Hey guys, I'm very sorry if I haven't updated this story. So much is going on at school, activities and all that.

But, I swear to have the next chapter in this week. I promise that!

So, in the mean time I decided to post the first version of this story.

Disclaimer: I don't own Love hina, Ken Akamatsu owns it.

Keitaro was outside Narusegawa's door, he was standing there for 10 minutes, it was a miracle that no one has seen him just standing outside her door. He was going to ask Naru on a date, he got some tickets to a comedy club that was going to open this evening from Haitani and Shirai.

'Just ask her! There's nothing to be nervous about, you're her boyfriend and she's your girlfriend.' Keitaro's mind said, berating himself.

'She has been distant this past few weeks, and whenever I ask her on dates she just declines.' Keitaro replied to the voice in his mind.

'Just give it another go, maybe this time she'll accept.' His mind said, encouraging him.

Steeling his nerves, he knocked on the door and said, "Naru? It's me Keitaro."

A few seconds later the door opened and he saw Naru, and guessing from what she's wearing it looks like she was going out again.

"Oh, Keitaro." Naru greeted him with a cheerful smile. "What is it?"

"Oh, uh, um, I was wondering if you're free this night." Keitaro asked her nervously. "I got these tickets-"

But before Naru interrupted him, and she was frowning a little.

"I'm sorry Keitaro, but I'm going out with a couple of my classmates." She said. "Maybe next time."

"Oh, O.K." He said, with a sad smile on his face.

Naru then went outside her door, closed it and faced Keitaro.

"I'm really sorry Keitaro." She said and went downstairs to go out.

Keitaro just stood there with a sad look on his face.

"She didn't accept again, eh?" A familiar voice said behind him.

Turning around, he was surprised to see that it was Kitsune and everybody else, excluding Haruka, who was still with Seta and Sara.

"Y-You were eavesdropping?" He asked, he wasn't mad just surprised.

"We aren't blind and deaf, Urashima-san." Motoko said. "We have noticed that Naru-sempai has been distant towards you these past few weeks."

"Y-Yeah, Sempai." Shinobu said in a low voice. "She's also been going out with her friends often."

"So we decided to spy on yous when we saw that you were asking her out again." Su said, grinning.

"And also," Kitsune said cutting in. "I also got us some tickets, the same as yours."

Keitaro smiled at this, even though Naru didn't want to go with him, he'll still have the company of the rest of the Hinata Girls.

Arriving at the Comedy Club, it was appropriate enough that teenagers can enter. No alcohol was served here, only softdrinks.

Taking their seats, they ordered some food and drinks. The waiter brought their food.

"This place is so cool, Sempai." Shinobu awed.

"And the food is good." Su said in between bites.

"It's a pity they don't serve sake here." Kitsune said, pouting.

Keitaro was happy that they were willing to join him. He was silent and just took in the atmosphere of the place.

Motoko too was silent, but for a different reason. She was never fond of comedy clubs.

She was persuaded by Kitsune and the others to join in, saying that it was for Keitaro. And that was the only thing that made her come.

She still had feelings for her clumsy manager. She just pushed it away because Keitaro was already with Naru.

Looking around Motoko saw a familiar brunette with a guy. Looking more carefully, she was surprised when she recognized the brunette.

It was Naru.

"Kitsune-san," Motoko said in a low voice, tapping her on the shoulder. "Is that Naru-sempai?"

Kitsune looked at where Motoko was pointing at, she saw that it was indeed Naru.

"Hey it is Naru!" She said, louder than she intended.

"Naru?" Keitaro asked, turning to Kitsune. "Naru's here?"

Keitaro looked around and he saw her with a guy. His arms were around Naru's shoulder.

His mouth was agape and his eyes looked like it was going to pop out.

Everybody else, looked to where Keitaro was looking. They were also surprised to see what hey saw.

After a minute, Keitaro's expression was replaced by a blank one.

Everyone looked at Keitaro with sympathy.

But before they could say anything to him, he slowly stood up and left through the door.

Immediately they followed him.

Kitsune blocked him and asked, "What are you doing?"

"I'm going home." He said in an emotionless monotone, this made the girls flinch.

"Aren't you going to face her and ask what she's doing with someone else?!" Kitsune said in frustration.

"Nah, I'm just going to ruin their night." He said with a fake smile. "Don't let me ruin your night too."

He sidestepped Kitsune, with such speed that she didn't notice that he was already a step or two away.

They all just decided to follow Keitaro back to the Hinata-sou, not wanting to see Naru again.

The way there was silent, none of them knew what to say to Keitaro, as they were also shocked to see Nauru with another guy.

Arriving at the Hinata-sou, Keitaro went back to his room and locked himself.

After he got inside, he collapsed in his futon and let his emotional façade break without any resistance.

Crying and sobbing loudly, the Hinata girls heard him from outside his door.

They felt pity and sympathetic for him, his promised girl and love of his life was cheating on him.

They stayed outside his door and didn't disturb him, feeling that it was better to let his anguish out.

After half an hour of crying out his eyes, the Hinata girls noticed that he was finally finished.

Opening the door to his door, just to see him, they saw that he was asleep.

"Poor guy, cried himself to sleep." Kitsune said with a somber tone.

"Sempai…" Shinobu said in a low voice.

"I hope Keitaros going to be alright…" Su said, with a sad face.

"Why would Naru-sempai do that?" Motoko said in an angered tone. "He was loyal to him, and not only that he did everything for her!"

After she said this, they heard the front door open, turning around they saw that it was Naru.

"Speak of the devil…" Kitsune muttered.

Getting up the stairs Naru saw that everyone was outside Keitaro's room.

"Oh, everyone." Naru said, greeting them. "What are you all doing there outside Keitaro's room? Did he do something inappropriate again?"

"He didn't." Kitsune said, suppressing her anger and trying not to blow in Naru's face. "Someone else did."

She turned to her room and left.

This made Naru confused.

"I am disappointed, Naru-sempai." Motoko said, in a dejected tone. "Come Su."

Su climbed on Motoko's back and they went back to Motoko's room.

Shinobu looked at Naru with sad eyes, then slowly trudged to her room.

Naru was highly confused at what was happening. Deciding to ask them tomorrow, she went to her room to retire.

Unbeknownst to everyone, Keitaro was only faking his sleep.

He stood-up and picked up his cellphone, and went through his contacts. Finding the number he was looking for, he dialed it.

"Haruka here." Haruka said, through the phone. "What's up?"

"Hello Aunt Haruka." Keitaro said in a low and sad voice.

Haruka was tempted to scream at him, but hearing the tone of his voice, she didn't.

"Is everything alright?" She asked him, with a bit of concern.

Keitaro chuckled, albeit a hollow one, and said, "You always know when I'm down, don't you?"

"I am your cousin after all." She said. "So are you going to tell me what's going on?"

Explaining to Haruka that Naru was being distant these past few weeks, and said what happened this night.

After that, Haruka was silent, her face still had that familiar bored, stoic expression.

"What are you going to do about it?" She asked, finally breaking the silence.

So how was it? Which route do you prefer? Tell me via a review, I'll try to respond ASAP.

Again I'm sorry if I haven't posted an update.