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Chapter 10: Thanksgiving
"Haa!" Raditz yelled as he tried to punch Goku one more time, but failed as Goku dodged the punch.
Raditz fell onto his knees, panting while Goku sat cross legged on the floor.
"Y'know Raditz, training is really fun, but all you're doing is wasting energy by trying to punch me...Why are you training anyway?" Goku asked.
Raditz yelled, "Why should I tell you?!"
"Well...you woke me up early for this, you started to become more angrier these past few days, and you said that training was for chumps not too long ago," Goku answered.
"Argh...Fine! I fell in love with this girl...but she's unwillingly betrothed to Android 13," Raditz explained.
Goku's eyes widened at the name of 13, remembering all those times he tried to hit on Chi-Chi in elementary.
"So, you want to fight 13, so this girl can be yours?" Goku asked.
"Yes," Raditz answered.
"I know a place where we can train...but-"
"KAKAROT! RADITZ! TIME TO GO!" Bardock screamed.
Goku and Raditz rushed towards their dad and took off.
"Welcome to the first annual turkey hunt!" The tournament announcer yelled, "All the families from around the world come here to find the biggest turkey, with over 9000 scattered all around the store!"
The crowd cheered from the background as they all met in the biggest grocery store in the world.
The Briefs family (Bulma, Tights, Mrs. and Dr. Briefs, Scratch the Cat), the Son family (Goku, Raditz, Bardock), the Gero family (Dr. Gero, Cell, Android 18, Android 17, Android 13), the Vegeta family (King Vegeta, Vegeta, Tarble, Celeria), the Cold family (King Cold, Frieza, Cooler) and a few others were there.
"We're definitely gonna get the turkey!" King Vegeta announced.
"Yea right! I'm gonna!" Bardock yelled.
"Tell him!" Gine agreed.
"No, I'm gonna get the biggest turkey!" Gero yelled.
While the adults were arguing, the kids was just standing around.
Goku walked up to Vegeta and said, "This will be a fun game,"
Vegeta scoffed, "Yea right! My family's gonna win and that's that,"
"Don't get cocky now," Bulma warned, "I got science!"
Vegeta said, "Just cause you're my significant other doesn't mean that I'll hold back on you!"
"Are you marks? Get set! Go!" The announcer yelled as everyone ran into the store.
Everyone busted in, and started tearing everything up.
"Vegeta! Search east! Tarble! Search west! Celeria, search north and I'll search south!" King Vegeta yelled.
They all nodded as they separated.
"Kakarot, use your senses! Raditz, follow the Androids, they're probably up to something..." Bardock said.
"Okay," They said.
Meanwhile, outside the store-
Yamcha cackled evilly as he finished his trick, "Ok Puar, I'm gonna pole vault my way in the store, and snatch the biggest turkey!"
Puar stammered, "Uhh...I don't think-"
"Shhh! It'll work!" Yamcha assured.
He jumped up with the pole vault and was about to bust in the roof, until the pole flipped back, sending Yamcha the opposite direction.
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" Yamcha screamed.
Meanwhile, the Saibaman was in house, washing himself in the tub.
Just then Yamcha busted through the Saibaman's roof, landing in the tub.
The Saibaman growled as Yamcha slyly waved his hand, "Oops...hehe..."
Piccolo: It's now time for Reviews with DragonBall787 and Vegeta!
VegetaFangurl chapter 9
Good chapter
I say No to Raditz and Sno
Me: Who said I was pairing them? Don't assume things right from the start...I got a little surprise..
evil buu chapter 9
evil buu:my name is evil buu and i am going to destroy earth. super buu: who are you again? evil buu: you know gray, skinny, basicly the oppisite of fat buu? kid buu: CHOCHLATE! super buu: still not ringing a bell evil buu: i basicly created you by eating fat buu majin buu: stop calling buu fat buu at least i was around for more than 1 episode and buu will turn you in to chochlate if you say that again evil buu: yeah we all know what happened that episode when you tried that fat buu.
Me: O_O Oh God, another Buu...
Saiyan17Princess chapter 9
Uhmmm, Dragonball787 do you have another fanfics except DBZ in Middle School? I want to know, So I can read another Great Chapters _
Me: Yup! I have 8 others! Go to my profile page and you'll see Dbz in Preschool, Dbz in Kindergarten, Dbz in Kindergarten 2, Dbz in Elementary School: First Grade, Dbz in Elementary School: Second Grade, and my two other middle school fics!
Saiyan17Princess chapter 9
Thank you for answering my questions:)
Anyway, another great chapter Miss Greatest Author in the Universe _
HahahahahhaXD I remember you answered my question (Gender? Your Answer: Girl, but I am a tomboy)
Tomboy is a Filipino word which means 'Lesbian' in English..
Can't wait to your another Great Chapter! _
Me: O_O Oh God, I'm NOT a lesbian...I don't hate them but...I'm...just...not...one. I usually refer myself to 'asexual' (Not liking females nor males) and *blushes* Well, I'm not the BEST...
DragonBallFan239 chapter 9
Omg I love this fic and chapter but can Goku scare off/kill Android 13 so Raditz can have his love? :) Raditz x Sinon
Plz!
Me: You'll see...it depends...*vanishes mysteriously away*
Kid Buu chapter 9
Reading chapter 9 I realize I was harsh on you and the others... so I decided myself to help out Raditz and obliterate Android 13 and I know your gonna say "Nooo you and Majin Buu are the same!" Well thats not true... we battled in the Buu saga and I won! So I say we kill off 13 and have Raditz and Suno, now who's with me? DEATH TO 13 AND ANDROIDS!
Me: I'll see...and what's with all the Majins?!
Guest chapter 9
I will try to be a regular reveiwer. hopefully. maby. i dont know. Btw great chapter!
Me: Thanks!
Brii-Chan14 chapter 1 .
Alright first I'm gonna introduce myself. I'm Bri and I've been writing on here for 2 years now. I started off with a hs story that wasn't well written, but after I while I got better with the help of constructive criticism. Now Ive seen that you gotten quite a few reviews praising your story but I have to say it needs a lot of work. Now a heads up I'm pretty straight forward but I don't mean to be rude
Sorry I had pressed send on accident. Anyways
1) introductions, yours was quite dull. I saw no lead/hook. And if you don't know what those are it's one or two sentences that catches the readers attention to make them want to read more.
2) one liners, no one likes one liners. You have no paragraphs which makes the story seem so.. elementary level.
3) Said, said, said, said, said. I saw it like 50 million times. I use to use it a lot as well, that's why I started looking up synonyms for said. Using said so many times makes your story look like a 5th grader wrote it
4) sensory images, you described nothing in this story. You could have described what they looked like or the setting. Doing this makes your story longer and better
5) author notes, adding those make you look immature, I use to do it a lot but then I realized how stupid I looked.
6) responding to reviews in the middle of the story wasn't a good idea. I was really confused. If you do respond to your reviews, try in the beginning or end. And that's it for now, I shall continue to read, hopefully I see changes as I get deeper into the story
Me: First of all, I love your fics, I love you (no homo, im a girl), and I love that you and your friends came to me out of a million authors to give me good tips. But, I'm happy with what I'm doing now and the progress I'm making. You should've seen me when I first started, making giant blocks with no spaces. But, I learned from that and started making more space so people can't lose their place. I bet you know I'm 14 and about to go to high school and all that, and my stories are mainly based on that. I'm mainly just doing these fics for fun, and don't really have a purpose except making people laugh and just being myself, you know. I know I'm going to get better by high school and maybe you'll see the change too, but I like to keep things my own pace and gradually mature to know all my mistakes and possibly fix them one day. And you probably know I'm pretty feisty when it comes to flamers, but they don't provide good reason and facts like you do. I know my fics are different from others, but that's what makes them so enjoyable to others and I. I don't mean to be a show off my placing my reviews in the middle of my story, but sometimes I have important info that people may want to know and don't read my reviews like that.. and I thought it'll be unique compared to the same old same old beginning and end. I know I have issues with the romance, but I plan on fixing them gradually as I get older. But I hope that you respect my choice and opinions, but I'm not ready to change my fic drastically yet...maybe when I get into high school. This is my style of fanfiction and I hope you understand and respect it. But I do want to thank you for pointing out my mistakes, I really appreciate that, and hope that you review my fics again sometime.
Zyphrost chapter 9
Raditz has a rivalry? Ooooooh... This is getting interesting... Great chapter. I'll be on the lookout for the next...
Me: Thanks! You'll love the next few chapters...I hope.
GreenSaiyan chapter 9
I remember Suno, but I did not expect Raditz to fall in love with her.
Me: Hee hee! I'm full of surprises! But do you think Raditz and Suno will get together?
GETA4EVA chapter 9
OMG!
I swear these chapters get better and better!
Now you have 96 reveiws! And it's not even 10 chapters yet!
PS:I read your fics every single day when I get the chance. Also everyone I know who has watched DB, DBZ, DBZK and the other one I refuse to speak of want to kill yamchuck (his name doesn't deserve a captial letter).
Me: Lol I hope I get to at least 300...
Frenchie1999 chapter 9
LMAO the ending poor Raditz, Goku's appetite ruins his chance.
In your reviews you said your gonna retire before you go off to college just wondering which one and major in what?
Me: I wanna get a PhD and be called Dr.! But I'm not working at a hospital! They have diseases in there...I'll just get a good paying job. And I'm thinking the University of Illinois or a college in Florida somewhere...
Guest chapter 9
This. Is. AWESOME :D
Me: Thanks!
Kid Buu chapter 9
-Breaks out of hell- Im back b*tches! -Vegeta sees me and attacks me but I dodge and one hit him with a punch and he dies-
Arrogant bastard... -Takes raging blast 2 for PS3 out of his pocket and beats it- Now... Im coming for the earth! Oh Mrs Author... you better have a special chapter dedicated to me as Buu's puberty... or else... -Holds Vegetas head and holds Goku's in the other hand- Oh and Lord Beerus do know I serve you... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA -Charges planet buster which might take a few chapters-
Me: WTF?!
SuperSaiyanKnight chapter 9
Hahaha, thanks for doing that but the main thing is you believe it fits in and has comic value which it does! Glad you love the idea!
Me: Yup, ima use it every chance I get (Well, not too much...it'll get repetitive..)
roxyfire57 chapter 9
I agree with Cooler. quote: We will always be freaks... HAHA! I also like 18's plan. What exactly did they do to Mr washing machine-I mean Mr Dryer? Will that be in the next chapter?
Oh, In my fics 'Inevitable' and 'One kiss' , Radditz got tgt with Maron...
Me: Wow...a bunch of 17xMaron fans are reading this fic, so I had no choice XD And Mr. Dryer...ugh. You'll see next chapter...MWAHAHAHHAHAHA!
Juunagou chapter 9
I bet 17 was important to winning the game.
Not crazy about Suno and Raditz personally
Me: Hmm...who said they're getting together?
sillye chapter 9
Are you going to make a dgz college story
Me: Maybe, idk. Depends... Right now my goal is finishing 3rd, 4th, 5th, and 8th grade! I'll think about College when I start Dbz in High School...
PippElulu chapter 9
YOU'RE WATCHING ONE PIECE? OMFG I ADORE ONE PIECE! I'M UP TO EPISODE 350! ...You...don't...like...Luffy? *walks off* Well I'm done...
Nah jokes *Comes back* I just adore Luffy. I REALLY liked the chapter :) The Suno/Raditz thing is gonna get REAL big XD Oh, and when you're doing more of the elementary series, is there gonna be more 13 going after Chi-Chi? Because for some reason...it seems...weird...that...a second grade time could be immediately remembered from eighth grade... Meh...
I can't choose between Huey and Riley... So hard...*sits down to think*
WELL I ADORED THE CHAPPIE! CAN'T WAIT FOR MOOOOOORE!
Me: Eh, I remember my grade school times...I hated grade school. And I dont hate Luffy...he just irritates me. Sometimes I forget that they're humans and not Saiyans. Somehow I keep screaming: DO THE KAMEHAMEHA! DO THE KAMEHAMEHA!
queenvicky99 chapter 9
Ok Go 2000 not you haven't guessed I was born in 2000! Also I knew I wasn't crazy for wanting to be born in Japan *cry a little* It's not fair . Anyway I was jk bit I am very mad at the whole c/g thing.I do love the pair but I am head over heel in love with Goku . Is that weird? Don't answer that. I that you used a of the Majin saga in this chapter! Vegeta doing the pancake dance is always amusing .Also Raditz you still can love and get that mad old 13 and win ya gal! I love one piece , I think Luffy is fun and bring out the show and YOU GET WHAT I MEAN! Well I shall be waiting Chow !
Me: I like One Piece, but after watching DBZ...it's very hard to watch the fighting scenes...I expect them to fly and shoot energy beams XD
SaiyansRulez chapter 9
I want Raditz and Launch, not Suno
Tien can be with the mime.
Me: Lol, just wait! Who said I was pairing them up?
Guest chapter 9
I say no to Suno and Raditz, please don't make them a couple
Me: Who knows? I'm probably not pairing them up at all...
Guest chapter 8
I thought you said no more super sayians... Wait a minute Tarble didn't control his state, so technically he isn't a super sayian, right?
What's the big plot gonna be about?
Me: Just wait! It's super awesome! And it can't be revealed till chapter 31!
Piccolo: And that was Reviews with DragonBall787 and Vegeta
Back at the grocery store, Dr. Briefs strolled to the meat aisle and picked up a normal sized turkey.
"DAD!" screamed Tights and Bulma.
"Yes?" Dr. Briefs asked.
"We're supposed to be getting the biggest turkey, not the smallest!" Tights yelled.
"How about you two go look for one?" Mrs. Briefs suggested.
"Fine!" Bulma yelled while going another way while Tights went the opposite way.
"HAA!" Cell yelled as he snuck up on Dr. and Mrs. Briefs while reading the nutrition facts.
"HISS!" Scratch hissed.
"C-Calm down, kitty.." Cell warned.
Scratch hissed and leapt on Cell's face, scratching him as Cell ran around in circles, screaming.
"AAAAHHHH! GET IT OFF ME! GET IT OFF ME!" Cell screamed as he banged his head on a bunch of items.
Cell finally knocked himself out, as Scratch leapt off his face.
"Ugh..." Cell groaned as he lost consciousness.
Dr. Briefs finally turned around, and saw Scratch, perfectly still, meowing.
"Hey Scratch! You're such a well behaved kitty!" Dr. Briefs said as he scratched Scratch's back.
"Meow," Scratch purred as he cuddled Dr. Briefs.
With King Vegeta-
He ran into the kitchen area as he saw some huge turkeys.
"This will make me win for sure!" King Vegeta yelled.
Just when King Vegeta was about to pick up the huge turkey, there was a "Not so fast!"
King Vegeta turned around to see Bardock and Dr. Gero.
"W-Why are you guys here?!" King Vegeta asked.
"Duh, we want that turkey!" Bardock yelled.
"What do you mean 'we'?!" Gero yelled.
Gero and Bardock stepped closer to King Vegeta.
"Y-You don't wanna do this...What about our history?" King Vegeta asked.
Dr. Gero put his hand on his shoulder, "We have no history!"
King Vegeta screamed as all his energy was sucked out from him.
He passed out right when SSJ Bardock kicked Dr. Gero out of King Vegeta's range.
Dr. Gero growled as he said, "Wrong move, Bardock!"
Dr. Gero charged at him, but Bardock gripped his hands tight, and ripped it right off him.
"MY HANDS!" Dr. Gero screamed.
Bardock then ripped Gero's head off, and placed it in the freezer.
"Make sure you *puts on glasses* keep your head cool," Bardock said as he walked off with a faint YEEEEAAAHHH and a explosion from the background.
Meanwhile-
Yamcha made a catapult with his only non broken arm and leg, as he could only half see since he has an eyepatch.
"O-Okay Puar, Ima catapult to the turkey aisle, and snatch the turkey," Yamcha said.
"Umm...Yamcha-"
"HEE HEE HEE!" Yamcha hysterically laughed as he got on the catapult and launched it.
Yamcha flew all the way to a park where a Saibaman that was proposing to a woman was suddenly knocked over by Yamcha.
The woman gasped and slapped the Saibaman and ran away crying.
The Saibaman hissed at Yamcha who whimpered painfully.
Back to the Contest-
Vegeta was running through the aisles until he noticed Bulma at the toy aisle, holding something behind her back.
"Bulma! Give up the turkey!" Vegeta demanded.
"No!" Bulma said, clutching her back harder.
"..."
Vegeta sighed, "Fine, then I'll do this the hard way!"
Hr walked up to Bulma and immediately started tickling her ribs.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STOP IT!" Bulma laughed as she dropped the turkey.
Vegeta gasped, It was WAY bigger than any turkey he's ever seen.
Vegeta grabbed the turkey, pushed Bulma to the ground, and was about to high tail it outta there.
"Oww...you didn't have to push me," Bulma whined.
Vegeta cursed his guilty conscience, helped Bulma up, dusted her off, and started running off with the turkey.
"Not so fast!" Bulma yelled as she shot Vegeta with her paralyze ray.
"Argh!" Vegeta yelled as he fell to the floor, unable to move.
Bulma snatched the turkey back, blew Vegeta a kiss, and started walking away.
"I'll get you Bulma! You hear me?!" Vegeta yelled as he saw Bulma disappear from his view.
Meanwhile-
Yamcha chose one more method before he gave up.
"I'm gonna shake these giant soda bottles, and bust in the store!" Yamcha said.
Puar reasoned, "Yamcha, there's a front door-"
"SSSSSHHHHH!" Yamcha hushed as he shook up the soda bottles and blasted off.
"*sigh* He never learns," Puar sighed.
Meanwhile, the Saibaman was eating dinner, depressed over his breakup, until Yamcha came crashing down on the dinner table, ruining all his food.
"Grrr..." The Saibaman growled as he turned red.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!" Yamcha screamed as he experienced horrible pain from the angry Saibaman.
With Goku-
Goku walked around, sniffing for the biggest turkey.
Just then, he met up with Bulma, who was running, but screeched to a stop.
"Hey Bulma!" Goku greeted.
"H-Hey Goku," Bulma said nervously.
"What's that behind your back?" Goku asked.
"I...Umm...Look! It's bacon!" Bulma yelled.
"Where?! Where?!" Goku yelled as he looked around and ran the other way.
Bulma snickered as she started running towards the exit.
"Hey! She got the turkey!" Frieza yelled.
Bulma shooted Frieza, King Cold, and Cooler as they fell to the ground paralyzed.
"MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Bulma laughed evilly as she neared the exit.
Meanwhile with Gero and King Vegeta-
17, 18, and 13 was strolling down until they saw a headless Gero.
'*sigh* Not this again," 18 muttered.
17 grabbed Gero's head and bashed it on his body.
13 fixed the screws and wires and waited for Gero to reprogram.
"*cough* Bardock took the turkey!" Gero yelled.
"...So?" 18 asked.
"Go get him!" Gero yelled.
"No, this is stupid," 17 said.
"Do it or I'll hit you!" Gero yelled.
"You have no hands," 13 stated.
"ARGH! Curse you!" Gero yelled as he saw his hands ripped off.
"Father!" Tarble and Celeria yelled as they saw King Vegeta knocked out.
They tried to shake him awake, but all they did was make him cough.
"Let's carry him outta here," Tarble said.
Celeria nodded and and they carried King Vegeta to the exit.
Back at the front door-
Bulma sensed something, and turned around with her gun pointed towards her target.
"WOAH! Be careful with that thing!" Tights yelled.
Bulma slightly calmed down and said, "Let's get outta here,"
"DON'T LEAVE THAT F***ING DOOR!" A voice yelled.
Tights and Bulma turned to see an angry Vegeta stalking towards them.
"AAAAAAAHHHHH!" Bulma and Tights yelled as they tried to run out the door.
Unfortunately, Vegeta tackled Bulma through the door, right in front of the announcer, both holding the turkey.
"..."
"Who won?!" Bulma and Vegeta yelled.
Later-
Everyone met up as they all excitedly waited for the announcement.
"I bet I won!" Vegeta bragged.
"No, I did! All you did was help me get out of the door!" Bulma yelled.
"After paralyzing us!" Frieza yelled.
"Well, I came before all of you!" Bardock stated.
"Cause you ripped off my arms and head and knocked King Vegeta out!" Gero yelled.
"I was completely lost," Raditz stated.
"I didn't find any bacon!" Goku cried.
"Just tell us who won!" Tights yelled.
"The winner is...King Piccolo and Piccolo Jr!" The announcer yelled.
Everyone gasped.
"WHAT?!"
"They weren't even in the competition!" Vegeta yelled.
Piccolo explained, "We found this giant turkey in the water aisle, so we just brought it up here,"
"I didn't even know about the contest," King Piccolo said.
Piccolo held the money prize, "At least we have enough money for a water purifier,"
"All that meat...wasted!" Goku whined.
"Argh! No good turkey for Thanksgiving!" Bardock cursed.
"Curses! This is all your fault Piccolo!" Vegeta yelled.
"Hey! Don't be so butthurt! I didn't want the turkey anyway!" Piccolo yelled.
"I thought that we were having thanksgiving together..." Mrs. Briefs stated.
"We were?!" Everyone asked.
"We do every year, don't we? And I was just about to cook a meal for all of us," Mrs. Briefs said.
"..."
"She's right. We do eat Thanksgiving together, what changed this year?" Bardock asked.
Everyone shrugged and muttered stuff.
"Well? Let's all go to my house and I can cook up a nice dinner!" Mrs. Briefs said.
At Capsule Corp.-
Everyone ate their well prepared dinners as they talked and laughed.
"Ha! What happened to your arms?" King Cold laughed as he pointed at Gero.
Gero growled as he said, "Bardock here ripped them off, now I can't pick stuff up!"
Gero had to eat like a dog due to his unfortunate problem.
"Hehe," Bardock snickered.
Gine sent him a warning look at his direction.
"I'll fix him up when we got home," a bandaged face Cell said.
"Meow," Scratch called as he touched Cell's leg from the ground.
"AAAAAAAHHHHH!" Cell screamed as he ran up his chair, standing and tried to get Scratch away from him.
"Wimp," Cooler snorted.
"I'm just glad I got to eat!" King Vegeta said, stuffing himself.
"You were knocked out for two hours!" Tarble exclaimed.
"And you were heavy!" Celeria whined.
"Eh, nothing's better than a little exercise," King Vegeta said.
Piccolo used his purifier for the first time.
"...THIS TASTES THE SAME!" Piccolo yelled.
"What an outrage!" King Piccolo yelled as he tried his water.
"*snicker* That's called a rip-off," Raditz snickered.
"Why haven't you invited me to the contest!" Nappa whined.
"The author didn't know what to do with you," Tights stated.
"I could say funny one liners or do TFS!" Nappa whined.
"Just shut up!" Frieza yelled.
"I wasn't in this chapter, but I'm not complaining," Krillin said.
"Me too!" Turles stated.
"This meal was awesome!" Goku said, rubbing his stomach.
"Mines was better!" Vegeta bragged.
"No, mines was," Goku stated.
"No, mines!" Vegeta warned.
"Mines,"
"Mines!"
"Mines!"
"Mi-"
"SHUT UP AND EAT!" Bulma and Chi-Chi yelled as they banged frying pans on their heads.
So, everyone had a good time, laughing and eating like every year they do, but that doesn't mean it will stay that way...
Next Time: Football Game (3-4)
Ok I know you're groaning cause another football game, but it's not really about the game itself. Plus also this is the last one then the championship! And for the RaditzxSuno haters don't assume they're getting together...It's not like they kissed or anything. Just wait and see... And YES! 100 REVIEWS! THANK YOU ALL! And in only TEN chapters! You guys are AWESOME! I hope we get to at least 300-400 at this rate!