Well finally chapter 10 is up, sorry it took so long I kept having other ideas for another story (I have like 6 stories on the go now) So hopefully you guys will like this.


In Montana

"What do you want Daniel?" Lindsay asked

"Maybe if I checked the bathrooms then I would be a free man and you" he said turning and pointing at Lindsay "would be dead" he said "you would have no life, no family and things would be a better place" he added walking towards Lindsay "now you better be good or I will chain you up straight away" he told Lindsay while untying her hands, he then moved to untie her legs.

"What are you going to do?" Lindsay asked

"What I should have done when your friends died at my hands" Daniel said

"You won't get away with this" Lindsay told him as he pulled her up and dragged her out of the room. The five men that were in the park were sat in the room that they entered. All five had a 9mm guns and in the middle of the table was shot gun, Lindsay swallowed and said a silent prayer, hoping that Danny will find her soon so she can be with her husband and daughter.

"Oh, but I will" Daniel said. Lindsay felt a hand connect to her face, she felt a sting of pain right after, she placed her hand to where he slapped her, "see the thing is that they are looking for you in New York and we are in Montana" he added

"How did we get here? It would have taken a few days to get here? Lindsay asked "if you were to get here quickly then we would have had to go by plane" Lindsay asked

"Well for a trained investigator you're not that cleaver" Daniel said pushing Lindsay onto a chair "we went by helicopter, I'm not that stupid you know" he added. Daniel went over to the table and picked up the shot gun and knocked Lindsay out. "Now let's hope that she stays out for a long time" Daniel then said.


In Bozeman, Montana Airport

The plane had just landed in Montana; everyone excited the plane and went to luggage claim. To collect their bags. Lucy had fallen asleep on the plane so Danny had picked her up and carried her out. Danny got his suitcase and everybody got theirs, Mac also got Lucy's little suitcase and they all walked out, there was a car that was waiting for the all, it was Lindsay mom, Hannah Monroe, as soon as Danny saw his mother-in-law he just remembered that he hadn't phoned her "crap" Danny mumbled under his breath, Danny thought that nobody heard him but Mac did.

"What's wrong Danny?" Mac asked

"I haven't called Lindsay's mom and told her" Danny replied

Hannah saw Danny and Lucy, she was looking for her daughter but couldn't see her, when Danny got to her she asked "where Lindsay, back in New York still?" Hannah asked, she then kissed Lucy on the head.

"Look, I don't know how to say this but Lindsay has been taken" Danny replied

The look on Hannah's face was painful to see "When?" was all Hannah could asked

"Three days ago, so sorry for not telling you, mom" Danny said

Hannah walked closer to Danny and wrapped her arms around him and Lucy, Danny wrapped his free arm around Hannah's body. Lucy soon woke up wanting her mommy. Danny tried to settle Lucy but nothing worked, when Lucy wanted her mommy she only wanted her mommy. Hannah took Lucy from Danny's arms, Lucy looked at the person that took her from her father's arms and her cries died down, she put her thumb in her mouth and put her head on her shoulder and just looked at her dad. They all left the airport and got into the cars that were outside waiting for them.

"Do you know who took her?" Hannah asked

"It was urm... Daniel Cadence" Danny replied

Hannah was silent "so why are you here?" Hannah asked everyone

"We know that Lindsay's cell is here, so that is why we are here" Mac replied

"Okay" was all Hannah could answer

The rest of the ride was silent. Hannah finally pulled up a long drive to her house. Everyone got out and collected their things and everyone walked in.

"Sorry, I'm Hannah, and you are?" Hannah asked, she had just heard that Lindsay was missing so she didn't get much chance to introduce herself.

"It's fine, I Mac Taylor, this is Stella Bonasera, Jo Danville, Sheldon Hawkes, Don Flack and Adam Ross" Mac said pointing to everyone when he said their names.

"Do me a favour Mac and Danny, catch this Daniel to get Lindsay back" Hannah pleaded

"We will don't worry" Mac replied


Well tell me what you think, I am gonna start writing the 11th chapter soon. So hopefully it will be a quick upload.

Any comments please.