix on his chest. Cool name by the way :)"
A: Well Thank You! Recently, I changed my mind and decided to give him some clothing for his Faunus Transformations. Check it out right now. And thanks! The Name Jumping Jack makes sense as Rabbits can hop.
Mr. Illegal asks...
Q: "How did Raven know Ben calls himself Ben 10?"
A: Well, she doesn't... She just calls him that due to his last name and shortening to the number 10 that rhymes with his name.
That one guy replies...
Q: "OMG thank you for recommending my idea of having Ben's faunus forms having different clothing. Also I read one of the reviews of other people and comment about some of Ben's aliens being immune to Emeralds semblance kinda interests me and want to know your thoughts about that topic."
A: You're Welcome, and yes! Emerald's Semblance wouldn't probably affect Ben in his alien forms such as Goop, Wildmutt, Echo Echo, Clockwork, Nanomech, and Upgrade.