Hey Guys! Not a Chapter, so don't get too excited...
I was wondering if anybody might want to post an all honest review on how they feel this stroy is going...
:) Now, why this post isn't a chapter? Lets just say I'm working on creepy villains for awhile, but I do promise that I will be posting soon.. and am honestly sorry that I didn't post any sooner for the past few months, in truth I actually forgot that I made this stroy, but don't worry I will definitly finish this one..
Just like my story Fighting temptation, I've gained a few followers and visitors, I'd like to send my thanks to them for making me feel loved and motivated, I don't know how I'll finish this story without you guys.. xoxo
I would also like to use this post as my chance to discuss a little about the story.
Now, how did I come up with this story?
I was finishing up an assignment in literature, when it came to me that I haven't written anything in awhile, and since my last hush hush fiction was a success for me, I thought 'hey, why not try something fresh and different for a change? get away from the real context of the novel and make your own.' and that I did.
Now this story is something still on the genre of forbidden love; I just love the classics! and I know majority of the world loves it too.
For some who doesn't understand it so well, the prologue starts off during the initial start of Jev/Nora (Nathalie) first romance in 1891.
Which you might find confusing as when it skips to 2009 and 2010, now that is the present Nathalie/Nora, she's a character a bit different from Becca Fitzpatrick's original character. She's hardworking and independent, and innocent.
The chapter starts off in how the lovers meet in the most cliche circumstances, and heads off into an awkward relationship with love and magic. Now Jev, is the odd character, he's still an angel, but he isn't a fallen. He is the modern version of cupid, an angel that knows love in the mortal world more than any other angel. He is capable of coming down to earth on the near season of Valentines and would leave at the end of valentines. He is a character that holds the major conflict in the story, although Nora seems to have memory conflict. Jev is a very different problem, he has to find a way to be able to love Nora and stay on earth without being notice in heaven that he has not gone back (although he is quite willing to fall just for the sake of his love), and when there is love, there will always be the enemies of love and our cupid in this story has many ( which I presented a sneak at the recent chapter posted, and you will also find more in the later parts of the story).
Now Nathalie's Journal/diary is magically appeared in the old journal that Jev gave to Nora, that is Jev initiating his plan on trying to make Nora remember him and their many adventures of love.
Why a journal? why not just tell her eye to eye that she is an reincarnation of his one true love over and over again?
well you see, telling her all that would be too much information to grasp that somehow, Jev learned in the past, that telling the truth is a curse that he inflicts on Nora unintentionally, that leads to her death, and when he tells her that HE is Cupid/an angel, the curse works stronger than anything that would burn her body and soul into ashes.
The Curse? ( you'll find that out soon.. )
Now for the Journal starting on 1890? why not 1891 just like the prologue?
if you haven't notice 1890 is when they first met and Jev never, not once told her the truth.
1891 is when she 'Already knows'... How? -keep reading my story and you'll get there soon..
So all in all, I think I had a good Start that has gotten people interested and somehow got my foot stuck in a hole that I've lost a rather large amount of readers.. (according the graphs)
With this post, I hope I get to gain back the readers that I've lost and maybe even new ones..
If you're interested to talk about the story, or maybe contribute a few character and parts to the plot. PM me or just post a Review...
I accept any kind of feedback and would try my best to improve more and more...
I'd love to get to know my readers.. :)
Enjoy the Story everyone! R&R please!
Again Thank Everyone! Your Reviews warms my heart and simply makes my day!