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The True Patriot: Ok... :/
Spottedivy: Their is a pairing in this chappie! :D
Syckness: I won't, thanks for the compliment!
Lala: Thanks! Hope you enjoyed my other fics too :)
Lala: I like Cherryleaf, TigerxIvy... hmmmmmm
Lakestorm: I know right, she was just being the angry Dovewing she sometimes is, she is going to have a mega quarrel in the next chapter
Lakestorm: I put one in your other one, since you LOVE spoilers (P;S, I 3 spoilers too) Before I read The Last Hope, I ordered it in the mail... I was looking in wiki pages and it told me who the new leader and deputy were going to be, and I practically almost pulled my hair out trying to forget! D:
Cinderheart22: Thanks! The name was named after my cat Mango, I'm wondering if I should change it occasionly between Crystalshine and Blossomstripe (My other cats) And yes, I know your a big CINDERHEART fan... But r u an Icecloud fan?
Guest: Thanks! I'd love to read your stories if I knew your username :(
Super Ninja Whiskers: Seedpaw is so fuzzy and cute, and Icecloud, look down, you might see her a few times (spoiler)
Runningfur: Nah, I don't live in New York... too bad, I would've liked you :D Olivia (Names: Maybe something to do with IvyxDovexLionxJay)
AelitaOfTheWolves: I'm using that in the next chapter! :P
The special POV! The one you've all been waiting for! It's so obvious who it is, but if you can't figure it out, find out at the bottom, it says her name
There is going to be a sign of affection between Special POV/Mousewhisker
Do you like my new fanfic? (It;s short cuz it's special)
The pretty cat blinked open her eyes, seeing Lionblaze beside her made her feel worser than she had yesterday
"Why do you love her?" her eyes focused on Cinderheart, who was sharing tongues with Poppyfrost outside the nursery
Why doesn't Cinderheart be with Foxleap, and I can be with Lionblaze… then the thought shook her head she's expecting his kits, you'll never be his!
We were close as apprentices, why did it have to change? And when I was a kit, I said I'd miss him when he left, didn't he catch a hint there? Or is he so clueless, that he never noticed?
And when did Cinderheart like Lionblaze? Just last moon or so, I've loved him since I first opened my blue eyes!
I got up and shook my white fur and began my way out of the warrior den
Squirrelflight was looking at her "Finally you're up! I want you to lead a hunting patrol, take Mousewhisker, Cinderheart and Lionblaze," the deputy ordered
Oh no, StarClan don't make me go with those two!
"She's expecting kits! I don't think she should go…" the whitish cat lied
"This'll be her last patrol, make it a good one!" Squirrelflight snapped, and she narrowed her eyes and lashed her tail in frustration and called to Cinderheart "Hunting patrol, get Lionblaze and Mousewhisker," she told the pregnant she cat
Cinderheart looked at her with narrowed blue eyes… She doesn't like me, maybe if she knew my true feelings and heard me out, she would understand, but I doubt I'll get to talk to her alone… ever
When she snapped back into the real world, Mousewhisker was near her "Hey," he told her kindly "Foxleap told me about you and Lionblaze," he licked her ear gently
She drew away, causing hurt to flash in Mousewhisker's eyes "What did he tell you?" Great StarClan she hated her brother… but she was sad he was sick "When did he tell you?"
"He told me just before he fell ill, that you liked him, and he was mates with Cinderheart… I just felt sorry for you,"
"I don't need your pity!" she snapped at him, walking faster
Was no one going to treat her right? She felt a flash of guilt when she slowed down slightly
Mousewhisker was just being nice…
She turned around and walked towards him, he didn't meet her gaze "Sorry Mousewhisker," she told him
"It's alright…" his voice was saddened, she had heard it once before when Honeyfern was dying, and Berrynose was grieving
"What's wrong?" she wasn't entirely focused on him
Lionblaze and Cinderheart were brushing pelts, their tails entwined and their heads bent close together as if they had been in love forever
"Nothing important," he told her, sadness welling in his eyes
It looked like he was about to break into tears, but he didn't
"Come on Mousewhisker, it does look important to me? I'm concerned about you!"
"You are? No one else is…" Mousewhisker told her sadly
"What about Daisy? Or Berrynose? Or Hazeltail?"
"Daisy is busy getting over the Spiderleg thing and making the nursery as strong as it can be, Berrynose and Hazeltail are busy training Lilypaw and Seedpaw," his mew was bitter
"I'm here for you, we can be friends right?" the white cat asked curiously, touching her nose to his cheek sympathetically
"Thanks, I'm glad I have you as a friend…" he told her, his eyes soft and friendly, no longer saddened
The blue eyed she cat purred "Come on, let's get on with the hunt," she told him
"Of course… Icecloud,"
QUOTE (Icecloud's loyalty is proved)
"I was just showing Icepaw how I was going to catch a fox and earn my warrior name," Foxpaw meowed. "I want to be called Foxcatcher!"
"Well, you've proved you can catch a sleeping cat!" Honeypaw teased.
Icepaw jumped to her brother's defence. "He'll catch a real fox one day!"
QUOTE (After all she's done for you Foxleap, you blurt her secret)
I know this is short… but I promise to make the next one longer!
Dovewing and Ivypool are easier in my opinion… and Jayfeather's temper and blindness is super annoying, cuz I've never wrote as him, besides in The Randomest Couples, where he is paired with Jayfeather: Yellowfang, Willowshine, Icecloud, Littlecloud, and Dovetuft (Starting Ice, Little and Dove)
Lionblaze: Dovewing, Dawnpelt, Snowdrop, Whitefall (Just finished Snowdrop, not Whitefall though)
Ivypool: Tigerheart, Hawkfrost, Berrynose + Mousewhisker & Honeyfern, Darkstripe, Breezepelt, Toadstep, Rowanclaw (I haven't finished, Darkstripe, Toadstep, Rowanclaw… and the chapter with Honey x Mouse… it is Berry x Ivy and Mouse x Honey in the same chapter, not all of them)
Dovewing: Firestar, Lionblaze