Poems & such :: Warriors Style

by Bittersweet314

Mostly poems that I've written that pertain to Warriors. All written by me, myself, & I.. Rate T just to be safe, though it should pretty much not be a problem. R&R! & these aren't riddles, either. Not really, at least. Oh, just give it a chance.

10. Suffocate

A/N: hi.

Sorry, but this is yet another sad poem. I've been in one of those depressed-ish moods lately so that kinda explains the saddening poetry. Maybe the new year will bring a little bit of happiness…I hope so at least..

But this is (once again) about Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight; this one's from Squirrelflight's POV though.
Actually, I wrote this back a long time ago, but hey, it fits for BrambleXSquirrel so I'm posting.

Disclaimer:::I own nothin'. Savvy?

Suffocate

The world's closing in
Feels like my lungs are caving in
There's just not enough room
If something don't change, I'll be gone soon
I'm sinking deeper and I won't stop until
The air comes back, stops being still
Why won't you help me when I'm helpless?
Where are you when I'm breathless?
Why won't you let yourself see?
When it's obvious I just can't breathe?
Will you ever be there?
Will you save me, act like you almost care?
Will you listen to your heart or make a mistake?
Will you leave me here to suffocate?

A/N: In my mind this is like perfect for that split second when she doesn't know whether or not Brambleclaw really is abandoning her or not. And she's hoping that he won't, even though we all know that he makes the WRONG decision and WRONGLY leaves her feeling like she's worthless…**wrongly might I add**

Ok, so rant over, let me respond to my reviewers….
-Anonymous reviewer [[whom I am assuming is Shimmertail]] ::: I am seriously considering starting an actual story. Thanks for supporting the idea! And I was kinda thinkin of keeping the canon characters, and then just adding a few OCs because I have an idea for a few OCs that I want to use… but I still want to keep some of the characters in the books. Especially Jayfeather (he's my favorite(: haha). I don't know, though…
-Birdflight1 ::: I know right, more people need Jesus in their life. It really is awesome, and thank you for calling me a Jesus freak!
And thanks for the compliment on the poems, too.
Ohhh, and when Life gives me lemons, I throw them back and demand Ben Barnes, haha (I have a Ben Barnes obsession).
THANKS TO BOTH OF YOU! YA'LL ARE AWESOME!

SO…do ya'll do New Years Resolutions? I did this year, and I've already failed at it. I was trying to be less indecisive but I already am back to not being sure…haha. Oh well.

...REVIEW!

-Bittersweet314