Honda curse chap 9 (part 1)

Britzie: im thinking I need to change my writing style so might stop my story and work on another my last chapter has low views which leads me to think people aren't interested in the story anymore except those few but besides that review tell me if I should or shouldn't stop the story..

Marie: U CAN'T CANCLE THE STORY I WANTED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN ME AND KYO!

Britzie: have to understand….

Tohru: I think for once that that stupid cat is right we've all gone too far to back out now

*kyo and yuki nod their heads

Britzie: I'll see but I need the reader's opinion not just yours

Marie: I DON'T KNOW WHOSE READING THE STORY BUT BRITZIE IS GOING TO CANCLE IT SO EVEN IF U READ THE FIRST PARAGRAPH JUST READ IT SO SHE WON'T CANCLE THE STORY…

Britzie: anyway… on to the story…..also I don't own fruits basket except my characters

Place jump: school 7 days til the festival

Everyone was busy preparing for the festival, in classroom 1d everyone was deciding what to do for their rice ball stand…..

"Everyone I happy to announce we have past the sanitary test and we can open up the riceballstand"tohru stated to the class, everyone was excited "now all we need to do is work out what flavour rice balls we should sell, any suggestions would be helpful "tohru responded "how about 3 in 1 flavour rice balls "yuki asked "that's a good idea "tohru replied smiling "eww 3 flavours in 1 rice ball "megumi complained to 2 and 3 "yea imagine if u got leeks, miso and beef" 2 answered pulling a face the trio laughed, suddenly a metal pipe slammed in to megumi's desk "isn't there a rule about bringing metal pipes to school" megumi responded freaking "how about a rice ball battle "marie yelled standing up "?"everyone was confused, "rice ball battle no killing but even if u break a arm or leg u still have 2 fight for the riceball"marie stated with a look in her eyes "that wouldn't work "class complained "how about a hit and miss 'tohru asked the class "yea" everyone agreed "oh yea sure take her idea "marie complained "come down mar mar"a boy in class replied, everyone surrounding marie messing with her, tohru looked at marie with this look of admiration in her eyes "I need to go to a student council now can u finish up here "tohru asked the guy next to her "sure" he responded "wait tohru I wanted to ask more question"a kid called out and everyone tried to ask tohru their question, marie was getting pissed off, a girl turned to see marie surrounded with cats "aww look at mar mar"the girl stated "where the cats come from "another one asked, marie stormed out of the classroom, kyo looked at marie….

Place jump: roof

Kyo climbed the ladder to see marie laying down with kitty snuggling next to her "I knew I find u up here "kyo stated scarring marie "why can't u just say hello like a normal person "marie added annoyed, kyo sat next to marie "sorry I was worried about you "kyo mumbled "why u be worried about me "marie asked "because I feel close to you and I want to make u happy "kyo replied smiling "I hate tohru I envy her she always get everything she wants and me I get nothing" marie stated staring at the sky …..

Place jump: tohru/yuki

"tohru wait up "yuki called after her , tohru turned around "yes yuki "tohru asked smiling cause yuki was here "I wanted to ask why u hate marie soo much "yuki asked tohru's smile dropped a notch "well I envy marie even though she want to be a member of the zodiac she should be happy where she is a zodiac doesn't have that freedom as marie does almost anyway marie should be glad to not be a zodiac it allows her to be able to talk and get to no people better us for us zodiacs we lack the confidence to do that "tohru responded looking down "well another thing thank you for ur help in the festival without ur leadership we wouldn't have a rice ball stand "yuki replied smiling "thank you yuki that's the nicest thing someone's ever said to me 'tohru finished smiling at yuki

Place jump: bel's house

Kyo was in the kitchen making rice balls while tohru finished something when marie came in "what are u turning this place into a rice ball stand "marie asked shocked at how many rice balls there was, marie grabbed a rice ball "wait that's a leek riceball"kyo stated, marie spat it out "why u make something like that "marie yelled, kyo smiled "well that's a miss rice ball duh"kyo answered "what eves I'll make a plain 1"marie added and walked to the rice make and made a rice ball "wow ur good marie at rice ball making "kyo complicated "nothing to get worked up about "marie answered and ate her plain rice ball "well since ur good at making them can u help me finish them tohru finishing her homework with help of yuki "kyo asked "fine "marie agreed, the two made rice balls and joked around having a good time lil did they know that bel was spying on them (hehe young love)marie thought and looked away and left

Time jump: day of the festival (morning)

Marie was measuring the stand to make sure it was even "it's not even "Marie yelled "it doesn't matter mar mar"a boy replied "yea u talk tough but underneath ur a good person with a soft spot for animals" another boy teased "they went my cats!"Marie yelled, on the other side of the classroom "why is it when a orange tops around I get a headache "uo complained, "oh tohru "some fan girls called "yes "tohru answered unsure "we wanted to give u a gift we all pitched in todaa "they spoke and held a big pink poofy dress, with poofy sleeves ,frill and even a poofy jacket,tohru just stood there shocked…..

Britzie: im cutting this part in 2 causes it's too much so pt. 2 is up tomorrow maybe if the story continues

Marie: plz read to save the story plz

Tohru: we really like this story so plz thankyou

Britzie: good bai