Ness's POV
I had my tongue out to the side of my mouth in concentration. When I started this, I had no idea what to do, but I came up with a really good system. Who knew you could learn so much about a person just by observing their natural behavior? Well, you would have to have the unparallel senses of a vampire, but still. It's a good thing I had that 800 page notebook handy. I decided to review my work before I started crossing guys off my list.
Jane
At a first glance…
Power hungry, Dominate, Bossy, Over-confidant, Thinks she's better than everyone, Obedient to no one, Rude, Crazy, Witty, Hateful,
Talking for a short time…
Thoughtful, Intelligent, Lonely, Trying hard to find her place, Bored, Lost, Hopeful,
Really, if you think about the expression, "She's only human," it would make sense in her case. She wants somebody to love. She uses (see 'at a fist glance' list) to cover up her feelings of what a girl feels.
Looking deeper…
Cares about people that she lets get close to her (great quality to get a man), Careful with babies, Very smart about almost anything brought up…
That is pretty much what my 800 page notebook is like, except a lot fuller and a lot more. It took me 3 whole hours to re-read everything I wrote. At some points, you couldn't even tell what I had written because I was writing so fast when I wrote it. I finally got through the whole thing. I remembered why I had written some things, and was totally confused as to why I wrote others, but I got through it.
I then turned to my notebook on the guys we saw at the mall. Jane insisted on me writing about every guy in the mall, so I went through the list, crossing off the married guys first, even though some of them would have made a good match for her.
I was really glad that she left, even if it was with Justin, because this would be so much harder with her here. She doesn't have a lot of patience, and I sometimes stare at these pages for hours debating if he is right for her.
Three days after she left, I was finally left with only 10 guys as an option for Jane. But from here is where things get tricky and difficult. 3 guys like mystery like her, but have wild tempers. 4 guys are hopeless romantics, but they all have varied minor and major flaws that I could or couldn't see Jane tolerating. At this point, I wouldn't mind having Jane here to express her final opinion.
As if on cue, she appeared on the end of the couch, knocked out? I cocked my head to the side. Vampires don't sleep, and they especially don't get knocked out. What happened? I mean, obviously she got sent back here by magic, but did that magic have serious effects on her? Wait, she isn't- I mean, she couldn't be dead, could she? I looked at her, and breathed a sigh of relief when I saw very small breaths. She doesn't need to breathe, but it was reassuring that she was moving. I guess some kinds of magic do knock out our kind. But I was glad she was moving. This is the most effort that I've ever put into something. I wouldn't want it all to be for nothing.
I decided to take a nap. I mean, if she was asleep, I had nothing to do, so I closed my eyes and fell right asleep.
It felt like seconds later that I was being shaken awake.
"Ness! Ness, I just read your work and I am amazed! Please wake up! I feel like a 5 year old on Christmas morning!" Jane practically yelled in my ear.
My eyes flew open and I got pulled to the table. Still half-asleep, I could just make out what she was saying. Something along the lines of the fact that the remaining 10 guys were the best ten guys in my notebook. I felt the corners of my lips pull up, because I really wasn't sure if I was choosing right.
A bowl of cereal appeared before me. I almost laughed because Jane clearly doesn't know how to make a bowl of cereal. She gave me the actual box, a plate and a knife. I stared at it for a few seconds, and then tried to eat it with what I got because I didn't want to upset her. I found it very difficult, and then just gave up.
"Jane, I want you to look at those last 10 guys and really choose the one you would want to spend the rest of forever with. If you want to see what one of them looks like, I'll show you with my power." She nodded and for the next hour, I watched her mumble to herself about each guy, occasionally showing her what one of them looked like.
When she was getting kind of sick of looking at guys, (wimp. I had to look through 800 guys and cross them off the list continuously!) she wanted to see some of my childhood memories, and the first thing I showed her was the Voltouri fight when I was a few months old. She cringed a little, and when I saw me as a little girl, I went right to Justin. "Jane," I smiled at her sweetly, "where is Justin? Did he get back to my family?" I was so caught up in her perfect man that I forgot about my little guy.
The look on her face told me that she had no idea where he was. "Well Ness, I was on my way to drop him off with your family, and I remember up to my running for two hours, but then, poof, nothing." She was stuck in a memory.
She also didn't know where Justin was. My vision went all weird. I suddenly saw a strong tint of red in my vision. I don't know how I did it, what with me being only half vampire, hence less strength, but I attacked her and had her against a wall. I could tell she was struggling, but I didn't care. "What do you mean 'poof'? Where is my baby?" I said in a very calm voice.
I saw her confused look, and then she went limp again. I let her fall to the floor, and then took her cell phone and dialed Jake's number. If I was using my phone, he would've picked up the phone on the first ring. But since this was Jane's phone, he only picked up the phone on the 4th ring.
"What?" He said rudely.
"Well, well. I thought that you'd be glad to hear from me, but if you're not…" I let the thought trail off.
"Ness! HOLYSHITIT'SGOODTOHEARFROMYOU!" He managed in one breath. "I'm so sorry. I thought that you were Jane only based on the number. You could never be evil!"
"JAKE! Be quiet for a sec. I'm not mad at you. I'm actually a little worried. May I speak to a wizard please?" Dad always taught me to be polite.
"Ya, hold on a sec." He repeated me.
I heard the shuffling of the phone and then heard Ginny Weasly's voice. "Hello?"
"Ginny? I need to ask you a question. Did Jane see you guys? And did somebody use some magic on her? And is Justin there? If Jane is bewitched, she'll never let me go. Please answer my questions!"
"I will if you are done speaking so quickly that I can barely hear you. Are you done?" I nodded my head quickly, but then realized that she couldn't see that.
"Yes."
"Good. Now, Jane was here. She was getting really evil at the end, so Harry erased her memory for an hour and sent her back to you. Justin is here, safe and sound in Jake's arms. If the sleeping spell hasn't worn off yet, it will soon. Did I miss a question?"
"Nope. What sleeping spell?"
"Harry improvised two spells on Jane and they both worked, so we don't know how long they'll last, but Hermione said no more than three days."
"Jane was awake, but now she's asleep again. Did Harry do that, too?"
"What? Spells only work once. They don't come back on their own. Are you sure she's asleep?"
"She went limp in my arms and then fainted."
"Oh, OH! Harry, come here! Ness, is there some kind of protection that our magic can't get through?"
"I don't think so. There is only the other pixie, Tamera. But please let me try to figure things out and I'll call you before you even think about coming here."
"Okay. I've got to go." I heard the click on the other end. I put Jane's phone on the table and went to examine her, like Carlisle taught me.
What I hadn't noticed before was suddenly painstakingly obvious to me. There was not a vampire laying unconscious in front of me. There was, very clearly, a 20 year old human being in an awkward position. I looked at human Jane and pinched myself, because this has to be a dream. But no such luck.
"Ya," I heard directly behind me. "I did that. She was no good as a vampire, but it seemed cruel to kill her. Hi. I'm Henry. Jane's brother. My power is turning vampires back into humans. I am feared by a lot."
I just stared at him. "You're Jane's brother? Were you changed when she was?"
He just smiled. "Yes. But I left her. I also found her a perfect man, but he doesn't want to be turned into a vampire, so instead, I turned her back into a human. You know how turning a human into a vampire is long and crazy and painful? Doing the opposite is quick and pain-free." I seriously was babbling to myself. He walked over to Jane and slowly woke her up. She blinked her now delicate eyes and stared at Henry.
"Henry?" She said in a whisper. He smiled at her while she looked over herself. She must have liked what she saw, because she started laughing. "Henry? Ness? I'm a human! A human! Do you know how long I've waited to say that again?" She laughed again.
"Sis, I found you the perfect human! You'll love him."
"Really?"
A/N: So we are nearing the end of the story. I'm thinking maybe 2 or 3 more chapters? I hope you have enjoyed this so far. Please R&R! I would like to take this time to thank kuramas-lover97 and lozzy035 for your awesome reviews throughout this story! This was my very first fanfic EVER and you two made me feel really talented. Please tell me what you all think about the end of this chapter!
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