Author's Note
Ahem... well, I've been thinking and reading my story. And I was kinda sorta wondering what you people think so far and what I should change. First of all, the Spanish thing. I'm now not thinking it's such a good idea. Do you think I should make up a language or just let her speak English? I would like to know your opinion. Thanks.
Secondly, she is such a Mary Sue in the beginning that I'm thinking I should just rewrite the whole thing, sticking to the basic plot, of course. Tell me what you think.
Pretty pretty please?
That's about all.