Hey, OK, I love the idea behind this story (some of it anyway) but it's terribly written! Like most of my fanfics that I wrote when I was 15 haha. So I'm planning on re-writing this one, and maybe a few others. I WILL get around to it, just been very busy with trying to move out, cosplay making, anime conventions, magic/fire shows and so on. But yeah...I will re-write the shit out of this.