Hey guys, yeah, I'm still sick and let just say asthma and the flu doesn't mix well but oh way right. Anyway, if you hate me for the next few chapters I'm sorry. Also, I know my grammar has some problems but my brain doesn't notice thing that are wrong. On to the story now -Lyn

Disclaimer: VR is mostly rich….I'm poor therefore I'm not VR

When I walk out of the meeting room it's noon and I can't wait to get home so I'm wait at the track for the train. Next thing I know I'm hit with some and start seeing spot. Then Robert and Marcus standing over me. The spots have taken over and I can't see any more I just feel the pain

Tris POV

When I wake up my head is ponding. I am in a dark room that only has two lights and two beds both on the opposite sides of the room there also I few kid's toys. I guess this mean there is a kid. It very cold and there only a small window just too high for me to see out of. Their water it sounds like a water fall but it could also be a river. I have a feeling I'm in the caves about a mile away from Amity. So off grid besides for cell phones…. wait mine in my pocket. I was about to pull it out when a boy who look no younger than 7 came out of the corner he dressed in dauntless clothing. He looks so scared and hunger, I know I have some energy bars from the train ride that I stole so I hand one to him. His eyes light up and he takes it.

"mine names James, what your?" James asks

"I'm Tris, how long have you been down here James and how old are you?" the boy looks upset but still answers

"I am 10 but been down here for 2 years. Do you have any more food I'm so hunger" he looks so tried and young for his age. I also hunger but hand him the last bar I have. And he starts eating it. The last time I heard of a boy gone missing from dauntless was James I know his family as well. They haven't given up hope yet and I will get James home. The door opens and Marcus walks in with a belt in his hand. James looks so scared and upset that it looks like he'll cry.

"James, you what time it is" Marcus says with the most hateful look in the world. He pulls James up and I know what going to happen. I have to stop it, so I do.

"Marcus leave him alone, let me take his place." James look truly relived but Marcus look downright happy was this a plan. He push James to the other side of the room and James hit his back and I can tell it hurt.

"already Tris let get started. I would suggest take you shirt off so your shirt isn't ruined." so I do and the whip hit my back it hurt like I don't know what but he keeps going James just hiding in the corner. But I can still feel the tears running down the side of my face. This was for James and I don't regard it one pit, he doesn't need any more pain it. He will get home to his family I'll make sure

About I guess an hour later Marcus stopped hitting me and left me with pain medicine and food for James and Me. I took a great deal of food and gave it to James along with my pain medicine knowing he need them. But then I start up on a plan.

"James let get out of here" he just looks at me crazy. I take my night stand and push it over to the window so James and me can get to the window. I pull out a knife I have in my shoe from this morning and cut around the window take it out.

"You first James" he doesn't even ask he just climbs out and I do too. When we do get out I see I was right about the caves but it also really dark. Me and Robert would always come here when my dad took us to Amity. It about a 45 min run but an 1 hour walk. We started walk and when it looks like James will pass out we find shelter. I don't know why but there was a hut a little off the trail so we stopped there.

There are two beds James get in one and goes to sleep and I stay up. I wanted to sleep but just couldn't so I took watch. I pull my phone out and see it been 4 days also that it 3 am. Tobias is most likely tearing the Factions apart looking for me. I texting hoping he still awake

(Bold is Tris Underline is Tobias)

Tobias, It Tris I'm still in Amity. I need help, if you remember the boy from the year after you pick Dauntless. I found him and he's with me. Please meet me at the train. Marcus and Robert kidnapped me. I miss you so much. I know the tear are coming but I really miss him. So they do and I can't stop them

Tris is that really you. I need proof. Tell me something that you only know I really want to laugh but I don't I need him I miss him

Your afraid of heights and closed space. Your also are afraid of killing innocents and Marcus.

Now Tris I know this is you but also the last two are a lie. Anyway, Tris where are you and are you ok. do you think you can get to in hour Amity or no?

No, James was to sleepy so we had to find a place for him to sleep and my back is in pain. Tobias, we are in a hut we got away. Go to the hill side of amity there should be a road take it. About half way there should be a hut that where we are.

Tris I love you, I'll be there in 30 min. please be safe

And with that I cry hard then I ever have. James I guess heard and wakes up and walks over and hugs me

PAGE BREAK, 20 MIN LATER

James wanted back to sleep but there a knock at the door so I wake him.

"James get under the bed and be quite till I know who it is" I whisper to him and he does once he under I open the door it Marcus and Robert. But Marcus gun point at my head and Robert stay outside

"Hello stupid, you'd really think you could get away. Where the boy" Marcus says in the most pissed off way ever

"I don't know" I say but he hits me.

"Lies, NOW WHERE IS HE" He asks again

" I don't know" I'm so glad James is being silent he should go to home. But next thing I know I hear Robert yelling and then a gun shot. Marcus flips the safety off and get ready to fire when Tobias burst in. There was no chance for me and Marcus's gun goes off. Hitting my shoulder, it hurts like hell but I need to fight. I punch Marcus knocking him out. I run to Tobias but before I get there something outside hit the window. The bullet hit me and in my stomach and I fall to my knees. James comes out from under the bed and the black spot are back. But Tobias pick me up soon followed by James and take me outside to a truck from Dauntless

"Stay with me Tris, please Tris with me" he was cry. James was also crying and the spot were becoming bigger

"I Love you Tobias" that all I can say before the dots take over but I still hear and I feel like I'm being shaken

"Tris Tris, wake up Tris come on stay with me" that all I hear when I'm completely black out

Hey guys so what do you think, and to all those people who think it over it not. I swear on my grave that this isn't it. I'll have one up tomorrow -Lyn