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SAINT FANG OF BOREDOM AND FANG TALKED TO ME!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Look, sorry for disappearing every once in a while, but I'm not getting the reviews I hoped to be getting. People are subbing, which is great, but it actually says on the description of this story 'Flames and Reviews WANTED' (Or it will do soon...)

Come on! I need something! Opinions! What do you think about my style of writing, my use of characters? Say something! Oh, and don't JUST say 'Update!' I hate that.

On we go!

Oh, wait. For chapter ten, I'll put up another disclaimer AND I'll have Fang go all OOC!

Ye Olde Disclaimer: I does't not own Lady Maximum and her friends and foes.

Chapter Ten: Angel's Impatience. BY TEN! {566}

Max's P.O.V

As the Doc scooped Total up into his arms and began to walk towards the rest of his clan, I held Angel's shoulder- reassuring her and stopping her from getting in the way. If there was a chance that Total might get hurt from Angel's impatience, I will stop that chance in its tracks. However nice it would be to be free of Total, I'm going to do everything in my power to stop my little six-year-old from having a broken heart.

Fang came up behind me and put his arm around my waist, a totally un-Fang-like thing to do. "Thanks Max." he whispered softly into my ear. "For saving us. We would have been goners if you hadn't rushed in with your reason and whatnot. You're The Angel Of Reason." His breath tickled my ear, and I shivered, though weather due to lust, fear or happiness, I do not know. Wait, did I just think lust?

Hoisting Angel into my arms, I turned to face him. "The Angel Of Reason?" I asked, staring into Fang's deep, near onyx eyes. A rush of chargrin flared upon his features, before being replaced by a soft smile so rare, it made my heart quicken and my head spin. "Yup. Wings, Beauty, My heart. You're defiantly an Angel. My Angel." He breathed. With that, he leaned in closer to me, our eyes fluttering closed as he tilted his head to capture my lips with his.

Suddenly, the Angel in my arms squirmed and leapt down, dampening the mood more effectively than a tsunami on a candle. Both Fang and I sprang back a little, then grabbed the little rascal. "Angel," I warned her. "Do you want to risk hurting Total?" She twirled to face me, her blonde curls whirling around her head alike a halo as her brilliant blue eyes bored into my muddy brown ones.

"Max," she spoke powerfully, both in my mind and aloud. "Do you really want to risk my happiness?" My thoughts began their Olympic acrobatics, spiralling around my head. That's like asking me to risk my life! The lives of the world!

Okay, maybe that's the Bambi eyes talking, but still! She knows my weaknesses are Bambi eyes and cute shoes. *Holds up Angel* How can you not resist this face?

I pulled her into a hug, and all of a sudden, Fang joined in, making as big a Hallmark moment as you will ever see. Please, kill me now. "Maxie?" Angel asked in my head. I growled in her ear. She knew my reaction to that nickname. "Most of the people over there are thinking the same thing. Really fast, but all the same thing." And what's that, honey? I replied.

"They're all thinking how you and Fang look too young to be my parents!" I stiffened. "They think you're my mom! Well, you practicly are..." Angel trailed off with one glance at my horror-stricken face.

Fang tapped my on the shoulder and I twirled. He raised an eyebrow, expecting me to say something like 'Angel wants another pet'. No, I had bigger fish to fry. I could barely talk. I breathed, "They think we're Angel's parents. You and me..."

And then Fang did something I'd only ever seen him do twice, once from experimental drugs at the School, the other from being pounded to within a hair's breath of death.

He fainted.

YA-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Finally! One, Fang SWOONED!

Two: I UPDATED!

Three: HALLOW'S EVE IS ALMOST UPON US!!!! WOOOOO!

I am a ghost. Beware!

REVEIW!