Cometpaw remains to be the only sane cat it seems. Either he or Lunarpaw will be reader favorites. So far I prefer Lunarpaw, Spades prefers Cometpaw. Which do you prefer?


Sorry M.C., but I'm going to have to agree with Spades on this one. :P


Upon returning to the camp, Lunarpaw made her way to Fallingstar. She needed to tell him about Cometpaw!

At the fresh kill pile, she saw Cometpaw sitting next to Blueflame, glaring at her while his mentor slash mate gave her a dull, dead, unnerving stare. But Lunarpaw made no notice of it as she charged into the leaders den. (Has she no respect? I would've slashed her face off if she charged into my den!)

Fallingstar looked up from where he was eating and nodded, "Hello, Lunarpaw, what is it?" he asked.

"Cometpaw and Blueflame are mates! It's wrong because there an apprentice and warrior! You need to tell them to stop!" Cometpaw yelled, her claws unsheathed as she was filled with anger at her brothers betrayal. (But he didn't betray you. He was never your friend, and his loyalty wasn't in jeopardy. I'm starting to really hate this Clan.)

The leader leapt up at this in alarm, "Ono!" he cried out, "You're right, it's wrong! I have to talk to them about this now!" (Have you nothing better to do than to mess around in your warriors' love lives?)

With that he got onto the rock outside of his den and cried out for a clan meeting, Lunarpaw right beside him. The cats were confused but gathered anyway.

"We have something very wrong going on here!" he yelled and glared at cometpaw and blueflame, "You two became mates! You can't be mates, it's wrong!" he yelled.

Cometpaw hissed at got into a stance, "How is it wrong?" He demanded.

"You're an apprentice! She's a warrior! You can't be together!" Fallingstar shrieked, "As leader, I declare that both of you quit being mates this instant or EXILE!" (That's really harsh for an apprentice.)

There were shocked murmurs from the clan.

Cometpaw was shaking with anger, but before he could yell or hiss anything, Blueflame placed her tail on his shoulder, a silent look telling him to calm the F down. Taking a deep breath, the red apprentice sheathed his claws.

"Now, what are you going to do?" he asked

Cometpaw gave them a glare, "I will not agree to a stupid rule that makes no sense! I'm happy with Blueflame and I'm not going to let an idiot of a leader like you, and a pathetic excuse of a cat like you, Lunarpaw, dictate what I do!" he shouted. (Preach it!)

"Then you are EXILED, Cometpaw!" Fallingstar declared and the warriors chased the red apprentice out of the camp. (For some reason, the 'Exile' from the Lion King 2 is playing in my head and won't stop... Could you imagine if Cometpaw's exit was as dramatic as Kovu's?)

Lunarpaw had a sad expression on her face, oh why couldn't her brother have just agreed to end his mateship with Blueflame? Then she wouldn't have had to get him exiled! Oh why had her brother been so stupid? (A true sibling would've stayed loyal to their brother or sister, not get them banished from the only home they know.)

But he was also so mean too! He insulted her and Fallingstar! So maybe it was for the best to have such a meanie kicked out of the clan.

"Lunarpaw, that was pretty brave of you," Wolfpaw said as he walked up, "You had to kick your brother out of the clan! I don't think I would have been able to do that." Wolfpaw was Echopaw and Gingerpaws brother.

"Thanks," Lunarpaw said as she sat on the Highrock, "If he hadn't been such a mousebrain, he would have still been a Nightclan cat." (A dishonor that would've been.)

Wolfpaw nodded sagely, "Yeah I know what you mean. Besides, becoming mates with a warrior? That's just wrong on so many levels!" (Tell that to Dustpelt and Fernpaw and see how long you live. I'd give you 15 seconds at the most.)

"I know!"

"Good thing your not so stupid to do that," He sighed and smiled, "Lunarpaw, would you like to become mates with me?"

Lunarpaws eyes widened, he had just asked her to be mates! Oh, Starclan! Wolfpaw was like the most handsome cat in Nightclan! He had cats all over asking to be mates with him and he was asking her? How could she say no?

This was the best day of her life!

"Yes!" she squealed and let out a pleased purr when he sealed the deal with a kiss.

Oh Starclan, she had the most handsome cat ever for a mate! (Naughty, naughty, Lunarpaw. Having, not one, but two mates?! *snickers* Oh Starclan, this is going to be awkward.) (But, then again, Crowfeather kind of messed around with having two mates as well. [three if you count Feathertail])