So I've been reading through my emails recently and I've noticed that I've been getting many followers and favourites for two of my other stories Love Triangle and Just One More Kiss. Plus, I will be getting around to doing more stories; I want at least Love Triangle, this one or A Matter of Time to be completed before I start anything else. I'm more focused on completing A Matter of Time but I've got writer's block on that one hopefully not for long though because of course I want to get that one done.
But unfortunately, I've got a few things that are still in the way of my stories so I don't have much time to get 'inspired' to write anything for the other two. I only get time when I have no assignments, tests, family or friends' birthdays coming up within a few days or even a week or so. ^^; And I've got a friends' birthday coming up and I've barely started her present so I only have at least a day to get it done, I've only done the base and I've just started on the hair. XC
Anyway, I kinda love this story now but I'm not sure how long it's going to be. Hopefully it'll be less than 20 chapters. I'm aiming for 15-17 chapters? Maybe less? I don't know, but I'm actually quite glad that people take interest in one of my OC's (Carol), I might make more related to my OC's ^^
Danny Phantom © Butch Hartman
Carol's POV:
Ugh, when can I get out of here? This place is freaking the hell out of me! There were people around me who were crying, staring, touching and scaring the world out of me, I just wanted to scream and run. But I knew who would go straight after me first and that would be that half ghost freak Danny.
"Carol, come back to us." The woman with brunette hair kinda like mine sobbed with wet soapy tears draining down her cheeks.
"Can you stop crying like I'm your baby or something? I don't belong here!"
Jazz stopped poking me; I felt her breath heating up my cheek. She was right next to me; this made me shiver with fear. I didn't know what to feel, either fear or anger.
"Jazz, get your hot breath off of my cheek."
I turned slightly to see her eyes watering almost like a waterfall under pressure, her pink glossy lips trembled with what I assumed were fear and worry. I raised an eyebrow and tried to shift away using the chair to move myself but unfortunately the brunette woman was on my other side with that Danny approaching from behind. I felt surrounded and claustrophobic.
"I need some air."
"I'll take her outside."
"No Jazz, I should take her out." The brunette claimed drying her tears.
"Guys, I just want to go outside because I'm claustrophobic with you guys surrounding me like this!"
Instead of being polite to these freaks, it was time to take some action and take matters into my own hands for a change. So and grunted again then stormed off outside as I quickly tried to transform and fly off, why didn't I do this in the first place? Oh man I'm so stupid! Thank god I left that house full of idiotic freaks.
I flew off with a sigh of relief along with a smile upon my face, I turned my head to make sure but then I saw the whole family run out. But none of them ran after me, they didn't even look up at me. Except Danny and Jazz though, they couldn't keep their eyes off of me.
Danny's POV:
Crap, I had to get her without transforming in front of my parents! But how was I supposed to do that? C'mon Danny, you're a Fenton you can do this, oh wait I'm a Fenton…I'm dumb…I get C's so I'm not so smart after all. But Carol is and it won't be long until I lose her almost for good. And I haven't had time to find that Nectorya ghost yet because of all this! I'm gunna lose it if Carol doesn't start behaving any time soon.
"Mum, Dad, you two go check the east and west in the RV while Danny and I check the south in my car. Got it?"
Mum and Dad nodded and then ran off back into the house and out the back to get the RV while Jazz nodded at me as a sign as to go hide and transform but Jazz wasn't lying about her coming along with me to help find Carol. She tagged along in her small pink car behind me as I flew just above some of the buildings to see if I could spot her.
It wasn't long later that I started to hear the voice of a young but dark ghost. Nectorya was around, but my ghost sense didn't go off, she must have been a little further so I continued to fly forward but still no ghost sense. This was getting weird, normally when I hear a ghost or actually before I even start hearing the voice of a ghost I sense them.
"Show yourself you memory stealer!"
I was in no mood for puns, this was dead serious. Nectorya must be defeated! I want my sister back, that's all I want! Is it so much to ask?
All I could hear was an evil but lady-like laugh all around me, I heard Jazz call out to me, and I looked down to see her point a little more to the right than my position. I looked there and saw that same ghost with that pale white skin of a ghost with that long grey tail and black hair almost like mine in human form with her same dress with that same star design in the middle. But there was something different about her that I just couldn't make out; it took me a few minutes to realize the size and colour of her eyes.
She had grown larger, kinda like when Desiree got more powerful with more wishes granted if you know what I mean. And her eyes weren't a glowing green anymore, they were a fiery red. I assumed that she had turned even more pure evil.
"What did you do to my sister Carol?"
"Bring her back you memory thief!" Jazz cried from below.
Nectorya laughed with greed and evil, her hands looked like claws of an aggressive cat about to attack.
"Fools! I have almost erased all of her memory and fed on it! It's only less than a few hours until I consume all of her memories!"
I gasped with sudden movement. "Wait, she's still got some of her memories?"
"Not for long." She chuckled with her hair covering one of her eyes making her look even more veil and greedy.
I growled at her and began to fight, this was the only way to solve problems, defeating her would restore Carol's memories and everyone will be happy!
I took a deep and loud breath as I sucked in as much air as I could to activate my ghostly wail on her. As I screamed out my wail, she was blown towards a building which shattered her tail like glass, it turned out that her tail wasn't real at all; she actually had a pink tail. But that didn't matter to me; all that mattered was to get my little sister back!
You do that Danny! Save your sister! But are you going the right way? I don't think so ^^; What do you guys think? Review and guess if you want! ;D
Next update: 17th March