Hey guys, I know it's been a while since I updated. I've got the next chapter done, but I want to write a bit more and try to really get a good plot going before I publish it.
I'm also thinking about going back and editing some of the chapters that I have already written, adding things like sensory details and imagery.
Please don't be mad at me for not publishing the actual chapter here, I know I've gotten a little mad at people who did that. I've just been reading a couple other stories, and had a few revelations about how I could improve mine. A beta reader is definitely one of those ways. If anyone reading this is interested in wasting a couple minutes of their life helping me, I'd greatly appreciate it. I'm trying to get the chapters done as soon as possible, I promise.
Thank you for all the favorites, follows, and reviews so far!
SarniePolla