Hello, everyone, Jusen Uzukaze presents to you, Chapter 10 of Revenge of the Betrayed! The chapter of rescuing Yugito is here. She won't join the team, but she will support them. To destroy Konoha, they will need allies.
They have Suna already. Kiri should be convinced into an alliance after Konoha is destroyed. Onoki isn't a fool and won't hold a grudge so they will ally. Kumo should agree since they helped Jinchuuriki of theirs and will agree after listening to the threat of Akatsuki.
Right now, Kumo and Suna will help with the destruction of Konoha. They will have 2 Sannins on their side, some jonin, and 2 ninjas that are stronger than the Sannin. Of course, they won't join now, but later, when they destroy Konoha.
I also feel that it is important that I tell you that they will be in Konoha until before Jiraiya went to Ame. Anyways, we will now delve into the darker world of shinobi. It has been pretty happy so far. If you feel like you can't handle it, don't read it as it will be shown as to when it starts. No, there won't be a warning. By the way, I recommend watching AMVs like Shinobi, Battle of Brothers, and Redemption on youtube.
One thing I will mention. It is the lost arc. Won't be labeled, but you should be able to figure it out. Know that the story continues even after the destruction of Konoha and not in an epilogue way. The goal is there for a reason.
Anyways, I hope you all enjoy this chapter.
Yugito Nii was jumping through the trees, headed towards the village along with her team of chunin. She had been assigned an assassination mission by the Raikage. She had accepted the B-Ranked mission given to her by her father figure. The muscular man had asked her to choose three chunin to go with her.
The Nibi Jinchuuriki wanted to choose three experienced chunin to come with her so she could finish it faster, but there hadn't been enough. The blonde got stuck with rookie chunin instead.
The mission required her to assassinate a wealthy noble in the land of Hot Springs. The noble was apparently guarded by many Samurai's that were 'very skilled'. at least, that's what the requester said. She had immediately gathered three random chunin and headed out.
Finally, all four Kumo nin arrived at the outskirts Zunami town, the town where Zato, the noble, lived.
She looked at the chunin, "Transform to look like normal civilians and make sure there are no traces that lead back to Kumo, gather info," Yugito ordered as she also transformed.
Now, she had long black hair that reached her lower legs, tied in a ponytail. Her face stayed the same, but now with no makeup on. Her Kunoichi outfit was replaced with a blue t-shirt that exposed a bit of cleavage with black flames at the middle black, forming an upside down V. She now had on black pants with blue shoes.
The other three also had on civilian clothes. All three entered through the gates of the small town and walked about. Yugito used her sharp hearing that Matatabi had granted her to listen around to gather information.
She heard nothing useful, however, only casual conversations with the occasional business ones. As she continued to head further and further, she finally heard a conversation of Zato.
"So we need to pay even more to Zato?" questioned a man.
"Yeah, damn bastard making us more than we need to in tax. I wish I could destroy that castle of his. I wish I was a ninja!" The other replied.
Yugito stopped listening as she had the information she needed and quickly headed towards her teammate's poorly concealed chakra signature. The blonde woman sighed in annoyance at the chunin's incompetence. There could have been an enemy ninja who could easily kill them right now.
Yugito paused her walking.
'If I go by myself, I should be able to assassinate this Zato and come back in time. I can't have their incompetence ruin the mission,' the blonde woman thought to herself.
Yugito then turned from her destination and walked towards the giant castle in the middle of the town. The beautiful woman shook her head at the arrogance of the man. How could he foolishly believe that he wouldn't get hurt and not even try to hide?
The Matatabi Jinchuuriki walked through the doors and closed it behind her. She could destroy the entire palace, but then, the village would have economic issues that might trace back to Kumo, making it have to pay.
Once the doors were closed, Yugito blurred out of sight. She reappeared on the structures of the palace above. She quickly and silently made her way through the area, making sure on being quiet.
The Kumo ninja arrived at where the door was below. She looked at the two guards right next to it. Discreetly molding her chakra, the Nii smirked as she channeled lightning chakra to her hands. Even though it was not her chakra nature, she could still use it.
Silently, claws slid from their hidden places from the small holes in her gloves.
Lightning crackled around it as she quickly descended down to her opponents, a clone right beside her. She appeared behind the armored samurai and covered their mouths so they wouldn't scream and sliced her claws through the weakling.
Her clone mimicked her actions and they both let go, causing the guards to land with a thud on the floor. The elite jonin quickly took the guards armor. Thank goodness that it was a woman and the armor was more comfortable.
"You should strip the male too, Yu," A perverse voice echoed through her head.
'Ma, so not the time!' Yugito screamed to the flaming bijuu. (Had anyone realized that "Bijuu" was actually "Juubi" with the "bi" in front? Just to stop stupid reviews, I said if you switch "bi" to the beginning of Bijuu, it would be Juubi. not that Bijju were Juubi, which they are, just fragments.)
"There is always a time," Matatabi giggled again.
Yugitos' eyes twitched as she transformed herself into the female with armor still on.
She opened the door and saw that there were multiple guards looking at her.
Not wanting to deal with this and Matatabi's ranting, she sent out a strong burst of killer intent towards them but kept it contained to the room.
The burst knocked out all the guards and she walked through the bodies, not sparing them a glance.
"Maybe we can come back and have a th-" Matatabi perversely started but was interrupted by Yugito's mental shout.
'Ma, no!' Yugito shouted in rage at what the millennium-year-old female said. She would not give her body to anyone!
"Spoilsport," Matatabi pouted at her host. "Besides, we already did it, so technically-" The woman was once interrupted by the heated shout of her lesbian host. (Yes, I'm serious)
'Ma, that's only you and me,' she admitted to the blue haired woman inside her own mind. The bijuu had corrupted her at a young age, but she had been far too disgusted to let any man have their ways with her so she had made sure to only let Matatabi do that to her. Eventually, she grew to love her, even with the woman's quirks.
In the real world, Yugito had reached the door that contained her target. She continued with her disguise and opened the doors once again.
"Why are you disturbing me?!" Zato asked. Zato has puffy black hair and wears a small pair of sunglasses as if to make himself look cool. He looked to be around 40. He also wears a purple suit that clashed horribly with his black tie.
Yugito was thankful that she had a helmet on or he would see her turn green in disgust. (Yes, he is that ugly)
'Ma, pictures, now!' She screamed at the woman inside her mind. Matatabi, who had blocked of her connection to the sight of Yugito, quickly sent some of their private time to Yugito. She then cast a genjutsu over her lover to make it so that the jonin saw a better-looking man in front of her.
"Well?! What is it!?" the ugly bastard shouted.
"Oh, right, lord Zato, there is someone here to meet you," she said, the helmet hiding the devious smirk on her face.
"Who?" Zato asked.
"The Shinigami!" She yelled before she disappeared in front of him. Before he had a chance to react, his head rolled clean of his neck. At least, that was what he felt.
What he didn't realize was that Yugito had trapped him in a genjutsu. While this was going on in the genjutsu, Yugito retrieved all the important things from his mind, like where his money was, if he knew any information and anything else she needed.
After retrieving it, she then acted out on what the genjutsu showed, killing the bastard once and for all.
After killing Zato, Yugito had taken her team back to Kumo. When asked about their mission, she had quickly told them that she had completed it when she came across the guy and assassinated him after having the pervert come with her to an alleyway.
-Chck-
The slice of a sword was heard as Yugito quickly jumped away from her position on the tree she was hoping from. Unfortunately for her team, they were too slow and all got killed by the strange scaled sword.
Yugito flipped in midair to land on a branch and narrowed her eyes at the man in front of her. She was able to remember the blue-skinned fish in front of her.
'Kisame Hoshikage. S-Ranked missing-nin from Kiri. Wielder of Samehada and has large enough chakra reserves to compare to jinchuuriki. Samehada has the power to absorb chakra.'
"Yu, this man possesses more Chakra than you and better control. I suggest you try to delay him until someone comes. We are close enough. Try to get closer though so the clash can be felt easier," Matatabi ordered after sensing the depths of the shark's chakra levels.
'Alright Ma,' Yugito responded to her tenant as she flew towards Kumo.
Kisame quickly realized what she was trying to do and blurred in front of her before kicking her stomach, sending the blonde flying back and farther away from Kumo.
The jinchuuriki recovered from the kick and flipped herself in midair. She rocketed to the blue-skinned man in front of her, using Ma's fire abilities to propel herself like a rocket.
Kisame ducked under her and did a rear horse kick to her ribs. The woman grabbed the heel of the shoe before it connected to her and flew under him while tossing him up into the air.
She quickly went through multiple hand seals and put her hand up as though she was holding something. A blue fire flickered into her hands and started to grow in size until it was the size of a house.
"Matatabi Arts: Hi Bakudan!" She shouted as she did a flip and kicked it up, sending the scorching ball to Kisame. The shark-man put his hands to his lips after going through the necessary hand seals.
"Suiton: Daikōdan no Jutsu!"
Thrusting his hands forward, Kisame Sent a large shark at the fireball. Unfortunately for Yugito, her fireball was destroyed and absorbed by the shark, causing it to grow even bigger.
Unfortunately for the shark, the attack had been laced with Matatabi's chakra, so when it did absorb it, the shark started to disintegrate.
Kisame growled in annoyance as his attack was made useless and decided to use another one that didn't absorb.
'Ma, what happened?' Yugito asked, dumbfounded by how her firebomb and the shark were destroyed.
"My chakra was absorbed by the shark and since all bijuu chakra is corrosive, he disintegrated," The bluenette within her replied.
The conversation ended when Kisame yelled out the name of another jutsu.
"Suiton: Suikōdan no Jutsu!" Once again, Kisame sent a shark at Yugito.
Yugito dodged and flew up to where Kisame was falling. She sent a punch to his stomach, but he grabbed it and pulled her with one hand while swinging the unsheathed Samehada with the other.
Yugito substituted with a piece of rock on the ground then appeared above him, trying to hit him in his face with a roundhouse kick. Kisame was sent flying into a tree below before he exploded in a shower of water. Another Kisame appeared above her and she realized what he had done.
"Suiton: Mizu Bunshin," He whispered into her ear as he slashed Samehada at her. The woman felt some of her chakra from her reserves get absorbed as she was sent to the ground.
Quickly moving through the pain, she landed on her feet and looked up, just in time to catch Kisame's foot.
"So the saying, 'Cat's always land on their feet' is true, huh?" Kisame asked with a smirk on his face.
She used the leg to twist while trying to land a hit on his face. Before it could hit, Kisame sent his foot to the ground, intent on smashing her against the ground.
Yugito saw the plan and pushed herself up so as to not hit the ground. She then focused Ma's Chakra into her, liting it on blue fire, and swung the appendage at Kisame.
A blue arc made of fire was sent towards Kisame, who smirked and slashed at it with his sword, causing it to dissipate.
"Is that all you got?" he taunted as the blonde in front of him started twitching.
Yugito's eyes twitched as she placed her hands in a triangle.
Kisame was curious and being the battle maniac he was, let her continue.
Bue flames formed between her fingers and she started blowing at it.
'Matatabi Arts: Furasshubaburu!' She thought to herself
Bubbles started to come out of her hand and floated around Kisame, completely surrounding him.
Kisame, realizing what she was trying to do, quickly created a clone that trapped him in a Suiton: Suirō
Unfortunately for Kisame, the bubbles didn't do anything while the Kumo Jonin tried to jump towards the path of Kumo.
Kisame's clone decided that he would chase after her and blurred in her direction. Unfortunately for Yugito, even if he was only 1/10 as strong as his original, he was still pretty fast.
He tried to kick her in the face but Yugito was ready for it and did a mid-air backflip, completely avoiding it and continued.
Clone Kisame tried again, but this time, when she dodged, he grabbed her by the waist and threw her up in the air, spinning rapidly.
Before the elite kunoichi could stop herself, she was sent flying towards the opposite direction of her destination.
As she flew, she created a small ball of fire and threw it at Kisame.
"Ha, is that all you can do, little kitty?" he insulted as he dodged it.
The ball sailed past Kisame, but it exploded in a bright flash when Yugito closed her eyes and said "KAI!"
The flash startled Kisame and turned around. Big mistake there.
Yugito sent out a flaming Kunai with explosive tags on them.
"Kage Kunai Bunshin!" she yelled.
Before Kisame could react, hundreds of them were sailing towards him and all exploded. The shockwave, explosion, and propulsion by the force caused it to burst into crystal blue water.
Down below with the real Kisame, he had just got out of the water when he heard a loud "KAI!" above him.
Before he could react, the blue flame bubbles started to spin around him, creating a dome and started shrinking.
Kisame put his hands by his side and created a shell of water around himself.
Using his water manipulation, he enlargened it and tried to destroy the bubbles.
It only half worked as they all exploded like flash bombs.
Naruto suddenly stopped as a bright flash to his right set off. He could also sense the enormously large chakra of Kisame Hoshikage, smaller than his own, but beat Satsuki by a large margin.
The blond shinobi quickly changed direction towards the destination where a jinchuuriki might be located while relaying what he had sensed to his tram. Satsuki was quick to follow her newly discovered crush, as were the rest of team Uzu, but he looked at the four behind him and told them to stay put.
They decided to do as told, even though Suigetsu growled at the chance of missing a fight, especially one with Kisame Hoshikage and a chance of getting Samehada.
They quickly arrived at the flash and Naruto saw Kisame fighting a blonde woman, probably a jinchuuriki.
He landed beside her and just before she could attack him, Matatabi told her not to.
"Don't attack him Yu. He is my brother's jinchuuriki. He probably will help you if he knew who you were," her lover told her.
"Hello, my name is Yugito Nii, I am Nibi's-" She got interrupted by the man next to her.
"Nibi's jinchuuriki right?" he interrupted.
Her eyes twitched at the interruption, but she was able to reign in her temper.
"I am Naruto Uzumaki, Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki, nice to meet you 'sister'," he joked, referring to her as a sister because of being jinchuuriki.
Before their conversation could finish, the now clear sighted Kisame attacked the two.
Naruto, deciding the fight wasn't worth it, grabbed both Yugito and Satsuki's shoulder and waist individually, and Hiraishined them to his team, more specifically, the mark on Suigetsu's sword.
They all hid their Chakra signature so Kisame couldn't find them and started to talk.
"Thank you for saving me from that guy," She thanked Naruto. She knew that if the fight had gone on, she would eventually lose.
After Yugito had thanked them and they discussed somethings, Team Uzu and Yugito went their separate ways.
"Hey Naruto, did you get Samehada from Kisame-Senpai?" Suigetsu asked as they were tree hopping towards.
"I still don't know why you want another sword when you can't use two," Fu commented as she used Chomei's wings to fly.
"I want to collect all the swords so I can make 7 more swordsmen/woman with me as the leader," Suigetsu stated to her. (Note that he didn't say 7 more swordsmen of the Mist)
"No Suigetsu, I wasn't there to get the sword, I was there to get Yugito out of there," Naruto answered the question with an eye roll.
"Dammit!" Suigetsu exclaimed with annoyance.
After a few hours of tree hopping, they finally got to Konoha.
Once they finally arrived, all of Team Uzu widened their eyes to the scene in front of them. Most of the village had been abandoned. The buildings were almost all destroyed. What few ninjas were here were leading cuffed ninja to prison.
Sakura was walking towards the village gates in hopes of finding Kakashi there. Once she arrived at the northern gates, Sakura widened her eyes, not believing her eyes.
In front of her were Naruto, the female Sasuke from her nightmares, and 4 other people she didn't recognize.
"Naruto!" She yelled as she waved to him.
Naruto turned his eyes towards her and Sakura froze. There was no kindness from Naruto in those eyes any longer. The Naruto she knew wasn't there anymore.
'What did Orochimaru do to him?' She asked herself.
Finally, her eyes went to the team, and more specifically, to Satsuki.
"Naruto, who is that?" She asked. "And where is Sasuke-Kun? Both of you did go to Orochimaru after Sasuke took you right?" She asked in a desperate tone.
Naruto rolled his eyes at the tone in her voice.
"The girl behind me is Satsuki Uchiha-" "WHAT?!" Sakura shouted, not believing that there was another Uchiha alive besides Sasuke and Itachi.
Naruto glared at the interruption, causing her to shut up, and continued. "She is the real Sasuke. There was never a Sasuke Uchiha. Satsuki disguised herself as Sasuke so the council wouldn't be able to turn her into a breeding stock before she turned 16." Naruto told her.
While he hated the girl in front of him, he had to act nice, but not as before cause that would be suspicious. A guy is taken to Orochimaru for 2 and a half years and nothing changes? Yeah...No!
Sakura was in tears, not wanting to believe that her crush was a girl all along. She fell on her knees in shock but realized that behind her, Kakashi wasn't at all surprised, not even a little.
"K-K-Kakashi-Sensei, did you already know about this?" Sakura asked shakily.
"Hmm, yeah. Naruto and I figured it out in the Wave Mission. She didn't want us to tell you as you would have told someone and might have repeated until it turned to the council who would force her into a baby factory before she was sixteen and could choose who she wanted." Kakashi told her, remembering back to the reveal.
*Flashback*
A large killing intent blasted everyone on the bridge, causing the jonin level ninja to pause in their clash and Sakura to faint like the pathetic little bitch she was. (I don't think she could handle a blast, especially from Kyuu.)
In the Demonic Crystal Mirrors.
"Sasuke? Are you all right, Sasuke?"
"I'm sorry, ninja-san. But your friend is gone. Is this the first time you've seen a friend die?" A form in the mist rippled, nearly becoming visible.
"He's dead?"
Haku nodded. "Yes. I'm afraid so." Naruto felt himself start to shake as Haku began speaking of the pain of being a ninja, the suffering of life, the loss of one's heart, and the service of a ninja as nothing more than a tool. The masked ninja words poured into his ears as he stared at the body of his teammate, a spike of jagged emotions welling up in his heart. Sasuke was a bastard, a dick, a jerk, an annoyingly arrogant jackass…but he was Naruto's teammate, his fellow Leaf ninja. Dead.
"Naruto-san?" Haku's voice was questioning, trying to draw out the hidden blonde. The Hyouton user was beginning to run out of chakra and needed to find Naruto to end this quickly.
"I'm going to Kill you," Naruto growled out as red chakra started to swirl around and encase him. The form of a one-tailed fox covering Naruto's darkened face.
"Naruto-san?"
Haku's only answer was an enormous column of bloody red chakra erupting from right next to one of the mirrors.
Haku was suddenly thrown out of the mirror she was within. The mask on her face broke apart and Naruto looked within the brown eyes that held no emotions.
"You?" Naruto questioned as he looked at the girl below him, remembering when he met her a few days ago.
"W-why did you stop? Are you not angry that I have killed your friend?" Naruto stole a glance back at 'Sasuke's' still form before reverting his eyes back to the teenager in front of him.
"Why are you doing this? Why are you with Zabuza!? Why are you doing Gato's dirty work!?" He demanded.
"Because Zabuza-san is my precious person, he was the one who saved me and for that, I have made myself a tool for him to use." For a moment, a memory flashes through Naruto back at their first encounter.
"Do you have someone precious to you? Do you have someone willingly wanted to protect?" He remembered
Naruto was disgusted at what came from Haku's mouth, but he can also see the familiar look in her eyes. Loneliness, the same way he had felt back when he was alone in the village until Itachi, Iruka-sensei, Kakashi, and Satsuki had come along, even if she was in Sasuke form.
"Don't talk like that! You are not a tool! You don't have to do what you don't want to! You are a person!" Shouted Naruto, his killing intent pulsing a little.
"Perhaps… but this might be my last thing to do as Zabuza-san's tool" Haku glance at the direction where Kakashi and Zabuza were at. Naruto, with his eyes still blazing red, could make out a figure of Zabuza immobilized by Kakashi's summon dogs. Kakashi himself was about to make the final blow, a lighting attack, a technique he created Raiton: Raikiri.
"This is your end Demon of the mist." Kakashi quickly ran towards Zabuza, starting his assault, he was about to pin his attack on Zabuza when suddenly a mirror-like ice came into his field of vision and came out Haku.
'Shit I can't stop!' Kakashi cursed, it felt like slow motion, his momentum not slowing and his thrust out arm closing into the young girl's chest.
A little while later
Zabuza was dying right next to his apprentice. The girl that he thought of as a daughter.
Naruto was walking towards Sasuke's body, there was no one on the bridge, the villagers had gone back with Tazuna while Naruto and Kakashi stayed back.
-Poof-
Sasuke's body went up in smoke. In his place was a raven-haired preteenager.
Kakashi's eyes widened but was able to compose himself quickly.
'Sasuke is a girl?'
Naruto placed his hand on Satsuki's stomach and sent a small burst of chakra along her skin.
"Naruto, what are you doing?" He asked the boy who he had helped in the past as an Anbu.
"Taking these needles out, Kakashi-Nii," Naruto replied to his second brother figure, the first being Itachi. He and Kakashi had developed a strong bond after Kakashi had once rescued him. After that, Naruto was secretly trained in fuinjutsu while Itachi had trained his body.
Naruto hadn't made much progress back then but was able to get to level two by shinobi standards by 10, where Kakashi stopped training him, not wanting to be discovered by the council. After all, they could just find him training Naruto in a training ground with a Shinobi they sent.
Kakashi didn't know everything about Naruto, so he didn't know about Itachi, so he didn't know about Satsuki.
While they were talking Satsuki finally woke up. She looked around and saw Naruto and Kakashi looking down at her.
The girl looked down and saw pale skin, paler than usual. It was also more feminine.
The preteen looked at herself and saw that the transformation Hiruzen had put on her had been undone.
The end! After a month I finally fucking finished! Hooray!
On a more Serious note, They have finally returned to Konoha.
I kept my promise of updating when I could so Y'all better be happy.
They have arrived right after the 12 Ninja Guardian Arc.
All the attacks Yugito did were using Matatabi's chakra.
Alright, notes:
1) Yes, the chunins are incompetent.
2) Yes, Yugito and Matatabi are lovers. I see no reason not to. I mean, Matatabi is a lustful cat and she would have corrupted Yugito, but Yugito wouldn't be a sex addict. I see no reason to not have her be a Lesbian.
3) I know that Yugito should have lost against Kisame and she did. She admitted it herself! he just joked around a bit with her.
4) Yu and Ma are nicknames.
5) Sakura is still a fangirl.
6) In the flashback, that is how it happened. Some stuff happened after, but not important.
7) Yes, Haku is a girl. There is no fucking way I'm gonna believe that Haku was a boy. Besides we have no proof. Her saying being a boy could just be lying.
8) 3 of the 9 bijuu will be female. It would have been 4, but I already made Chomei a boy. Kyuu(not real name), Saiken, and Kokou will be female.
Okay, I don't want to explain the jutsu as they are self-explanatory and am too lazy.
Reviews:
AllysaOtaku69: I am now curious about that story you're looking for. As for that though. Kushina never got sealed in the shinigami only Minato did.
Me: Me too. I know that she isn't. Sorry if I made it sound like that.
jablanco: That was good
Me: Thanks.
SPark681: Nice chapter seems team uzu is growing stronger and stronger anyways keep up the great work!
Me: Thanks. They are! I will.
StringDman: Yay. Another Awesome Chapter. Can't-Wait For More. :D
Me: Here ya go.
HyperA1985: I am looking forward to chapter 10 and I hope Naruto gains Equestrian pony summoning contract.
Me: Thanks. Sorry, no, I don't even know what that is.
ttkaigler: Well ok then and I hope u do well in school
Me: Thanks. I am doing well. Algebra is pretty easy, even If I learned it late. Graphing Functions is harder tho.
HyperA1985: I am looking forward to chapter 10 and I hope Naruto gains the Rinnegan.
Me: Well here ya go. Maybe he will, maybe he won't.
Azaira: Needs some fixing in the grammar area. Before that, you need to cut down your paragraph lengths. Try to keep it at five maximum(as a guideline, some can be longer if absolutely needed); they can be as short as a single word or line, but never too long. You have this enormous paragraph in this chapter, and it literally looks like a wall of text. Depending on the device used, anything from ten lines and up can look similar to that, and it just gets hard to read. I'd suggest going back and reformatting, at the very least.
Me: I know. Sorry that it wasn't very good. I was a beginner/noob then so I sucked at writing. Better now though. I re-edited it.
KakeruPB: I will admit the prologue is meh and can be better but I need to ask why do you need to make Naruto life harder in the world? He already has enough problems as it is during this time. Especially since they deserted Konoha the way they did.
Me: The guy is loyal to the point of stupidity. He stayed in a village that hated him and would have him dead for what? 3 people? Here, it encourages him to leave more.
BlackfoxNinja: fem-Sasuke timeline discovery needs fixing since earlier chapter at VOE was the shocker.
Me: VoTE. Aren't flashbacks wonderful?
Saisri: this was a satisfying chapter. Keep it up
Me: Thanks. I will.
lara5170: You forgot about Naruto being trained by Itachi to look after Satsuki so he has been training longer and should know more than you listed at the end of this chapter unless you have done it intentionally to make them more even or him less powerful than her.
Me: I know. Though there isn't much of a difference. Kakashi trained him in fuinjutsu to an okay level and Itachi trained his body. No one is going to teach a 6-year-old how to wield a sword or destructive Ninjutsu.
lara5170: How did Naruto and Satsuki know that they were to meet the konahoa ninja and what to say when they only had the information from Sasori about the meeting place and Orochimaru memories?
Me: Uh, you answered your own question.
lara5170: Are they going to get summons and has Jaraiya tried to get information about Naruto regarding Orochimaru from his spy network? Could Naruto have found something cool like dragon and fox summoning contracts at Uzu? Is Naruto going to start working with kyubbi? It would be cool if Satsuki got hawk and cat summons.
Me: Yes. I already did the polls, remember? No, Jiraiya knows Naruto's secrets, not about Itachi, but of Satsuki. He trusts Naruto enough. Yes, Dragon, but not at Uzu. Still planning that one. But Satsuki will get Hawk and Pheonix. Naruto has Dragons. Later on. Naruto and Kyuu have no relationship. No hate, love, anything. They haven't truly met and Naruto hasn't had the time. Kyuu hasn't wanted to meet yet.
lara5170: What does Naruto look like now does he look more like his dad now? It would be cool if he looked like his dad by the time Konahoa sees him again. Did they really kill Kabuto or is he going to show up again? Sometimes they don't seem to check on their kills.
Me: Naruto looks like anime, but with a wardrobe change. He wears dark red (like Rias's hair) and jet black. Satsuki wears colors like her hair and little lighter variants. No he isn't. They don't cause it is on purpose. They weren't trying to kill Kabuto and they didn't know Deidara was a fake. They aren't perfect you know?
Okay, I have a challenge here.
Challenge: Naruto, Satsuki, and Hinata are put onto the same team under Kakashi Hatake. After getting on their genin teams, they reveal that they are not who people think they are. Naruto is not a reckless and clueless boy with no skills.
Satsuki is not an antisocial brooder who has thoughts of killing her last remaining family member. Hinata is not the weak, shy, and timid girl who fears anything. They reveal that they are best friends who had met as children and became friends. They finally take off their masks and take the world by a storm. I was going to create this story after Renaissance and ROTB were finished, but it will take a long time to complete those 2.
Requirements:
story takes place after the Uchiha Massacre.
knows why Itachi killed the Uchiha's and doesn't hate him.
is strong, stronger than Hanabi at that age, but holds back so her sister doesn't get the seal.
4. Naruto knows about his parents and Kyuubi. He was taught by Jiraiya a bit. He doesn't know much but is still strong. About as much as genin level. (Happens at 6 years old)
5. At Graduation, the trio is The rookie of the year, Kunoichi of the year, and Dead last. They are as strong as special jonin. They take off the mask after graduation.
and Satsuki must be paired. Don't care if you make it a threesome between the trio.
7. Naruto, Satsuki, and Hinata must know about their past life as Hamuri, Asura, and Indra. They can figure it out AFTER the time skip.
8. Must be strong as kage after the time skip.
9. All three must be smart in a shinobi wise way, not book smarts.
10. No Satsuki getting curse mark or her going to Orochimaru.
11. They must care about each other that they would never hurt them, mentally or physically, so no abandoning for their 'protection' at all.
12. Abandon Konoha at Chunin exams or time skip.
Please notify me by PM if you are going to take the challenge or have a question about it. I might write it when I finish the stories I am writing.