I don't own any of these characters…but I Do wish I owned Orlando Bloom…or Will Turner…or Johnny Depp…or Captain Jack Sparrow…(haha! Van-that'd be a lovely match, that…me and Jack…hehehehe…imagine the types of fun we'd have…not in a nasty sort of way…but, you know me…no one would ever believe me and Jack Sparrow…hehehehe!)
A/N: This is an alternate ending to the movie-I'm sure that if you read the preceding chapters, you'll know what's been going on and whatnot. Savvy? *-*
A/N #2: This is the chapter you wanted…and I'm giving it to you…Savvy? *-* (I love saying that…)
A/N #3: This chapter is for the wonderful Mistress of Mordor, AND of course!…everyone else who likes (or perhaps…loves!) this story. I'm actually posting so that the lovely Mistress will have something to do before Sunday….AND I realized that I had already written this chapter…which I thought I didn't…but I did, and I'm posting sooner than I expected…Savvy? Oh yeah…this chapter is a bit shorter…like A LOT shorter…sorry 'bout that….But it's all I can do in this amount of time!!!!
Summary: This is like an alternate ending to the movie…I'm at the spot where well…read the "previously" thing….
Previously, on Defeat:
"Give me the knife," Barbossa demanded, his voice gave no room for any 'funny business.'
She took a deep breath and reluctantly handed the knife over to Barbossa.
He took the knife and put it to her throat.
"Stand up," he demanded, pressing the knife ever so slightly harder on her pale throat.
She got up.
"Now," he said, "Get ou' of me clothes."
Elizabeth shifted her eyes to where the knife was. "I can't do anything while that is threatening to kill me. Take it away, or I can't take this off," she said testily.
Barbossa thought about it for a moment and finally took it away from her throat. It had left a slightly red mark, but it hadn't broken the skin.
Elizabeth closed her eyes and took a step back, but not so far back that Barbossa would advance upon her again…once again, invading her space. Then she complied to Barbossa's demands…
Slowly, she started to untie and unlace the ribbon on her dress, making Barbossa's eyes grow wide with lust.
She then opened the front of her dress ever so slightly so she could unlace the corset from underneath. Then, suddenly, she shed the dress, the corset, and the numerous petticoats in one swift movement.
Barbossa's jaw dropped. What he saw shocked him.
She still had clothes on!
Barbossa was utterly furious. Elizabeth, sweet meat Elizabeth, was supposed to be naked right now- no fully clothed in the attire of the Royal Navy! "Take. That. Off. Too," he commanded, his rage creeping into his voice, just as Elizabeth's fear and panic ran deeper into he body still.
Sure, she had clothes on now, but Barbossa had a knife and he was stronger than her… What was she going to do now? "NO!" was all she could muster up and yell back at him.
"TAKE IT BLOODY OFF!" he roared at her, spraying spit everywhere.
Yet still, Elizabeth refused, and Barbossa resumed his advancing. Slowly, be put one foot in front of another until he was inches from her face. His breath was foul and Elizabeth looked away, trying to evade the disgusting smell wafting up into her nose. Barbossa took no notice of her reaction as he reached for a lock of her honey-brown hair that had fallen out of place. The moment her touched it, every single muscle in Elizabeth's body seized up.
"Yer awful perty, Miss Elizabeth," Barbossa started, but he didn't get to finish, for Elizabeth had interrupted him.
"You are FOUL; inside and out. I would rather spend an eternity in the 'brig' of the Pearl with Will and Jack, than stay with you a moment more," she nearly spat on him, but caught herself before she did so – it probably wouldn't help…
"I'm afraid missy, that ye don't have a choice," Barbossa continued, and he took his other hand and reached for her breast.
Elizabeth was absolutely taken aback. He was touching her breast! She had no idea what to do…no one had touched her like that…except for Will…sweet Will…but she couldn't think about that now…she had to think of something…fast. Finally, a remarkable thought came to her…and she stepped closer to Barbossa.
Just for the slightest moment did Barbossa feel some confusion, but he didn't have time to dwell on it, except to squeeze her breast harder; but in a split second, Elizabeth had her knee jammed into his crotch, making him double over in immense pain.
Elizabeth was a little shocked at the effect it had o Barbossa - she'd never done it and she wasn't sure if she could do it hard enough, so she put all her effort into it, and it worked.
But not for long.
Barbossa was up quicker than she had thought was likely and he grabbed both of her wrists in a death grip. He was wheezing and his eyes burned with rage. "All right, then. I'll take ye up on yer offer - but seein' as ye didn't list any terms…I'll make 'em up. All righ'?" he didn't leave room for disagreement, for his voice was pure poison. "It's just two simple conditions, right luv?" he spat out the last word. Elizabeth nodded meekly, her wrists and hands were starting to burn from the pressure. "One – ye don't come ou' of that cell 'til ye do everythin' I want yer ter do. And two - ye don't…well, I'll save tha' one fer when we get on the Pearl…" he smiled evilly, showing his rotten teeth and he dragged her off to the Pearl…
A/N: Hey!!! How'd ya like it? I'm sorry it's short…I was up late that night, and I had a killer time the next day trying to stay awake….like today…I tried writing last night…that didn't' work…I was up til 12 A.M. trying to figure out what happens next…I came up with "nuthin." And god…I had to wake up at 6 to go to school…I was nearly dying today….math and science were SUCH a bore….I swear….I only caught like 10 words my math teacher said….the guy next to me was like that too…but he's nice eye candy…so I guess math isn't that bad…OK!!! Anyways…enough about that…you probably don't want to hear about that…. I was daydreaming during most of the day today and I've come up with something….so never fear….a chapter will be near! Near as in….maybe a week…maybe this Sunday…ya never know…So-I'll post whenever I get a long chapter written and well…yeah…so I hope you liked this chapter! I was going to put it into the last chapter I did, but then I figured it'd be more fun if I waited…so I wrote it in a different notebook, and it wasn't 'til today that I found it again…so that's my story! Savvy???
Cheers!
Tati Bloom aka Elf Girl
PS: I love Orlando Bloom!!!
A GLORIOUS THANKS TO…
Everyone who reviewed!!!! I'm on my way to a show right now…so I can't reply, but I WILL reply in my next chapter, and I haven't had time to check for errors….so excuse those too! Wish me luck!!!! Bye!