Into a Brand New World
Chapter 10: Vincent & Garrett vs. Roark & Damion!
Disclaimer: Do not own Pokemon only the games, etc.
Now...I'm adding a new session...REVIEW REPLIES! Yes thats right! Review replies! Some of you know me for this and some others for replying to reviews and well...I was actually debating on this so...I decided, "Eh, why not? It'll show them I care!" and well here we have our awesome Review Reply Corner! With your host...me! Starting with Chapter 9 reviews of a current status!
Chapter 9:
Godly345: Well thank you! I'll be eating cookies for breakfast, lunch, snack, and dinner eating on a throne! I knew someone enjoys my work!
8Tyedye8: Hmm...I don't know about that there, re-alert the story? I don't know I'm not that good with computer fixing anyway
Cutie Kyuubi: Nice name by the way, I always enjoyed the Kitsune/Kyuubi/Juubi series, they're so cool! And I'm not sure if Brock's going to make an appearance. If he does Ash is going to follow in then, I don't know why but I can't imagine them seperated, but anyway thanks for the OC!
Daughter of Kabegami: Interesting name, and wow! I've never seen ANYONE nerd out like that! I just KNEW there were Pokemon nerds like me!
Chapter 8:
Pokestets23: Thanks for the confidence man, you've probably been one of the ones who've stuck with me my whole Pokemon fanfic writing career and for that, I thank you.
ThreeBlackNoises: Well thank you! I've always believed that everyone has a second chance no matter how evil or how impure, everyone has a second chance in my eyes...except in some cases Sasuke...depends on my mood.
Godly345: Ah yes, mi amigo, I can see you were the only one that wanted Vincent to be paired Mars...either that or the only one who said anything. But anyway thank you again.
Bleach2121XX: Well! Detailed OC and a fellow Zelda fan I see? And done on an iPod touch? Damn...I envy you...but anyway nice, not the 1st time I've heard son of a Rocket scientist, and probably not the last either.
Daughter of Kabegami: I knew your name looked familiar...I got this feeling of deja vu seeing it. But I'm not sure if you sent it or not, I'll check...probably did however and I'm just acting dumb but, resend/send it alright? Thanks.
Chapter 7:
Pokestets23: Why thank you! Glad you think it is!
Pokegeek13: Like I told 'Stets: Thank you! And knowing me, I'm updating soon!
Godly345: Haha! My friend I like your thinking! I actually had this pairing in mind once I started literally writing the final chapter in class. I ain't giving any details however so don't try. And besides...I can't find the paper of it anyway so...yeah.
Chapter 6:
Pokestets23: -I chuckle- Do I have to say it again? Thank you!
Darkromdemon: Thanks, glad to know you enjoy and approve this story! I actually feel like Uncle Sam right now. I want you in Blazing Eternal's army!
Chapter 5:
G.M: Well I wouldn't call it a LoZ/Pokemon crossover, we won't see Link or Zelda running around with a...actually scratch that. It MAY happen but if it does it'll be hidden very well! Promise!
Pokestets23: They truly do, I honestly like Duskull more than most Pokemon except for a few others. But they indeed do have interesting personalities.
Jayvee1669: Alrighty then! Ket will be introduced soon enough I promise ya!
phealDude: Nah, no you aren't, just because you forget one thing doesn't mean anything. I do it all the time, I believe it's called...spazism. But anyone alright, I'm fine with that.
Eonhunter357: Glad to know you like the idea, makes me wonder though...am I the only one who has done a work like this? Where someone gets sucked inside a game? I've never heard of Duskull being called adorable before...I wonder if Reaper would like to know that?
Chapter 3:
Cutie Kyuubi: Nice OC, and could I change it to Albright? I don't know why but it looks...nicer like that. And is Flopsy the only Pokemon Krystal, is going to have?
Jayvee1669: Alright, I'll fit Ket where I see fit! Probably going into Floaroma Town, alrighty?
SphealDude: Ah! Now THIS one is going to be fun! Fitting in the Hoenn Champion? -Snaps and points at him- I like your style! As you can probably see I crashed and burned on my Tohari Adventures...I still haven't gotten over that but anyway hey! This one is going to be fun!
Chapter 2:
Pokegeek: Glad you think so dude!
Species Unknown:...GET ISRAPHEL AWAY FROM ME! I WILL HAVE XEPHOS AND HONEYDEW OWN YOU! Er...HIM! AH FORGET IT! But anyway I will!
Amekoryuu: Is that Japanese for something? I absolutely LOVE Japanese culture! And yes, I like putting in that bit of...shortness for a poll like that. I honestly (as shown by chapter 3) let Vincent grab his 1st Pokemon, much more interesting that he caught it instead of recieving it like always.
8Tyedye8: I know, my writing has been a little...off for a bit it seems. But anyway Mudkip are going to be on someone elses team, thats a promise!
Chapter 1:
Me:...-My eye twitches- Oh sweet Kami above. -Places gun against my head and squeezes the trigger- TOO MANY!
But anyway! Back to the awesomeness at hand!
"The challengers have decided! Vincent Valentine with a Purugly, Garrett Harrison with a Piplup, Roark Hyouta with his Aerodactyl, and Damion McLauren with his Graveler! This will be a Tag Battle the trainers are not allowed to switch Pokemon! This will also be a 3-on-3 Tag Battle! LET THE MATCH...BEGIN!" The ref shouted as I got on my game face. The battle for the Coal Badge...has begun!
"Alright Graveler! Use Rock Throw on Piplup!" Damion shouted as Graveler rolled over to a stack of large rocks. He picked up two of them and threw them at Garrett's Piplup who's eyes widened and it ran in a circle.
"Purugly use Water Pulse!" I shouted as Purugly inhaled and exhaled water soundwaves which hit the rocks and blew them back. They hit Graveler who flew and hit another rock.
"Graveler!" Damion shouted as Graveler got out and man did he look madder than ever! Graveler picked up a boulder an actual BOULDER and threw it which literally FLEW at Purugly.
"OH ARCEUS! HELP ME!" Purugly meowed loudly. She looked around and ran but Graveler threw another just as the 1st one hit.
"Piplup! Help out Purugly by using Water Gun on Graveler!" Garrett said as Piplup inhaled and exhaled a large stream of water which hit Graveler in the stomach making it drop the boulder it held. Graveler held its arms infront of him and then curled up into a ball and begun to roll at Piplup.
"Good! Now Aerodactyl, use your Air Cutter on Purugly!" Roark shouted. Aerodactyl's wings glowed white as it flapped said wings shooting waves of wind at Purugly.
"Purugly dodge it and then Water Pulse!" I shouted as Purugly jumped. She then inhaled and exhaled the same soundwaves of water at Aerodactyl like before. This one however was point blank. Aerodactyl fell and I heard not one growl but two. One from Roark and the other from Damion. I then turned over to Garrett and saw his Piplup was now a Prinplup. Then I saw Graveler was KO'ed...verdammt. That was one strong attack. They both recalled their fainted Pokemon and just as they brought out their second a man burst in.
"Roark! We have a problem!" The man shouted. He was a normal scientist with the normal height and coat.
"What's the problem Rob?" Roark asked running over.
"Team Galactic! They've taken over the museum!" The man named Rob said as I ran out instantly Purugly not far behind. We entered the museum and saw a man about the height of 5' 8" standing infront of Savannah. He had blue hair which was spiky and stood up everywhere. He wore the same uniform as former Commander Mars.
"Vhat are you doing here Fraulein Mars?" He asked in a heavy German accent.
"I...I've given up my life of crime Neptune." Savannah said. Neptune then raised an eyebrow.
"So you have given up on Leiter Cyrus' dream? Such a shame! You bring disgrace and dishonor to Team Galactic's name!" Neptune shouted at her in which she flinched and turned away.
"I realized the truth! Cyrus is a nut! He is insane! He cares about creating a world where..." She was then cut off as everyone heard a loud smack and something hit the floor. Neptune...just smacked...Mars...
"You insolent child! How DARE you call Leiter Cyrus insane! For that I will..." His rant was then cut short...by me.
"HEY! ARSCHLOCH!" I shouted literally giving off energy like that of Satan. He turned so fast I swore he got whiplash.
"I am not an arschloch!" He shouted.
"YOU JUST SLAPPED SOMEONE WHOM I CARE DEEPLY ABOUT! FOR THAT I'M GOING TO END YOU!" I shouted as I held my arms in a Kamehameha position. I then felt a ball of blue energy charge up in between the space.
"Vhat in Gott's name is he doing?" Neptune asked. I then roared and I felt the energy roll off in waves
(Unknown place: Same time)
A man in his mid-twenties looked up his blue eyes glowing as a Lucario dropped besides him.
"Master..." The Lucario started. The man nodded.
"I know...he has awaken..." The man said.
"Should we begin to go?" Lucario asked. The man nodded and grabbed a small blue and brown egg he had out and put it in his pack which was bundled to protect it from harm.
"Yes...the young Aura Master is to be awaiting us soon." The man said as they began to walk off.
(Oreburgh Museum: Same time)
"DIE!" I shouted releasing the ball of energy at him. It hit him and exploded which sent him flying and he hit the wall dropping unconscious. The Galactic Grunts swarming him ran over and I fell to my knees and finally my face, unconscious.
Chapter 10 End!
Hello again my awesome reviewers and readers! So! As you can see Vincent & Garrett go up against Roark and Damion, but the match is interrupted by Team Galactic...then Vincent awakens his previously latent Aura Powers and totally kicks the new Commander Neptune's butt! But anyway all in all R&R and Read and Review!
Foreign Words used this chapter
German:
Gott: God
Verdammt: Dammit!
Arschloch: Asshole
Fraulein: Miss
Leiter: Leader
Japanese:
Kami: God
OC Form
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance: For those who don't know it's what you look like
Personality: Again for what you battle style, likes, etc.
Type: Coordinator, Trainer, Elite Four, Champion, etc.
Hometown and Region: Region can be made up give me a description of it though.
Accomplishments: Competing in the Pokemon League Tournament, Grand Festival, you should get the point.
Goals: What your OC wants to accomplish.
Crush: Optional. Who does your OC like? Again optional.
Swimming Clothes: Optional
Party clothes: Optional.
Pokemon: Any pokemon from Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, or Sinnoh. Any made up pokemon from any other region tell me about it. Where does it live, how does it live, what does it eat, how does it sleep. If not created tell me when you captured, found, or hatched it. Tell the gender, if there is anything different like shiny or taller than most of its species, attacks, nicknames, names, species, and type are needed in any order. Nicknames are not needed but optional. I'll allow 1 legendary and 1 shiny per OC! It's okay if they're both.
Other: What ever else you want to tell me. Favorite food, color, drink, etc.
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