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WARNING : my word is out so I have no spell check. and this chapter is exteremly long.


-Max Pov-

I woke up the next morning with Fang's arms around me and his head burried in my hair. I smirked and turned around to face him.

"WAKE UP !" I screamed at the top of my lungs. He bolted upright and glared at me.

"Really Maxine" He said as he yawned. I smiled and blinked my eyes innocently.

"What ever do you mean " I asked sounding offened.

He put his arms on either sides of me pinning me down to the bed.

"I suggest you dont do that again madam." He said his voice hot on my neck.

"And if I do ?" I wispered.

"Ill do this." He said and started tickling me. I screamed and started to try to wiggle out of the way.

"Fang knock it off !" I giggled. Yes I Maximum Ride was ticklish.

He rolled over and leaned on one elbow watching me pant on the bed.

"You are such a tool Mr. Walker." I siad walking over to slip on my dress.

"Well you will soon be married to this tool." He said.

I froze remembering the night before. I had willingly agreed to marry the enemy.

"See you later." He said walking out the door.

I walked over to the dresser and started brushing my hair.

"JHON !" I screamed. I heard hurried footsteps comming down the hall. a moment later a knock at the door.

"Yes my lady" he said

"Can you please get some riding boots for me." I said. It was the one thing Nickolas Walker would not stand for, the one thing that might stop this marrage.

"Right away my Lady." he said shutting the door.

I walked downsatirs to find Jhon standing there a pair of boots in his hands.

"My lady the boots." He said handing them to me.

"Yes thank you Jhon." I said smiling at him.

I slipped them on and walked outside feeling the sun on my face.

Fang was over in the barn yelling at some poor ranch hand.

I walked over towards Midnights corral. The black horse stood there staring at me his coat gleamed in the morning sun.

"Hey there Midnight,hows my demon horse." I cooed and the horse nickered and walked toward me.

"Good boy well show Fang a thing or two wont we ?" I said undoing the gate and stepping in.

The horse ears stood strieght and he watched me carefully. I noticed the halter and lead rope near the ground. I bent down and grabbed and turned toward the horse whos eyes screamed with curiousity.

"Hey now this wont hurt you, and neither will I ." I said holding out the halter the horse sniffed it then snorted. I laughted

"Whats the matter boy you arnt possibly scared of halter." I said. The horse took a step toward me and I slowly slipped the halter on.

"That aboy." I cooed.

"Well I"ll be look at that." I heard a male voice and turned to see a male servant along with a huge crowd watching me.

I turned back toward the horse.

"Ignore them they should be working anyhow." I sid my voice gentel as if I was talking to a baby. I lead the horse around the corral.

"What are you all doing standing around you should-" Fangs voice was cut off.

I Ignored them and focased on the horse. The horse snorted.

"Easy there baboy." I said stroking his neck.

"Max honey lisen to me, I need you to undo the lead and get out of there now." Fangs voice said calmly but I knew he wanted to yell.

"No im busy, now fetch me a saddle and make yourself helpful." I said my voice steely. The horse snorted and pranced around a bit.

"Max if you dont come out, im comming in." Fangs said his voice just as hard as mine.

"Shhh boy its all right im not here to hurt you, and Fang wont come in this pen unless he wants you to freak while im holding you." I said my voice gentel. I kept stroking his face and neck.

"Danm it Max." I heard him say and the crunch of his footsteps told me he was walking away.

"See thats how you handel a real demon." I said chuckling.

I eased the horse into a trot and then a canter and then finally into a gallop.

"You want the saddle or not." Fangs voice said. I jumped I was so busy working with the horse I hadent knoticed him.

I let the horse come to a stop and walked over to the gate. I went to take the saddle from Fang when he wrapped his arms around me and pulled me out of the pen.

"YOU IDIOT ! YOU WANT TO GET KILLED ! THAT SEEMS TO BE A REAL HABIT FOR YOU ! I TOLD YOU NOT TO GO NEAR THE DANM HORSE AND YOU DISOBEYED ME !" Fang yelled he raised a hand and slapped me.

I gasped steping backwards.

"WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF ! OH WAIT YOUR MAXINE AND I DO ANYTHING I WANT ! WELL NEWS FLASH YOU DONT HERE NOT ANYMORE !" He said shoving me.

"MASTER STOP !" I heard Jhon yell and saw him running across the yard.

I backed up against the barn. "Please-"

"SAVE IT I DONT WANT TO HEAR WHAT YOUR POOR ESCUE OF AN APPLOGY YOU CAN MUSTER UP ! YOUR WORTHLESS !" He screamed his face red with anger.

I tried to take another step back but the barn wouldnt move. I couldnt breath it was all too much,everything started to swirl.

"WELL" He said his face was blurry. I fell foward and into the darkness.


-Fangs pov-

I was fumming. Why does this danm woman always get herself in danger.

"WELL !" I screamed.

Max was pale and her eyes look scared to death. She needed to learn not to disobey me.

She suddenly fell to the ground.

"GET UP " I SCREAMED. She didnt move.

I nelt down.

"Max get up now." I said my voice hard. She still wasent moving.

"Shit" I mummbled and flipped her over. Her eyes were closed and she was sweating her breath was hard and labored.

"MASTER SHE CANT BE OVERLY STRESSED OR SHE CAN-" Jhon said but then stopped stairing at Max.

"She passes out." he wispered.

I backed up what had I done. Had I killed her? Oh God I had slapped her. What did I do? I shouldnt have lost it.

"Master ?" A servant said and I took off running.


-TIME SKIP-

-Fangs Pov-

I wlaked in the house. Jhon was pacing in the kitchen.

"Were is she." I ordered.

He turned around . " In the bedroom she hasent woke up yet." He said the worry in his voice did nothing to sooth my uneasy stomach.

I walked toward the bedroom and knocked on the door."come in" Maxs voice said she sound freightend.

"Look Max im sorry I lost-" Omega and Ari stood there Ari had a knife at her troat.

"Well if it isnt Nicky how nice of you to join us." Omega snarled.

"I thought you were dead." I murmmered.

"Fang"Max screamed but Ari dug the knife deeper into her. She wimpered.

My hands balled into fist.

"What a nice little dress here and ooo look a Tux well looks like the wedding is comming up soon." Omega said snarling motioning to the dress and tux in the closet.

"In fact I dont remember getting my invitaion do you Ari ?" Omega said.

"Why no I dont, and im sure Maxi would love to have me there." Ari said wrapping an arm around her waist the other one holding the knife in place.

"Get away from you mutt." She snarled.

"You little bitch he said unwrapping his arm and moving th knife as if to stab her.

She jumped out of the way and tried to grab the pistol by the nightstand.

"MAX watch out !" I screamed. Ari lunged at her stabbing her in the stomach. Max backed up against the wall . She gasped for air.

I grabbed my pistole from its holster and shot omega and pointed it at Ari who was stairing at me wide eyed.

"I wouldnt do that." He growled pulling Max in front of him who screamed.

"Let her go now." I sick bastard was going to die once and for all.

"Fine." He said stabbing her again this time in the leg she screamed and tossing her at me. I caught her and he feld the room.

"Kill him" She wispered her voice strained. I set her down and chased after him I saw him sruggling at the door I knoticed Jhon with a rifle.

I Nodded and we both shot. He fell to the ground.

"CALL A DOCTOR NOW !"I screamed. I ran back to the bedroom Max was laying in a pool of blood her eyes barly open.

"Max baby stay awake for me honey okay." I said and lifted her dress and started putting pressure on the wound. She wimpered slightly and looked at me.

"Did you kill them." She said her voice strained.

"Yeah Max I did now just rest." I said

"JHON BRING ME SOME TOWELS AND WATER AND BANDAGES NOW !" I Hollered. Jhon appreared in seconds with them.

"I already had them master and the doctor is on his way." HE said. I satrated cleaning her wounds.

This was all my fault I had done this to her.


I promise she is not going to die.

The wedding is the last chapter. Sorry this was mostly a filler I just had to tie up a few loose strings. This was going to be the last chapter but I fekt it would have left you hanging. Hop I cleared everything up. And yes Jhon is one of mine. Also I still need some song ideas.

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