-1a/n I OFFICIALLY HATE MY GRANDMA!! She moves all of our stuff, like she has the right, and then, you know what?? SHE THREW THE WHOLE PLAN FOR THIS STORY OUT!! Seriously!! Well, actually, she did it TWICE!! So now, I have to remember what I had happen, so I can rewrite the plan, and then yell at her, again, if she looses it…AGAIN! Anywayz…as Kaitlin says…I'm going to have it saved on a computer too, so she won't throw it away!
Yeah, I'm going to stop rambling, make the plan, and write the new chapter, that I thoroughly remember…well, remember what's supposed to happen and stuffs…Irresistible may be longer now, too, but I have only up to chapter 16 planned, and want to write now!
Poll stuffs: if you want an update, I need you to vote for this story in my new poll! Right now, it's last, and has no votes, so vote for it, and I'll finish it soon, don't vote for it, and I'll finish one of the two stories that are tied for the lead, or at least updated them next.
Irresistible
The rest of the Cullens, Maria, and I, were hunting on the far side of Canada, across Hudson Bay, in a thick forest. Alice, Edward, and I, were near each other, in the same clearing when Alice froze.
I knew she was having a vision, and Edward and I looked in her mind to see what it was.
(a/n the italics are part of the vision)
The house wasn't empty. Inside it, the noise of Tanya, Renee, and Bethany floated out. Tanya, yelling something at Renee, torturing her. Renee, in pain, Bethany, laughing at Renee's pain.
We were inside the house now, inside the very room they were all in. Bethany stood off to the side, watching what was happening on the other side of the room. Tanya and Renee were on the other side of the room. Renee being held to the floor by Tanya.
"DOES BELLA HAVE MORE POWERS!" Tanya yelled.
"No! she's just a normal girl! Just my normal baby girl!" Renee cried back. If it were possible, she would have been crying.
"If she is your 'normal baby girl' then I will just kill her, make sure that Edward will be mine forever!" Tanya told her. She seemed to know that Renee was lying.
"NO!!" she's my baby girl! Don't kill her!" Renee yelled at her.
"WHAT'S GOING TO STOP ME?!" Tanya yelled, viciously, Topaz eyes burning with hatred.
"SHE WILL!!" Renee yelled back at her, with all her power, not knowing she just gave away the fact that Bella had more than one power.
"Oh, she will, will her? How might that be, if she's just a normal girl?" Tanya had Renee in a corner. It was either tell her, or…die.
"She…" Renee started, she didn't know if she should tell Tanya. If her life was more important that Bella's safety.
"SHE WILL WHAT??" Tanya yelled. "she has powers, doesn't she. Your little 'Angel' has more than one power, am I right?"
Renee stayed silent for what seemed like an eternity.
"AM. I. RIGHT?!" Tanya yelled once more. She then seemed to calm down…"Oh, I am right, I know I'm right, and for not telling me, I will kill you, and your daughter can't save you when she's on the other side of this continent!"
"NO!" Renee yelled, fear in her eyes. She had no power to save herself, she would surely die, "Please don't! please don't kill me! I promise, I won't tell her about this, she won't know! Please don't kill me!!"
"Oh, I'm sorry that there is no other way to solve this problem." Tanya started, in a cheery voice, "I'm sure, that if you had told us before all this, that I could have let you join Bethany, and help me get Edward. We could have killed Esme and Rosalie, then you could have had Carlisle as a mate, and Bethany would get Emmett, as I had promised her. But now, no. you don't deserve that good treatment."
This sickened Renee. Carlisle was like a brother for her! And Esme a sister! To mate with Carlisle would be like mating with her brother, and to kill Esme, would be like killing Bella!
"Even if you did let me live, I would never, NEVER, mate with Carlisle! It would break Esme's heart!" Renee retaliated.
"That's why we would KILL Esme!" Tanya spat at her.
"Killing Esme, or any Cullen would be like killing a sibling, or a child. I will NEVER help you in your evil ways!" Renee growled at Tanya, fiercer that Bella had ever seen her, but it was useless. She still wasn't as strong as Tanya and Bethany.
They tore her apart. Her hands, her legs, her torso, her head, taken apart, and thrown into a fire one by one, until only her head was left.
They spat at her head, still alive, but useless, and Tanya tossed it into the fire, as if it was a newspaper article…
I couldn't believe what I had just seen. My mother was going to die, and the only slim chance of me saving her, was if I ran faster than even a vampire could run. A car would slow me down.
The original chapter 10 was much longer, but there was too much emotion in it already…I actually cried when I was writing part of the vision! I almost had to stop. What do you think will happen next? Renee dies, she lives, what? Review!