Hey guys. I had a little personal problem, but it's over now... for the most part. Also please review and check out Arashi The Shadow Wolf's fic aceptance( its spelled that way cuz he mispelled it) I've been caught up in a lot of things which made my last two chapters horrible. I hope this is an improvement. Also for manga readers, you guys should know that Ataskui members are under mind controle, but Orochimaru broke free. A spoiler maybe that Itachi's little hypnotism will ware off, and he might return to Konoha. There might be a time skip later on as
I need Naruto to be a little older, so he doesnt turn out being overpowered at an early age. Since everything hasn't cleared up yet, this chapter will be my average 1400-1600 words, which is what I write when
I can't do something longer. I deserve a few more reviews for releasing three chapters in one week! As for my second fic, I'll try to work on it since it only has two chaps. But this fic is my priority!Enjoy!
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Naruto, Jiraiya, and Hijo stared difiantly at the duo in front of them. Naruto could sense Itachi's chakra rising,
signafying he would try to activate the Mangekyo.
"Guys head into those bushes. We need to come up with a plan" he whispere to them. They nodded and dashed into the shrubs Naruto had pointed out. Itachi and Kisame above were speaking to each other , " Let them plan...
we will still beat them. They will pay for daring to insult me..." said the older Sharingan user. Back in the plants
"There's no way we can beat them... and it's going to be even harder with Kisame there." said Hijo.
"Well then, why don't we get rid of Kisame."
"What?!" Jiraiya and the Icinora clan leader mumbled at the same time.
" We can't beat them right. Well if we take out Kisame, it'll be able to last longer. If we last longer, the ANBU who are currently fighting off the other ninja who infiltrated the village, will be able to help us." voiced the Chuunin(AN: Guys remember I made Naruto a chuunin!)
"That plan may actually work. But me being mostly a water justu user, that may prove to be a problem." whispered Hijo.
"That's why you will be fighting Itachi, since many Uchiha clan members favor Katon, your water techniques will be of some use. Not only that with your amazing speed, you'll be able to keep up with him."
"Naruto, it seems you're getting more intelligent afterall." articulated the previous sensei of Naruto.
"Anyway, here's the plan..."
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A few moments moments the later the trio of ninja jumped back into sight. Kisame looked at them and phonicated to them " What took you so long. Itachi here was about to toast you guys with a great fireball."
The groups answer to that was them lunging at their enemies.
Kisame vs Naruto Jiraiya
Naruto pulled out a few kunai and thrust them at his enemy. Kisame dodged them and then jumped up and swung his fist into Naruto's stomach sending him into a tree. Jiraiya looked down at his fallen student, and hurdeled himself toward Kisame.
"Rasengan!!!!!!" he shouted pushing the spiraling ball into Kisame's chest. He was catapolted into the air. Naruto shakily got up, and saw this as the chance to use his new technique.
"Kage Bunshin No Justu!" three clones poofed into exsistence.
"Okay guys, time to use our new combo." One Naruto clone leaped into the air and kicked Kisame upward and said " Na" then another one kicked him in the direction east and said "Ru" next another one punched him east saying "To" and then finally the last and real Naruto charged a rasengan in hand and richoched into the air and slammed it into Kisame stomach again and said "Naruto Hurricane" You see this attack would knock the opponent into the air and then knock them back and fourth, finally using an attack to send them back down. Kisame hurtled into the ground knocking a cloud of dust up. Jiraiya put his hands together at his mouth and said
"Katon:Karyu Endan" (Fire release:Fire Dragon Missle). A giant burst of fire flew from his mouth in the form of a dragon. It twirled high in the air and then dived right into the crater where Kisame was creating a huge explosion. Everyone had to close their eyes to sheild them from the flying dust and rocks. Naruto and Jiraiya looked down as the derbri started to clear.
"What!!!!!" There standing was Kisame. He was breathing heavily, injured, and he seemed he had sustained many burns.
"Yo... u gu..ys ca...n't be...at ME!!" He shouted pulling out his sword. He unwrapped the bandages covering it revealing the blade. Kisame sprang up at them and pulled his sword down on Naruto. He put his hands up to catch it , but he began to feel it draining him. He started to feel weaker and weaker. If he let go he would be cleaved in half, if he didn't let go he would lose all his energy and be cleaved in half. His only hope was if Jiraiya could kno... Wait a minute, he had his only blade. He slid his thumb against the blade cutting it. He pulled out a scroll and wiped it across, summoning his trusted blade. He quickly used it as a barrier against Kisame and himself using it to push himself to saftey. Jiraiya emerged and went to smash a kick into Kisame but failed. Kisame had put his blade in front of him blocking the attack and draining hi energy. He had then slammed the sword forcefully into Jiraiya's head knocking him out cold. Naruto from afar did not think Jiraiya had been knocked out cold but killed.
"NO!!" he shouted. A redish aroura engulfed him in energy. He grew fangs and his finger nails became sharper. His hair, eyes, nose, mouth and whiskers became more feral and he crouched down on all fours.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He yelled even louder before. He intaneously disappeared and remerged behind Kisame. He pulled his sword out and slashed it through Kisame's back.
"Ack!" he shreiked bending down in pain. Naruto pushed him off the branc they were currently standing on sending fish boy plummeting to the hard dusty ground below. He himself jumped off to pick Jiraiya up.
"Na...ruto... I'm alright just a really bad bruise."
"WHAT?!!??!" He yelled in anger. He thought Jiraiya was dead. He hammered his fist into Jiraiya sending him towards Itachi.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" He screamed.(AN: Hijo's and Itachis fight will be short, maybe 50 words to one hundred, or not...)
Hijo vs Itachi
Hijo stood there sweating, and his legs starting to buckle. When he had leaped at Itachi he had been stopped by Amaterusu. A jet black flame said to be as hot as the sun. Hijo had been heading towards him straight so he had barely enough time to dodge the attack, and in end it had charred his left leg. Which greatly decreased his speed. During Kisame's and Naruto's battle he had been busy trying to dodge the relentless attakcs of the Uchiha. So once their fight was over Jiraiya had been thrown into Itachi knocking them both down. They tumbled onto the forest ground together. Itachi glared at Jiraiya and shouted "Tsukyomi" (Spelling?) The two were thrown into a world with red skies. Jiraiya found himself strapped to a wooden pole.
"I will now stab you for the next seventy-two hours..."
72 HOURS, OR IN OTHER TERMS 3 MINUTES LATER.
Jiraiya collapsed with a painful look in his eyes. Hijo and Naruto looked at each other, to be able to defeat Jiraiya that fast would be a problem. There only hopes would be to use up as much chakra as possible to attract the ANBU black ops to them.
"Hijo use your Crystal Ice Mirros, and i'll use the Odama Rasengan. The chakra we'll use for them will attract the ANBU'S attention therefore beinging the them here."
Hijo nodded and sprinted towards Itachi.
"Crystal Ice Mirrors!" Twenty-one sheets of thick ice formed around Itachi. Hijo stepped into one a prepared to attack. He started the attack jumping from one spot to another, but Itachi using his sharingan was able to dodge
the attacks.
"Amaterusu!" Jet black flames shot from Itachi's mouth hitting the mirros. The intense heat was able to melt them and one flame hit Hijo and he was injured. He had already been hit once by it, and now twice. He felled to the ground with a leg, and his chest charred with ash. Naruto saw that he was all by himself now, but he could sense the nearby presence of ANBU. All he had to was was hide a little more.
"Odama Rasengan Rider!!!" (from chappy # 8 or was it 7... maybe six?) He put the large rasengan under him and released energy steadily propelling him away from Itachi. Soon Naruto lost view of Itachi and thought that he had outrun him but when he turned his head the Uchiha was in front of him.
"You can't run boy..."Naruto took the rasengan from under him and threw it at Itachi. He was blown away, or was he? No, a subsitution poofed into view as the rasengan hit, blasting it to smitherines.
"Where'd he go?" he mumbled to himself.
"I'm right here." and Itachi had Naruto in a headlock. At this same time the ANBU arrived at the scene. Itachi pulled out a kunai knife and put it to the jincurikis neck.
"Move, and he dies." Naruto thought about the comment. If he died the Kyuubi would be gone to, and if he was gone that meant the Atatsuki wouldn't be able to get all the tailed beast. That meant he was bluffing! He gave a wink to the ninja to send the message. The ANBU nodded and disappeared. Itachi thinking they had left began to go find his partner, with Naruto still within his grasp. But suddenly and barrage of kunai flew from all directions. Itachi startled let go of Naruto allowing him to escape. If he went after Naruto, he would be captured. He hesitated and then retreated to get Kisame and escape. Naruto saw the leader of the team and said
"Two of my comrades are injured, can you help them?"
"We'll get some medics over here right away, you've done enough today, you can go home."
Naruto nodded and sprintd back towards the village. It seemed he wouldn't be meeting the rest of the clan until Hijo was back. It didn't matter though, having some action for a change was good enough.
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Hey guys.. well I hope you enjoyed... if you didnt ill have to throw you in a stove.
Turns stove on
Ill be having you for dinner...