PRIYA….Yeah… Mala… Zol ka.. wo bhi…. Hehehe… Thank You…
CRESTICA…Jo Hukum… Thank You…
GUEST….Thank You…
ANGELBETU… OML!, Wait, first this Small Pakshi Flew and takes few Sips of Orange Juice… mmmmm… ahahhhhh… now Back.. ally.. Sach ka BETU BETA is Here… hmmm, OML!... again Pakshi back and now coming with a Small paperglass gripped inside Choonch and now taking Sips with Intervels seeing Continuous FB of this Small MALBOSH till Chapter 4 only Comprising of Praise and Appreciation…. Hmmm…. This Small Pallot is so much Happy getting such Small MALBOSH always BIG from Pallot Not even in Size but in Talent and Skill too… really Honored for this Small pallot… Lets have party… wait, pallot bring KAALA CHASMA…. Hehehhe… Thank You so very much BETA…
SGJ…Thank You…
SHIKHA…Thank You…
GUEST…. Thank You…
MASOOMA….Thank You…
ABHI-YA-FAN…its Difficult Beta to Add Few parts as I already Tell You that Daya is very much Inspired with Pradyuman Sir rather Abhijeet… I showed Difference in Accepting level in Same age of Kids… Khair, Hope U understand My Point… Thank You…
DA95…Thank You…
ROCKING DUO….Thank You…
SARIYA…Beta, He termed His Mumma GIRL FRIEND of His Dad… U knew na what kind of Perception went to Especially Kids regarding this Term…. Hope now U could get… Thank You…
GUEST… hahahah… U are really said, what in My Heart… basically Baccha… khair, Exclude this Story as this is Not a DUO Story.. it's a Family Story but Yes, Ur Complain is Correct, Mostly I showed Daya Sir as toddler because Sadly but His Perception in On-Screen and Off-Screen showed like This.. Mostly His Colleagues still Enjoying His those Antics, Kids/Young Champs doing even in CID, U showed People Pampering Him like the Younger One… Regarding that Slap, yeah I showed in Few, but Honestly, in those Stories Where I showed small Glimpse of that Pushing, Confront, Punch, Slap towards Abhijeet Sir from Daya Sir.. I ve got so many bad Confrontation from Readers, that's why now I m Not Writing DUO stories even Writing Team Stories where I m trying to Less Daya Sir Character, his Scenes, even His Emotional Avtar, Confrontation etc (Excluding those which I wrote on Readers Request)… I tried to Omit His Character which is Excess in My Most Stories and used His Character as Only a Supportive cast… Yeah, I did Wrong with Abhijeet Sir Character as show Him as Extra Old but now I m Working on that and U saw these in My Recent Work Out.. Beta Waqt lagy ga.. Ghalatiyaan ki hain magar Un ko Sudhar raha hun.. Aap ka Support chahyey.. A Big Thank you to give that Fb which really I Needed…
R… Thank You…
SALMA… Salma, I really Like Your Story, But in this Chapter, I realized You that How U use One Sentence with Difference pause/Clause/emotions etc which totally Changed the Aspect of that Piece of News.. U already knew Girl friend is a Term in Our Society taking in Less Positive Means still today, I just Tell this in New Manner.. hope U Like it… and Yeah, I told U in which Age They are… Thank You…
SHAINA…awww, I m too… Shaina and Dada turned Same same… heheheh… Thank You…
Thank You so much for All Active and Silent Readers…
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Daya eyes wide opened and before he reacted, engulfed in a soothing shell started crying loudly, his brother really does not understand how he consoles his brother so just patting over his head, heard a low tone...
Daya: Abhi, Tum dussa ho gaye...?
Abhijeet got the mental stress of his small bear so hugged him tightly who cozily inside his busy loving shell heard a strong clear reply...
Abhijeet: nahi (after some minutes, separate Daya and then grabbed his palms and asked) Daya, Dad aur Mumma Sunein gy tou kitna hurt hon gy na...?
Daya (nodded and said innocently): Haan, Jabhi tou Main ny un ko nahi bataya aur Nana Nani ko bhi... (Tense) jub us Suraj nay Mujhy bola Kay Tumhari Mumma tou Tumhaly Dad ki GF hain aur Gandy log hee aisay Shadi...
Abhijeet (interrupts): shhhh... Shhhh... Acha ye Batao... Maa Meri aur Tumhari Kya hain?
Daya (confusingly): Mumma...
Abhijeet (nodded and asked): aur Nana Nani ki...
Daya: ummm... shayed Bahu...
Abhijeet: shayed nahi Bewakoof (Daya makes face. His bro added) Bahu hee hain... aur Rohan Mama ki...?
Daya: Sister...
Abhijeet: aur DR uncle ki..?
Daya: Bhabi...
Abhijeet (lastly): aur Dad ki...
Daya (shyly): Wife...
Abhijeet: True... ab ye batao kay agr Mumma Meri Sister ban jayein... Rohan Mama ki Bhabi... DR Uncle ki Wife tou...
Daya (dis-linking tone): awww, ye tou Buht Buht Ghalat baat hogi... aik dum Gandi...
Abhijeet (realizing Him): hain na... aur ye Batao GF ka Kya matlab hota hy... Girl Friend na... Theek (Daya nodded) tou Girl Friend ka matlab wo Log ya Friend Jo Larki hun aur Jin sy Hum Pyar karein... tou Kya Tum (asking) Mumma sy Pyar Nahi krty ya Tum ko acha lagy ga kay Dad un ko Pyar Na karein.. Un ko Daant dien... Ain...
Daya (nodded negatively with): awww, nahi nahi... (lovingly) Mumma tou kitni Achi hain aur Dad bhi...
Abhijeet: phir... Tum nay kyun ghalat socha... Tum ko Suraj ko jawab dena tha na...
Daya: Yaar, wo Sub Log Muskurany lagy aur wo bhi aisy… (Sadly) Main samjh hee nahi paaya aur phir Mery Sar mein itna Dard hua na… Sub Dark bhi ho gaya tha…
Abhijeet: tou ab School jana hy aur Dad aur Maa sy (imitate) Dussa Thatam na…
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The Small Rabbit Embarrassed Badly who Hopped Down and after Knocking moved inside His Parents room…
He Sweetly wrapped His Arm around His Dad Neck while Kissed on Her Mother Cheek so Dad Teased…
Dad: hmmm, (teasingly) Silent War Khatam…
Daya really Embarrassed , sat over Bed, Look at Both, Grabbed His dad and Mumma Palms and say in Shame tone…
Daya: I m so Sorry Dad and Mumma… (shamefully) Mujhy Aap Logun kay sath aisa… (soggy tone) Main Buht Sorry krta hun… I m feeling so Embarrassed against U Both (look at Both especially his Dad and adds) Seriously Dad….
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His Dad Sweetly Hugged Him while Mumma gives Him a Kiss makes him Happier so Leaves while Neha started…
Neha: shayed, (regretfully) Meri hee Tarbiyet mein kuch Kami….
Pradyuman (interrupts): Aap aisa kyun Sochti hain Neha… mehz (proudly) 12 Saal ki Umer mein Humara Beta, Sharminda hona, Ghalati manna aur Maafi Mangna jesy Baray baray Lesson Seekh chukka hy.. kya ye Kum Kaamyaabi hy…
Neha (again): pr Shayed….
Pradyuman: Neha, (softly) Wo Baray ho rahy hain.. Cheezun ko Different Perspective, Aspect sy Dekh rahy hain… Aap Khud Sochein.. Ek Jumla hy "Tum Bhooky ho" aur Dusra "Oye Bhooky"… Sochein tou Dono ka matlab Aik hee hy magar Pehly Jumly mein Concern hy, hamdardi hay, Muhabbat hay aur Dusray mein Ana hy, Ego, Ghamand etc….
Neha: tou (ask) Abhijeet nay aisa kyun Nahi socha…?
Pradyuman: Aap hr Ungli ko Khench kay Bara hee krna chahti hain na… yehi tou Ghalat hy… hr Bacchy ki Apni Apni Soch hoti hay… Yaad hy Daya ny kitni Jaldi Naye Rishtun ko Qabul kiya tha… Dhal gaya tha… ek Lamha nahi laga tha Usy Mujhy Dad kehny mein.. magar Abhijeet nay kitna Time lagaya tha… (softly) aisa hota hy Neha… Bacchun ko Haqeeqat Apny Dhang sy Face krnay dein… warna Hum tou hain na Un kay Peechy… Un ko Pakarny, Sanbhalny, Sahara deny waly… phir….
Neha nodded Understand His Husband Point of View who always at His back…
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Here the Smaller One coming inside His room and happily said to His Bro by Dangling His arms around His Bro neck with...
Daya: Thank you Boss (kiss on His Temple with) tum nay Mujhy ye sub Bataya... Pata hy (removing arms and adds) Dad ny aur Mumma ny foran Mujhy Hug kr liya aur Meri Sorry bhi Accept kr lii...
Abhijeet: Good...
Daya (now again lay over bed with): Dekhna, ab Main suraj ka kesy halwa banata hun (Abhijeet Glared so said) acha na, nahi larun ga.. bas Ek Do Mukky... (sadly looking His Boss Fiery eyes so changed Revenge with) Dhakka tou dy skta (again the same Fire, burns Him so said) acha ab Munh tou Chira skta hun na.. is Baat mein koi Nahi... (Closing eyes) hunh...
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after a bit, Opening His eyes, Looking his Abhi who just Jerk His Head so Sweetly Smiled and now went to His Dreamland as already he took Soup and Medicine in between His Bro Lecture, who Look that Peaceful Face and Reminding the Previous Part of their Life as They Both Cater such things in their Lives from quite Long...
Voice: kitni baar kaha hy Daya…. Pr Samjh tou aatii Nahi na Tumhein…
The Figure who was taking ahead inside Living Area after Finishing His Plantation time, Stunned Hearing Loud and Angry tone of His Loving Doll…
The Most Shocking thing that Figure does not get any Voice in Return in that Scold means something seriously happened between Her Both Grand Son's…
Voice (again): malum hy na.. Maa ko Pata chala tou Un ko kitna Dukh hoga…
The Granny now really Surprised meant any matter related to Neha, She hears More…
Voice (again): kitna (Sad tone) Hurt hon gi Wo.
She Peeps inside seeing Her Elder Grand Son roaming while the Younger One sitting and Listening that Scold, Sadly, Quietly or in little Keenly, She found Tearily too… She Listens adding lines as…
Abhijeet: Tum aakhir Sunty hee kyun ho, Un Bekaar Baatun ko…
Daya (little wet tone): tou wo Bolty hee kyun hain…. (angrily wiping His Tears Harshlly too with) Haan…
His Broken tone, Hurts His Brother, who sat beside Him now and taking Him in His Loving Comforter and then adds…
Abhijeet (wiping His Small Bear Tears with): Yaar, tujhy Pata hy na, Logun ko Dusrun ko Tease krnay mein kitna Maza aata hy… pr Humein tou (Softly patting on His Dodo Cheeck who comes More Close to Him with) Un kay Plan ko Kharab krna hy na, Gussa nahi kr kay aur Na hee Lar ky…
Daya (sadly): pr Un ko aisa Nahi Bolna chahyey na Abhi (adds) Main tou Un ko kuch bbhi Nahi kehta, phir bhi wo Log Bolty hain, Tumhari Mumma Gandi hain, Tumhary Dad Step Father hain (now in crying tone) Nai na…
His Brother takes Him in His Loving Shell as His Small Doll started Crying Loudly and Painfully now, so asked Sadly….
Abhijeet (sadly): Tumhein aisa lagta hy…
Daya nodded BIG No but still Crying and His Brother Weaving inside His Hairs, Consoling Him although feeling More Pain in His Heart so added…
Abhijeet: Tu Sunta hee kyun hy Un ki Baatein… aik Kaan sy Sun… Dusray sy Nikal dy…. Ain…
Daya (sadly): Nahi Niklti na… Mery Kaan bhi tou kitny Durr Durr hain…
Abhijeet ( disappointingly ): kya Daya… Rubberband laga ly Tu…
At Night, Daya came in Dining table after taking a Bath and when sat over Chair, Neha said…
Neha: Daya, ye kya… abhi Naha kr aaye ho aur Cap Pehan lii… Kal sy Dekh rahi hun kay Cap Pehan kr hr Kaam ho raha hy… Soya bhi Cap Pehan kr ja raha hy.. Kyun (Daya makes Face, Neha dds) arry Utaro, Baal saaray Geely hon gy…
Daya (pat on His Cap with): nahi Mumma… Theek hy…
Nani (came and said): Nahi Beta, Mumma Theek keh rahi hain na… (taking out Cap Suddenly with) aisy Geely Baal rakhna…
She Abruptly Stopped as found a Rubber-band Strongly Tied around His Both Ears makes His ears and Area turned Red… She Sacredly taking it out with…
Nani: arry… kis nay lagaya ye Daya.. haan…?
Daya (sadly): Bhai ny Bola Nani (all eyes focused over Abhijeet who are in Stunned phase) (Daya adds more) Mery Kaan Buht Durr Durr hain na.. Baat Niklti hee Nahi…
Abhijeet (pat over His head with): aby… Main nay Mazaq kiya tha…
Neha also Approaching Him, Rubbing Her Palm Softly over those Areas while Daya adds…
Daya (suspicious tone): Hanse tou rahy Nahi thy Tum… hain…
Neha: Bhagwaan… itna Bewakoof kyun hy ye (stroking His Hairs with) Beta, Mazaq Bata kr thori kiya jata hy….
Daya (disagreeing): ye kya Baat hui Mumma…
Abhijeet (standing from His Chair, coming to His Brother with): acha, ab sy Main Sahab sy koi Mazaq krny sy Pehly Un ko ek Notice dy dun ga kay Bhai Sahib ye Mazaq hy, Isy Serious Na lein…
All Smiles on that Chewing and Teasing tone who Replaces His Mother Position and started Rubbing over Daya's ears, while Dad asked…
Dad: wesy kaun sii Baat (look at Daya with) Aap ko Apnay Kaan sy Nikalni thi…
Daya (look at His father and sadly said): koi nahi Dad…
He turn and Hugged His Brother waist as He sat over Chair while Abhijeet in Standing mode who still Rubbing His Ears and Assured All that His Small Dude is Fine…
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In the Year of their Initial days of College where They only Familiarize with Surroundings even Trying to Settled in their New Environment as Both Subjects are Little Different especially in their Subsidiary as Abhijeet taking Statistic and Other Commerce Subjects while Daya takes Computers and Both few Periods and Lectures are Separate from each Other...
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The Demise of Mr's Shaila really Impacts its Pain over Abhijeet… He turned Quiets/Sad even Teary Mostly…
Daya trying His Best taking out His Brother from that turmoil as He also Effects from that Death in their Family but not much like Abhijeet…
He saw his Brother taking Less Meal and sleep, Totally Boycott from going to College either They just Join College few Weeks back….
He really Tense regarding His Boss Health and today when coming to Call him for Lunch, Tolerate the same harsh tone of His Bro…
Abhijeet: Daya Jao, (sadly) Mujhy nahi khana… Nahi hy na Bhook Mujhy…
Daya: acha…
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Sometimes, His Silence really Played Most Important role which Disturb People so much that They changed their Decision so Easily…
He looks His Doll who sat over Stairs Silently, placing His Head over His Arms and after a bit, coming towards Him, grabbed His Arm and takes Him to Living Area…
Daya sat His Boss over Chair and making Plate for Him even make a Bite and giving it towards His Mouth saying…
Daya: Mumma jesa Khilaon ga… Sach…
Abhijeet Opened His Mouth, takes Bite and after a minute taking Meal from his Hand even gives Him Soft Hug too…
Abhijeet still not Prepared Himself to Join College and after seeing His Health, His Family not Pressurizing Him so Daya going College Alone…
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Voice (huge crying tone): ab kya hoga… Mumma tou Kitta Daantein gii aur Dad…
A Crying and Sobbing Forced Abhijeet to Stay Outside the room and after a minute, all Family member Standing around Him Hearing Crying and Sobbing tones, Tensed them…
Voice (again in sobbing): Bhai bhi Daanty ga… ab.. (sobbing) Main kya karun ga…
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Obviously, They Entered inside finding the Smallest Member of Family Crying Huge and after getting them, Loud His Tone, created Panic Inside where All People asking Him, Consoling Him with…
Nana: kya hua Daya… Ro kyun rahy ho…
Neha: Daya Beta… Larai hui kya kisi sy…
Pradyuman: Daya…
Abhijeet (coming close and asked): kya hua Chote… kisi nay kuch…
Daya: awww, Abhi… kisi nay na (wiping Tears) Mery Paisay Chura liye…
Abhijeet: kya… kahan sy… Kub…?
Daya (after calming down as His Mumma gives Him Water said): College sy.. ab kya hoga… Pocket Money sy Bachayey thy…. (again started Crying) ab tou Main.. kya karun ga…
Abhijeet: kesy Chura liye… ain…?
Daya: wo na Boss… haan, Main Stairs pr betha hua tha tou Aik Larka na Mujh sy Takraya tou Us ki Ice Cream Meri Shirt pr lug gayii tou Us nay bola kay tum Apni Shirt Wash kr aao, Main tumharay bag ka Dihaan rakkhun ga…
Abhijeet: aur Tum ( disappointed tone ) Bag Usy dy kr chaly gaye…
Daya (nodded with): haan na, aur jub main Wapis aaya na (again started weeping) tou Bag mein sub Kuch tha.. bas Folder sy Paisay Ghayeb thy…
Pradyuman: acha acha… (softly looking speed of tears adds) aap Ro Nahi Beta… Mujh sy ly lena…
Daya (suddenly): Sach na Dad…
Pradyuman (nodded and asked): kitny Paisy thy…?
Daya: Twenty Seven thousand, Seven Hundred and Fifty Rupees Dad…
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The Mouth of All Listeners Opened in Shock Hearing such Heavy Amount in their 16 years Brat, gives them Spark of Scare, heard another tone…
Abhijeet (pat over His head with): Aye Bhagwaan (to all especially His Dad) Dad, Two thousand Seven Hundred and Fifty…
A Relax Sigh Released by All even Sparked Little Smile on All Lips seeing the Positive Nod of their Small Khargosh…. Here Nana asked…
Nana: kya krna tha itny Paisun ka Daya ko…?
Daya (shyly): Secret hy Nana…
Abhijeet: Daya, Aap ki koi Friend hy… (tense tone) matlab koi Dost… larki…
A Grin turned Deep over Daya cheek makes His Mother Tensed while Elder Brat added…
Abhijeet: kya Maa, Aap bhi… Rahul ki Birthday hy na….
Daya (shocked so murmur): hawww, Bhai ko kesy Pata chala….
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All Relaxed after this and meantime Abhijeet asked Daya the Most Important Query with…
Abhijeet (rubbing finger on His lips with): acha Tum Usy Pehchan tou lo gy na, jis nay Paisay Churaye thy…?
Daya: haan haan… kyun nahi… wo na Ice Cream Kha raha tha.. Orange flavor ki… hmm, Stick wali… wo jo 50 Rupees ki Milti hay na.. Wo….
All Elders really takes Deep Sigh while the Elder Bear turned Angry getting the Stupidity of His Dodo so Scolded Him…
Abhijeet: kya…. (tease) tou ab Main College kay Sub Larkun ko Orange Ice Cream (more teasing tone) Stick wali jo 50 Rupees ki Milti hay, wo Khilaon tou (chewing way) Sahab, Us Chor ko Pehchanein gy…
Daya: khair (disagreeing way) ab aisa bhi nahi hy… Wo Jis tarah Mujh pr Gira than a (proudly) Us sy bhi Main Usy Pehchan lun ga….
Pradyuman (whisper): Hey Bhagwaan…
Abhijeet: acha tou phir Main Sub Larkun ko Sahab kay ooper Dhakka dun ta kay Wo Chor pakra jaye… aby, Teri Haddi pasli Bachay gi… Ain… Pagal….
Daya (complaining tone): Nana, Aap Dekh rahy hain.. Abhi Mujhy Pagal bol raha hy…
Nana: kyun Abhijeet, kyun Mery Choty bacchy ko Pagal bol rahy ho (Daya Agreed with HMMM) (Nana again) wo Pagal thori hay (Daya nods, Nana adds after a bit) wo tou Chota Pagal hy…
A laughing Blaster of Elder Rabbit and Other totally Enclosed the Smaller One inside Embarrassment Shell, gives Him No Option except to Hide inside His Grand Father Loving Shell….