Wow were not done with the story yet but we might be getting close. please review!


Chp 10: Jin's precious date

"Ne my goddess would you please date me now?" Jin begged. "But Jin-kun" Karin said. "Please Karin-chan?" Karin thinking about her answer. "I guess" "Yay!"

(Please wait a moment while Jin does his dance of joys)

(After school)

"Eh? Karin where are you going?" Kazune asked. (After school Jin ran back home to change and was going to wait for her at the park)

"Oh K-kazune-kun!" Karin was surprised and blushed. "So where are you going?" Karin blushed even more because he kept on leaning towards her.

"I'm going out with a friend." Karin said nervously. "Oh which one?" Kazune looked mad thinking that it was a boy.

Karin said who it was without thinking. "Jin-kun"

(Karin's mind: Ah what did I just say)

Kazune backed off from what she said. "Kazune-ku-"

"Go; go on now he's probably waiting!" Kazune ran and started crying like he held his tears for many years.

So Karin left to where Jin is. "Ah my goddess!" Karin didn't say a word because of what Kazune said.

"Karin-chan? Hmmm. Ah I know Karin follow me."

"Ah, ok"

So Karin followed Jin and Jin bought her some ice cream. (Author's note: What's with the buying ice cream in these dates?)

"Here" Jin said giving her a strawberry ice cream while he has chocolate ice cream. "Thank you Jin-kun"

"Hmm I never did try strawberry ice cream before. May I try Karin-chan?" Jin asked. Karin said her answer without thinking again.

"Ah! Yeah…" As soon as Jin licked some of her ice cream she remembered that Kazune did the same thing when they went out. (From when it was Himeka's birthday)

Jin looked at Karin and asked, "It's Kujyou huh?"

"Eh?! Yeah" Jin giggled. "What?" Karin asked. "How about try to not think about him for a day ok?" Jin tried to not make it sound that he isn't mad.

"O-ok, I guess I can try." Karin responded. Then out of nowhere Karin wasn't really noticing it but Jin leaned as if he was about to kiss her and then he spotted Kazune walking around the park.

(Wowie I wonder if Kazune spotted Jin and Karin? And will Jin kiss Karin? We'll find out in the next chapter)


Geez school and everything hopefully at the weekend i can update more chps other then two maybe like 4 chps maybe but on chp16 its really cute though.