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A few months later, Tohru awoke to Ichigo's crying. She got up immediately to hold him. She bounced him on her hip until he calmed down.
"Lets go for a walk, ok?" she smiled at her gurgling baby. She carefully walked down the stairs and got the stroller out. She placed him in it,
and grabbed a baby bottle and a rice ball to munch on. She was about to go out the door when Kyo came rushing down the stairs.
"Tohru, wait!" He caught up with her. "I'm going with you." Tohru was surprised, but she smiled.
"Thank you, Kyo-kun! That makes me so happy!"
With that, they began their walk down the street. They walked all the way down to an ice-cream shop.
"Do you want some?" Kyo asked Tohru, smiling at her gently.
"Oh, I would love some, Kyo, if it's not to much trouble!" He went to the counter to pick the flavors and pay. He bought a chocolate and a vanilla-strawberry. He was handing the money to
the cashier when Tohru shrieked. He turned around to see that there was a man by her, taking hold of her wrists.
"No, I won't go with you again!" she yelled. By this time, everyone in the shopwas staring. Kyo dropped the ice cream, and began to run towards her to free her. Suddenly, he got so close
that she transforrned. People all around the shop gasped. Some screamed.
"Monster!" The man looked surprised, but he ran with her in his arms, out of the shop. Kyo, freaked out, teared out of the store, chasing after the man. He was to fast. He
disappeared after about a few blocks. He suddenly remembered Ichigo at the shop. He rushed back, and asked to borrow the phone. The man was to busy being shocked at what he
had just seen, so he just used it anyway.
"Hello?" Hatori's voice sounded from the other line.
"Hatori, it's Kyo! Tohru's been kidnapped, and everyone here knows our secret!"