FALL FROM GRACE A GrimUlqui fic. May contain yaoi and "indecent" launguage

Chapter 8.5 SPECIAL VIEWER MAIL AND PREVIEW

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A/N: I'm really sorry for those who went ZOMGS! NEW CHAPTER ALREADY! And got shitty omake chapter for the sudden stream of reviews I got. But Fall From Grace is wrapping up and my reviewers make me want to cry after long, yet good days. But then you just sit down and see niceness in the inbox and get the warm fuzzies. So this has some viewer mail from my dearest reviewers and some foreshadowing for later, so if you do read on, there's a preview for the next chapter.

So here's my response to your mail with my loveable Ulquiorra and Grimmjow.

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ULQUI: So, viewer mail... why are we being asked to do this now?

GJ: Because the writer is a lazy people pleasing ass

ULQUI: She can kill you off you know

GJ: I'd like to see her try. I'm vital and shit.

ULQUI: I'm more popular though

GJ: Says who?

ULQUI: This guy...Raefele... "Go Ukelala"

GJ: Thats how your spelling your name now? laughter

ULQUI: Oh I'm sorry GrimmJAW

GJ: fucked my name up...

ULQUI: I'm getting the word we need to start reading.

GJ: I hate this...

ULQUI: Kitsui writes:

, Niia me wants to read more now

GJ: She wasn't swearing in the beginning there, was she?

ULQUI: Why would she? Apparently she likes us. She also wrote, "Interesting -! Please keep updating, liked how it goes -" "Yay! thanks 4 this cute chapter!! I enjoy very much reading this fic of yours n-n, I would like to leave you a more interesting review but Im a bit lazy to write in English n-ñ.
Please keep updating, hugs ad kisses!." and... "Thanks for the update!! Enjoyed too much reading it n-n I forgot about my life completely while reading it XD and now I have to study :D ...nu dont want XD!. Liked to much w!"

GJ: We made her forget about her life... that's awesome.

ULQUI: Please put studying before fanfic, readers.

GJ: Twilight-Oblivion writes:

"your fanfic makes me sque of happiness XD. I really love this pairing, and I've been waiting for this chapter (I'm sorry I didn't leave a review before... but I've been following your fic since the beginning!)
I like your ulquiorra... It's kind of nice not to see him in the oh-so-depressive mood he's always in. I'll be waiting for the next chapterr! Congratulations, I love your story"

She called YOU depressed. Thats so true it's not even funny.

ULQUI: Lack of interest is not depressed.

GJ: Lack of Happiness gets you called depressed.

ULQUI: Akaruy writes:

"sounds interesting so far(clean&cute? xD)
am waiting for the next chapter"

GJ: Chapters updates have moved if you haven't read the writers ramblings at the end by the way

ULQUI: Next chapter should come quick, but they'll be updating on sundays now.

GJ: KaLiEdO writes:

I love your story about Ulqiourra and Grimmjaw... the are almost like total opposites but you showed how good they're combination are... Update soon :)

ULQUI: Thank you.

GJ: This feels like bad phone sex.

ULQUI: Ehwinn writes:

"Hu hu, I liked it, good job here!
They seem a little OOC in many ways, but in the same time, you make things look really coherent (good idea for the former life of Ulquiorra... It makes me remember how his blacke tears intrigue me (he's one of my favorite characters, with grimmjow and Ichigo héhéhéhé)

Well, since you're in the wood, I hope you will enjoy yourself!!
And keep it up, I'm impatient to read the next chapter!"

GJ: Ichigo is a bad lay.

ULQUI: Who is bleach is a good lay?

GJ: You want me to start naming names?

ULQUI: I better be in there somewhere.

OH no...

GJ: huh.

ULQUI:

This guy has left like 6 reviews.

GJ: So?

ULQUI: They are all really long, and this fic only has like 25 or 24 reviews to begin with.

GJ: Do you have to read them all?

ULQUI: I'll just read the last one.

Bean Langdon writes:

"You know, it's pretty sad that you've only got 22 reviews in 9 chapters of such an incredibly well-plotted, organized and written fic. I mean, you've got the characterizations perfect, it's not smutty or shallow at all. A lot better than most all of the Grimm/Ulqui fics out there; dare I say Bleach fics in general?

I like your style, too.

The only fic I think would be even closely ranked up near yours is Receiving and Bearing (on LJ). And that author doesn't even update.

You don't that often, but...when you do, it's really good.

I'm not buttering you up or flattering you unneccessarily or anything. I don't do that. I never write reviews of this nature, and never this long either. Your story is just that brill.

Kudos a billion!"

GJ: That was one review?

ULQUI: It was posted as one

GJ: Clapping

ULQUI: Thanks for all the reviews Bean Langdon. Smutty and Shallow gets more credit in the long run.

GJ: I don't care what the fangirls think, that shit is gross.

ULQUI: Don't piss anyone off. Besides, we still DO it.

GJ: we are more child friendly, less sticky aftermath.

ULQUI: since when have you been child friendly?

GJ: Shut up

Sabaku No Izumi writes:

Aw, I wanted Grimmjow to be there when Ulquiorra wakes up. Anywho, great thus far, keep it up! Umm, by the way... who was on top? Eh? EH?

GJ: Me. Duh.

ULQUI: blushes

GJ: Sorry, I don't get mushy fangirls. That romantics shit doesn't fly with me.

ULQUI: Yet you leave me a note...

GJ: I don't care what number you are, I'm going to kill you if you don't shut up.

ULQUI: I Love you too.

Aldalena writes: Stares
...I still have no idea why I'm reading this...I'm more of an UlquiHime person and...coughUlquiIshicough . ...maybe I'm starting to like this pairing, I dunno...you make Grimmjow rather...likable...
Did I just say that? oO;
Anyway, great chapter!

GJ: Why the hell does everybody like you?

ULQUI: shrugs

Maybe you have to give some love to recieve it.

GJ: And you... give what love?

ULQUI: I think Tite Kubo is infering some kind of weird romance between me in Orihime.

GJ: That smack to the face made me so wet. Yeah. Of course.

ULQUI: The same reviewer wrote this:

"Oh my gosh, this chapter is great! I was reading this during Tech class, and when I got to the 'I love you' part, I screamed "YES!" and everyone stared at me. Meh, it was worth it. Yes, school does kill fanfic. Thank you for the awesome chapter!"

GJ: Well, I guess that I did make someone happy... smirks

ULQUI: Careful what you look at at school though, teachers can check what me and Grimmjow do to each other if your not using your own computer.

GJ: Here's mister informative... Look at all the porn you want, I don't care.

ULQUI: And thats why your not allowed to use Hueco Mundo's wireless anymore.

GJ: flicks off Ulquiorra

UlQUI: Daughter.Shadow writes:

"Aww... so sweet. I agree that school kills fanfics, cuz I'm a little behind on mine, but I don't mind if your a bit late. Good story!"

GJ: This fic has no flames, like at all.

ULQUI: Thank you daughter.shadow

GJ: I wanna read the last one.

NegoArgentaeDragotea writes: This is brilliant. And no plot holes either. Kudos to you.

ULQUI: We try.

GJ: to think this actually gets thinked about in the process.

ULQUI: You mean thought about

GJ: Go fuck a dictionary.

ULQUI: Thank you reviewers, from Ulquiorra. Your reviewer mail honestly does make this go about 10 times faster. Good reviews get the ending written. I appreciate the compliments

GJ: What he's saying is, kiss enough ass so we can end this.

ULQUI: That's not what I'm saying.

GJ: Whatever, thanks ladies, and gay dudes for reading this.

ULQUI: And please don't feel terrible if we didn't read your review either. You have been heard.

GJ: END IT ALREADY

ULQUI: Ok. heres your preview of Chapter 9 of FALL FROM GRACE.

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FALL FROM GRACE A GrimUlqui fic. May contain yaoi and "indecent" launguage

Chapter 9: RESOLVE

A/N THIS IS NOT THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTER, JUST AN EXCERPT

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"You kept her with you?" Grimmjow stared.

Ulquiorra nodded.

"She meant too much to me, even as a hollow I didn't want to kill her, I still remembered everything. I was selfish."

"But how?" Grimmjow asked. He had never heard of this phenomenon.

"You might have heard of it from human legend." Ulquiorra said quietly, Grimmjow could tell he was beginning to feel embarrassed about choosing his words this way. "When people say places or items are haunted. Sometimes human souls have been put inside them, by accident or outside influence."

Ulquiorra opened his pale hand revealing the bright gold pin.

"This is her now."

Grimmjow took it in his hand carefully, making sure he didn't press to hard, making sure it wouldn't feel confined. This was a girl?

"But after all this, I still don't remember her name." Ulquiorra whispered. He looked on the verge of tears, frustrated with his poor memory. "She only said it once, its so stupid. I don't know why I can't remember. It should be obvious, right?"

Grimmjow couldn't answer. He merely passed the pin back, too afraid he would break it, or bend it and cause the girl pain.

"You put her in the pin, right?" Grimmjow said, getting off the rock so he could comfort Ulquiorra before emotional hell broke loose. He slid a hand around his shoulder, allowing Ulquiorra's head to rest on his own shoulder. "Do you know if there's anyway to get her out?"

Ulquiorra looked up, those green eyes burning into him again, very beautiful but sad.

"I do."

"Then lets set her free."

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Thanks a millionth time for the nice reviews, I hope you'll follow this fic till the end. It's been great fun, but its ending... sadness.

There should be a spankin' new chapter on sunday, which will be the last chapter, but then there will be a pretty epilogue laters that should rap it up nicely.

As always

KISHIRE!