Hey Guys! Welcome to chapter 10, the chapter where the story will be taking off in a totally different direction!
Before we start I want to reply to a comment I got from someone called Jee zed.
The reason the beginning isn't really that dark and evil is because
1. I had to set up the story in the scene of a cheerful, happy story so that when the dark evil does come in it will be all the more evil.
2. well… really number 1 covered it all :)
Don't worry, you should get some dark, evilness in this chapter and then later on around chapters 16 - 18 you will get something even darker! Hope that brightens your perspective on this story! Thanks for the review!
The carriage slowly made its way down the roads of Onderron. The restaurant Lux had reserved for them was quite a longer ways away when you weren't in a ship of some sort.
The sun was just setting causing the skies to light up in multiple bright colors such as red, orange, yellow, blue and purple. It was beautiful! Ahsoka took in the sight thinking back to the sunset on Coruscant. Although the sunset at the jedi temple was still beautiful, nothing compared to the sunset she was watching here and now.
"Lux, this is beautiful!" Ahsoka said as she took his hand in her own and rested her head on his shoulder.
Lux was a little shocked to get such actions from her. He smiled to himself happy with where this "date" was going. His smile grew even bigger when the buggy turned a corner revealing the breath-taking nature of Onderron.
Ahsoka gasped when she saw the big waterfalls and jungles out in the distance. This was the same place she had seen in her dream! After replaying the dream through her head, she couldn't help but grow excited to know she would soon find out how the dream had ended.
The carriage pulled around to the front of the restaurant and stopped. Lux hopped out of the buggy and walked around to Ahsoka's side of the carriage. Opening the door like the true gentleman he was, he bowed as he took her hand to help her out of the carriage.
"Thank you kind sir!" Ahsoka said happily once her feet were on the ground.
Lux locked arms with her and led the way up to the entrance of the restaurant.
An elderly man stood behind a booth to the left of the doors entering the eating area. The man wore a black suit, with black shoes, pants and a tie. His hair was thinning but he still had enough to tell you he was white headed.
"Name please." The man asked before letting them in.
"Lux Bonteri." He responded with a smile.
"Ah, yes! You will be sitting at table number 12" The man said as he opened the door for the two young teens.
Ahsoka was in awe now. This place was gorgeous! The floor was tiled, the walls were painted a gold color, to the left of the room was a door that she expected led to the kitchen, and to the right were to doors which led to the restrooms. She was knocked out of thought when a lady spoke up.
"What table number were you given?" The lady asked looking up to Lux.
"Table 12." Lux responded.
"Alrighty, right this way!" The lady said as she picked two menu's off a table and led them through the tables to the balcony. Ahsoka grew more and more excited as her dream unfolded before her.
Their table was in the same spot she had been at in her sleep. The view was exactly the same with the sun just about to disappear from the sky.
"Here you go!" The lady started as she set the menu's on the table,"What can I get you to drink?"
"I'll have water." Lux said as he pulled out a chair for Ahsoka.
Ahsoka gladly excepted as she responded,"I'll have a water as well."
"Ok, I will be back in a couple of minutes with your drinks, if you need anything just holler!" The lady said with a smile as she walked off.
The waitress left, leaving Ahsoka and Lux alone at a table to themselves. Lux looked over at Ahsoka who was looking at the scenery. The now glowing moon was reflecting off her beautiful face. She was the most beautiful creature Lux had ever seen!
"It's beautiful isn't it." Lux said from across the table.
The sound of Lux's voice disturbing her hypnotism startled her.
"Beautiful is as close as words can describe!" Ahsoka said as she turned away from Lux to see the view once again.
"No, there is one word that can describe it…" Lux said smiling to himself.
Ahsoka raised an eye marking as she turned to face him,"And what is that?"
"Well, it's not really a word as much as it is a name… You, Ahsoka… you describe the beauty of this place to the max! Truth is… words can't describe your true beauty…" Lux said smiling as they both leaned in closer over the table.
"This is it! I'll finally get to know how my dream ends!" Ahsoka thought to herself.
Ahsoka's lekku were as dark as they could possibly be now. She was so focused on her blushing that she hadn't realized she was leaning in closer to him! But when reality hit her, she knew she was too far in to back down now.
She closed her eyes and puckered up her lips waiting for them to meet his, but before her dream could come true, something hit her. She moaned loudly and grasped her side. She felt weak, tired, nauseous, her head pounded heavily and her heart ached badly.
"Ahsoka? Are you ok?" Lux asked as he placed his hands on her shoulders looking her dead in the eyes.
Ahsoka tried to speak, but her body wouldn't allow her. She gasped for air as her lungs began to swell, and with one last breath, she blacked out and fell to the floor unconscious.
"Ahsoka!" Lux said as he arose from his seat in an instant.
He took her in his arms as he knelt down on one knee,"Someone! Please! Someone please help me! Somethings wrong with her!"
A man who had been sitting with his wife at a table across the room had watched the whole thing happen and quickly ran to help the poor boy.
"Hello! My name is Wesaanii, I am a doctor, I will help you!" Wesaanii said as he too knelt down by the unconscious Togruta.
Wesaanii quickly went to work. First he inspected her body for any visible physical injuries. All he could find were a few scares from some of her past battles until something caught his eye. On the right side of her body was a gash half way covered by her jedi garments. It was obvious by the dried, red blood covering it that it hadn't been long when she had gained this "Cut".
"She has some sort of puncture wound on her side here. It looks to be infected but even an infection couldn't cause something like this to happen to her!" Wesaanii said as he continued inspecting her body.
He placed his index finger and middle finger at the top of her neck to check her pulse. She was still alive but her heart was beating in very jumpy ways. It would speed up and then slow down and then stop, then repeat.
"We need to get this girl to the medical station ASAP!" Wesaanii said as he took her in his arms,"Follow me, we will take my ride!"
Lux had began sweating under the tension but he did as he was told. He quickly stepped infront of Wesaanii to open the door for him as they exited the building. As bad as things already were, the worst was yet to come…
Oh dear! What could be wrong with Ahsoka? I told you guys things would pick up! I had planned on adding a little section with Ada and the "Master Chef" Who I have lacked to name still but I wanted to mainly focus on the point of the story.
Sorry to tell you, but things will only get worse from here. I have had this idea stored up inside myself since about chapter 2 or 3 so it's good to finally have it out in the open!
