Hi once more! So thank you so so so so so so so so so much for your criticism yeecat! Although there are a few things i would like 2 explain. There will be an explanation as to why the cats are so weird. Also i just accidentally forgot to fix that thing with rainbowshine but she does go by she/her. And, some of the stuff i have improved since the earlier chapters. Thank u 4 your inputthough! :D Anyway onto the fic.

Darkwhisper led everyone to a clearing in the forest filled with cats, some with collars. They were all eating prey. The clearing was surrounded by strange flowers that none of the apprentices had ever seen! And tiny waterfalls circled it. "Here we are the camp of the Alliance."

"Woah! this place is amazing!" Said Prismpaw. "But what is the alliance for?"

The fluffy white cat said "Theres a darkness looming and we arent sure what. this place is here to find out what this darkness is and prevent it from hurting anyone!"

"Why is it so hidden?" asked Petalpaw. "With a goal like that youd think more cats would know about it!"

Magicmist said "Well if ya were smart enough youd know that saying that something like that could happen would cause mass panic."

Darkwhisper squinted at Magicmist and continued. "And the clans dont like cats like us. They think we're nothing more than lazy kittypets. But no matter where we came from we are all united. So we cant let any of the clans know we're here."

The small tom spoke up. "I never introduced myself to you. im Cloudy! I used to be a kittypet but i ran away. And now i live here!"

"And i am Darkwhisper. I was once dead, but then i was resserected." He said as he bowed.

Petalpaw thought for amoment then mewed "I have brought a cat back to life before!"

All of the cats in the clearing turned to look at her in shock. "No way!" squeaked Cloudy.

Darkwhisper gasped. "You are the one! What is your name?"

"Well im Petalpaw and this is my friend Prismpaw. But what am i the one of?"

"You are the one the legends fortold... Our Skyrreader Hollyfeather had saw a prophecy from inside the Vision pool..."

Magicmist interrupted Darkwhisper by saying "Theres no way they know what that is Darkwhisper. Come one, if you insist that this kit's spcial, take em to the Vision pool."

Darkwhisper nodded. "Follow me, young ones. " He led them to a cave covered up by lavender vines. Inside was a black cat with red eyes and a holly leaf by her ear. She was standing over a pool that reflecting the sunrise even though it was evening. "Hollyfeather, i have found the Told One."

The cat named Hollyfeather gasped and turned around. "You really mean it!?"

Magicmist said "No, hes just pullin your leg. What do ya think!?"

Hollyfeather blinked away tears. "Please stop being mean, magicmist..."

Darkwhisper went over and comforted Hollyfeather. "Just ignore her... Magicmist acts like this to everyone. Now then, Petalpaw? Please introduce yourself to Hollyfeather."

"Well i... revived a cat i guess..."

Prismpaw perked up an said "Shes soooo cool! She brought back Foxflight who gave her life fighting badgers! Andthen she defeated them all! Shes the best cat ever!"

"Prismpaw, im not that great really!"

"Dont say that! Youre perfect!"

Darkwhisper said "Its true. Your powers are beyond compare. However, this means we have found our first link to the prophecy... And soon more will be revealed..."

Petalpaw tilted her head. "What is the prophecy?"

Hollyfeathers eyes suddenly began showing clouds. "The thousand year kin will bring the new dawn, and dreams will light the way once again. The cats of the flaming storm will return, but beware of the one of Crimson Blood."

"Ive heard that in a dream before!"

Hollyfeather widened her eyes. "Really!?"

"Yeah! A black cat with a red feather and a white cat with a blue feather told me it in a flood!"

"Amazing! :o"

Darkwhisper dipped his head and said "It has to be true. You are the told one Petalpaw."

Prismpaws eyes sparkled with amazement. "I knew you were special Petalpaw but this is incrdible! :D"

"Is there anything else you know?" asked Hollyfeather.

Petalpaw looked away. "Well... i dont know if this is related but my brother acts strange and hes named bloodpaw..."

Cloudy tilted his head."Wel thats not his fault! Darkwhisper used to be named Mr fluffyshade-"

DArkwhisper interrupted the young cat by saying "Please dont bring that up Cloudy!" Meanwhile Magicmist was laughing.

Hollyfeather asked. "Acting strange in what way?"

"Well i mean hes acting agressive and mean... Also whenever im around him i feel a sort of dark presence..."

Magicmist stopped laughing. "Oh."