Hello, again, at the end of The Homecoming again.

Anyways…

I have decided to warn all of you of a possible rewrite. After thinking about it for awhile I had finally realized The Homecoming was a little short, and when I mean a little; I mean a lot. It wasn't how I expected. So I will be rewriting. Of I'll keep this up for the time being until the rewrite is finished; with the rewrite it will also get me a head start in the sequel which I have decided to name "It's Reality".

Along with this I would also like to point out a few things I would like to place between and in chapter during the rewrite, hoping I will not have to change existing chapters. Please, if you could give me pointers and ideas or any other events you would like to see in the rewrite.

I go about telling you as if it were a list; let's begin.

1) I was hoping to get the chapters longer. I might even combine chapters that were originally planned to be together but didn't work out that way so…

2) More fighting. I love drama and apparently those who read it may have love it too. Anyways. I hope to get more details in the fighting, ask my brothers, ex boyfriends, guy friends for the more fist to fist kind of fights. I also plan to ask my friends, seeing as my sister never gets into fights and the others are to young, about the cats fights. I have been in some, yes, I have suffered minor injuries but the good thing about being me is that you have a lot of friends in a lot of places. Yes, I do know there in hair pulling, scratching and the occasional slapping but what I would really want to input in my fights are the more of the tough girls scene. Maybe some kicking and or punching. Front palm to back hand bitch slapping. Yeah, those kind of things.

3) A little more ShikaTema and other couples I had hoped to place into the fic but it had never worked out. I would have like some… Screw the some… I would have loved some GaaHina but I just didn't know how to make Gaara seem interested in Hinata. So any suggestions will be taken and gladly appreciated. I had originally planned on Gaara and Hinata fake dating to get Sasuke a little more irritable but then my co-writer's twin was reading our old packet of poems, one of which was "The Death of Santa Claus". She read it out loud and I was like it would so like something Naruto had to go through. She laughed and agreed then said that it was probably Kakashi or Jiriaya who had to break the news. But then I was like or he was 30 something years old with a 7 year old daughter that didn't believe in Santa anymore and him still believing in him… She then continued, "I wonder how Hinata broke that new to him."

Every had those light bulb moments? You know where you swear there was a light above your head and it pinged on? I have those a lot but this was the first time my friend and I shared it the same time.

Hinata would be asked out by Naruto for the Christmas Ball at the school. She not having a date, agreed and then later crushed his heart at the dance braking the news that Santa Claus died after his excitement about "Santa" dancing with Tsunade. (Santa would be Jiriaya),

4) Before hand when I had thought it up. I was hoping to get prom and homecoming into the fic, which also didn't happen. What I had thought of was Hinata coming back after Sophomore year, rub Sasuke's lying face in the dirt and then work on getting Sakura back. Which through the whole mess I'll be making in the rewrite I will have to clean it up in "It's Reality".

5) I wished I could have added some mending father/daughter relationship and moments between Haishi and Hinata. I seem to be really good with moments within family matters or relationship advice if I put my mind to it. So hoping it will be happen.

As treat for reading this I have decided to give you a spoiler for "It's Reality".

SPOILOR TIME!

a) Someone had a kid that was born in the summer between Freshmen and Sophomore. Remember both Sakura and Hinata had left for the rest of the year. Who's the mother… but my major question is who is the father?

b) Office scandals! Tenten is a temp for Neji. Neji is a the COO of Hyuga Corp while Hinata is the CEO of Hyuga Corp. But don't forget Gaara, Temari and Kankuro also work for Suna Industries, With Gaara was owner, Temari as CEO and Kankuro as COO. Oh, and Sasuke and Itachi representing Uchiha Corp that is still working on a contract with Hyuga. Now also try to remember Neji and Tenten are dating. Hinata is Sasuke's ex with proof of Sasuke still holding strong feelings for her but with Sakura as CEO of Konoha Ind. under the head of the Industries, Naruto, who is also Hinata's ex. Temari was always in an On-and-Off relationship with a one Shikamaru Nara, who works with his family's National Park and Konoha Industries. And Kankuro had a girlfriend, does he not?

That's about all I could give you right now. I'm still not done with the plot but gives you something to think about.

So remember.

THE HOMECOMING REWRITE!