I don't know if I want to continue this. I really love the story, and I love the reviews (I got 3 last chapter! Woohoo!) but... I have writer's block, and with each chapter, I feel like the quality is going down... what should I do?
I don't own House of Anubis. (and by the way, chapter 10! YAY!)
Mick's POV
"I hate Jerome I hate Jerome I hate Jerome I hate Jerome I hate Jerome I hate Jerome I hate Jerome..." this was all could say. I can't believe he did that! And then made me scream like a girl. Fabian, Nina, and another girl, I guess Fabian's pregnant sister burst into the room. "What Happe- oh..." Fabian said, and then cut himself because he saw the room. The walls were paintes in pink with glitters, and our sheets were pink, and instead of all our junk stuff, there was make up! "guess who did it?" I said through my clunched teeth. Fabian and Nina sighed. Fabian's sister, although, just giggled.
"Oh, and that's not it!" I walked over to our dresser and opened it. Instead of our clothes, there were only dresses, and if it wasn't a dress, it was pink. I wonder how Jerome even managed to do that. He couldn't have done it by himself.. and I know Alfie was with Amber, before I came to the room I was with Mara, Amber and Alfie. Mara was tutoring us. It was actually a regular thing, every afternoon she was helping us with our homework. She's such a good person.
So if it wasn't Alfie... Jerome, Ella, Joy and Patricia burst into the room, laughing. All four of them did it? I'm going to kill them! "Jerome!" Fabian ran over to Jerome and started smacking him. "What-" *smack* "Have you-" *smack* "Done-" *smack* "with our-" *smack* "stuff?" I wouldn't want to be Jerome right now. Fabian seems kind of mad. Well, when I'm thiking about, he has a lot to deal with. First, Rufus, the man who wants to kill us. Second, his sister is pregnant. Do I need to explain more? Third, there's still school, and he has to keep on with at least B in everything... and fourth, he has a girlfriend and he needs to pay her attention. Although they are doing almost everything together. And now he has to deal with our very pink room.
Nina's POV
Fabian looked furious. I have to say, I was a little scared of him at the moment. But I knew it's only Fabian. "Fabian, calm down, please!" I grabbed his hand, making him turn towards me. "It's okay. I'll help you guys paint the room back and get your stuff." He grinned at me. "No you won't." He said, he didn't want my help? "THEY WILL" he pointed at Jerome, Patricia, Joy and Ella. "and if they won't, I'm going to tell Victor, and I promise you, his punishment is going to be much, much worse." He said in a quiet yet deadly tone. They nodded without saying a word, even Jerome. Victor is creepy.
~~four days later~~
Fabian and Mick's room was normal again and they got their stuff back. When we looked back at it, we all laughed, even Fabian and Mick. It was funny, wasn't it?
Now we were all sitting in the living room, bored. It was Friday afternoon and we all finished our homework already and we were just trying to find something to do. "That's it! I can't take it anymore!" Amber screamed. Wow. She's freaking out. And then I had a great idea. "I know what we can do!" everyone looked at me like I was an angel. "We can play truth or dare!" now everyone looked at me like I'm crazy. "But this game is for children" Jerome was the first one to speak. "no it's not. It's one of the best games ever!" I tried to covince them. "please?" I made a puppy face. "ugh, fine! But I'm going first!" Jerome and his terms.. but this was the only way so.. "Okay, who has an empty bottle?" Alfie had one, I don't know why but it's Alfie so I just ignored it. Jerome spun the bottle and it pointed on Mara. "Truth." She said before he could even ask her. "okay, truth for Mara... let's see... I know! Who was your first kiss and what age?" Mara blushed a little and then mumbled "It was with Alfie on a truth or dare game when we were twelve." Everyone tried to hide their giggled, except for Jerome, who smirked at her and for Alfie, that was blushing too. "Enough with the giggling! It's my turn!" Mara said as she gave a little push to the bottle. It stopped on me. "I choose dare!" I said immidately. Everyone looked more excited now. "Fine, I dare you to... to write a letter from Victor from a 'secret admirer'!" we all burst in laugh. Victor? Love? Ewww! But I wrote the letter. Is said:
Dear Victor,
You don't know me, maybe you could recognize my face if you saw me, but I know you. I know you and I wish I could get to know you better. I love every little detail about you. I love the way you're afraid of nothing. I love the way you dress, I love your strictness, your hair, your eyes, all of it!
If you would fancy to meet me, I'll meet you at the clearing at eleven, after all the kids are asleep. I really hope you will come.
Love you,
Your secrey admirer
Victor wasn't in his office so I slid the note under his door and went back downstairs where we all laughed too much. When we finally calmed down, I spun the bottle. Katie. She picked truth. I had good one for her. "What is the one thing you never, ever, told anyone?" she glanced at me, but with a grin on her face. "I'm actually glad you asked me that, because I didn't know how to tell Fabey. I remebered the name of the father... his name is Renee Zeldman."
Fabian's POV
No, no, no, no, no, no. This can't be happening. The man who tries to kill us, The crazy dude who chases immortality is the father of my sister's child? "RUFUS ZENO IS THE FATHER?" it's official, I'm freaking out. "Katie, he's a crazy murderer! He tried to kill us! This is just... I can't believe it..." Katie looked at me like I was an alien. "No, Fabey, his name is Renee." Oh great, now we need to tell her about the mystery. Luckily,Joy knew what to do. She ran to her room and brought a piece of paper with her. "Is it this guy?" Joy asked Katie. Katie turned white and nodded. "Where did you get a picture of that?" Jerome asked, shocked. "that?" Nina asked, raising her eyebrows. He sent her a look of 'I know what I said!'. That's Jerome. "Last year, when I was kidnapped, Victor gave me a picture of him and told me to beware of him, no matter what he says. I kept the picture in case it comes handy. As you can see, it came handy." We all were quiet, thiking. "I don't want to interrupt your thoughts but I would really like to know what's happening." Katie said, impatient as usual. So we told her.
~~three hours later~~
"Supper!" Maggie called us. Today we were having steaks, Mick's favorite. And Maggie even baked orange cake, Katie's favorite. Maggie was now family to me and Katie. But for Katie she was even more. She was like her mother. She helped her, took her to Doctor appoinments and evem offered to pay for a lot of the baby stuff and the bills. We only agreed she'd pay for a quarter of the bills. I has a lot of money in my bank account, and I was willing to spend it on my sister and her baby. Even if it was Rufus' baby, too. I have to remember that the baby will be more like Katie since she going to raise the baby by herself. I'm so proud of her. The girls of course also agreed to help and obviously me too. This baby will have a giant family. Too bad his grandparents won't be a part of this. Speaking of my parents, I decided that I'm going to visit them tomorrow. I decided it right after we finished telling Katie the whole mystery story and Nina wanted to come with me.
~~tomorrow~~
Nina and I took a cab to my parents house. It was a small, cute house, with white walls and red roof anf a little yard that had a swingset. Perfect house for kids.
We entered the gate and knocked on the door. Mom opened the door. "Fabian!" she said in suprise and grabbed me into a hug. "And who's the young lady with you? Is it your girlfriend? Honey! Fabian and his girlfriend are here!" she yelled towards the kitchen before we managed to speak. At least she was right. My dad appeared on the door. He looked really tired. "Hey, Fabian! How are you?" he grinned at me, but I knew it was a fake grin. "I'm fune, and this is Nina, my girlfriend. Let's get right to it," I was mad at my parents. "How could you kick your own daughter from the house she grew up in? Only because she made a mistake? She saw her boyfriend cheating on her and got drunk! It could happen to anyone! And she trusted you, she needs your help!" they seemed a bit scared.
"It's... it's.. we just don't know what to do... the whole story could affect our reputation here. We'll send her money and we'll support her, but we don't want anyone to find out!" I can't believe my parents are doing that. "NO!" I immidately yelled. "if you're ashamed of your daughter... you shouldn't even be parents. Do you know that she's finding out today the gender of the baby? And that the father is a criminal? Me and the rest of Anubis House are her real family. Not you. Come on, Nina, let's go." I said coldly and grabbed Nina's hand as we walked towards the door. We got out to the cab that was waiting for us. There were no shouts of 'Fabian, wait!'. My parents had spoken.
Jerome's POV
I had to tell somthing to Fabian and Nina. It was a Sibuna thing. Katie and Maggie were already back from the doctor, but they wouldn't tell us the gender. Ugh, annoying excitment. Finally, the door was opened anf Fabian and Nina walked in. "Great! You're here!" Maggie said, excited as she pushed them into the living room. "So, guys, you all know today was my first ultra sound. And you probably want to know the baby's gender!" come on, tell already! "so there are two suprises. Maggie is the only one who knows but it's only because she was in with me. The first suprise, which is also the bigger one, is that I'm having twins!" at first we all were shocked. I mean, one mini Rufus is bed enough already, but now two? "Katie, that's great!" Nina broke the silence and then eveyone began to talk at once, hugging and congratulating her. "thank you, guys! I'm really happy you all are so supportive. And now for the second suprise, which isn't really a suprise. The babies' gender! Well, they say that it's a boy and a girl." She said, looking proud. What possibly could she be prouf of? Oh well. Everyone congratulated her. I was way too impatient.
"Well, I'm going to make supper.." Maggie sighed and went into the kitchen. "I'll help you!" Katie squealed and followed a happy Maggie into the kitchen.
"Okay, guys, Sibuna meeting, now!" I anounced quietly and everyone nodded. We followed Nina upstairs to her and Amber's room, which was now also Katie's room.
"So what's up Jerome?" Fabian asked, raising his eyebrow. "So you remember the pink room prank? So today I remembered I still need to paint the dresser back, so I moved it to the middle of the room and where the dresser stood before I moved it was an eye of Horus!" everyone gasped. I did that too when I saw it. "What are we waiting for? Let's go check it out!" Nina said and we all went downstairs.
As we got downstairs I moved the dresser and revealed an eye of horus, like the one in the kitchen. Nina's locket started glowing in a green light and she put it on the eye on the floor. One of the floor tiles moved and revealed a piece of paper. "Read it!" Patricia said, impatient.
For the legend to come true, make it happen.
"Well, this hint sucks. But what is the new mystery? I thought it was over!" Nina sighed. "Hey, what's that?" Fabian shoved his hand into the crack in the floor. He pulled out an old... lamp? "It's like the one on Aladin, you know?" Amber said. "Jasmine is so pretty. I really love Aladin." She giggled. "Amber, you're a genius!" I can't believe Nina just said that. Amber's a genius? And I'm a warm, sharing guy. So not. "We need to rub it!" Joy said and rubbed the lamp. nothing happened. "or maybe we shouldn't?" she seemed concerned. "Or," Fabian suggested, "it's like the dictionary? Maybe it only works for the chosen one, in this case, Nina?" we all nodded and Nina grabbed the lamp and rubbed it. Suddenly, smoke came out of the lamp and we all began coughing. "Hey! Something's happening to the lamp! It... it changes!" this was the last thing I heard befor I blacked out.
Ella's POV
Oh my god! Jerome blacked out! The smoke was fading and Nina held a weird object. It was gold, like the lamp and had blue and grey stains on it. It was now in the shape of a cube and had a horn sticking out of it. It was so weird. But I'm still worried about my boyfriend. He's the only one who fainted.
Finally, Jerome was waking up. "W-what happened?" he mumbled. He's cute even like that. "You blacked out, are you okay?" he was still pale but I could see him blushing a little. "Oh, it's just, since I was little it's hard for me to breath when there's smoke." I nodded. He was telling the truth. "So what's that?" he pointed at the weird object. "We don't really know." Mara said while observing it. "I think it's an aliens object but no one believes me.." Alfie said, frowning. Everyone else rolled their eyes.
"Supper!" Maggie called us. We sighed. "So, tomorrow in the clearing, after breakfast? Maggie is going shopping for grocerries and Katie is coming with her." Fabian said. We all nodded and went to eat supper. Jerome and I were the last ones to leave the room. "I was worried about you" I whispered in his ear. "Never be worried about me, I'll always come back to you" he said softly and kissed me on the lips. We saw camera flash and heard "This is so going to your scrapbook!" squeal. Amber. But we just ignored her and continued kissing.
So, longest chapter I've ever written. I'm on page five right now. I decided to try a little mystery so I hope you're going to like what's coming next. I hope I'll like it. I'm sorry for the worst hint ever. I need to learn new words before I can make better riddles and hints and stuff. But I'll keep trying. I repeat something I hadn't said in a long time. I'm sorry for my really bad English. School starts in five days and then I'll be learning a better English. Stupid Hebrew... it inluences everything I write! So, hope you like it and please REVIEW!